Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Mohabbatein! - Page 41

Hey guys - i just wanted to ask that my old ff is still open and not locked yet so i was jsut thinking that should i continue this one too and finish off the other one 😃

Do post yur views 😛

Read the last 2 updates...what to say..as usual gr8 epi's... 👏

Yes I think that u should end the previous one nicely n as well continue this one as u r doing

Originally posted by: diya7000

Read the last 2 updates...what to say..as usual gr8 epi's... 👏

Yes I think that u should end the previous one nicely n as well continue this one as u r doing

Hey thanx anu...glad u liked them..but will try and make them more better and interesting to read...😳😃

hopefully..after i finish my A-Level exams..i will finish the other ff off..its left at a angle where it leaves the readers breathless....😉

but....i only got a month left of skool..then its back to IF anf fan-fics...😛😃

hey shirley the parts were really very very nice!! well i think now that mohini's lies have been come out in front of the sweet honeymoon couple 😛 they should well teach her lesson for doing so!

Then this ansh and his evil plottings!! uff 😡 but good that rose and daniels marriage talks are on 😉 😛 Then gosh that guy in torchwood he is still the same than he was before 100 years some things suspense over here isnt it!! 😕 but nice part! 👏

Nice update shirley! 😃 👏 👏
And oh lucky, you just have one month of school but i still have 2 months to go! I just cant wait for summer! 😛 Summer=no school and no tension 😆

Love you!!
Minnie 😉

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

hey shirley the parts were really very very nice!! well i think now that mohini's lies have been come out in front of the sweet honeymoon couple 😛 they should well teach her lesson for doing so!

Then this ansh and his evil plottings!! uff 😡 but good that rose and daniels marriage talks are on 😉 😛 Then gosh that guy in torchwood he is still the same than he was before 100 years some things suspense over here isnt it!! 😕 but nice part! 👏

Hey...yep..i knew that you all would be glad about that...mohini being exposed...i dont wanna keep you all on the edge of yur seats for long..otherwise dat's not fair on you all...😳😃

and i added in this mysterious doctor so..you all wont be bored with the ishq vshq..pyar vyar..and all that stuff..i wanna make it more action packed as well.so we have other different twists to the story..otherwise..rona dhona and separation luv trials..is going to make you all cry and...so on..😳😃

Originally posted by: amina877

Nice update shirley! 😃 👏 👏
And oh lucky, you just have one month of school but i still have 2 months to go! I just cant wait for summer! 😛 Summer=no school and no tension 😆

Love you!!
Minnie 😉

thanx amina...aww...its ok..believe me..when i had 2 motnhs..i thought it was a long time..but one month went so fast...plus after leaving skool..i got exams....after exams..bye-bye...high school....😃😛

lub ya...Nikki..(dat's what all ma friends call me now)😳

Episode 49

(at switzerland, the night comes - karan is reading a book and diya is brushing her hair)

karan(putting the book down): diya..can i talk to you?
diya: sure...who else is there?
karan: erm...look..i didn't know that mohini lied about that - believe me..
diya: look, i'm not angry with you...i'm angry at mohini..because of her..i..i havent been accepted yet by you..
karan i know..
diya: did you.. know..that its only been like a month since we are married but it seemed like eternity when you wouldnt come near me..
karan(sitting closer): i know it was difficult..but..did you know what i went through? i actually..refused to accept this relationship of ours in the true sense..because of her?
diya: i...(hugs him..karan hugs her too..)

(karan carries her and puts her on the bed and turns out the lights and kisses her gently on the cheek and embraces diya and diya holds onto him tightly...karan gently lays diya down and is on top of her and then hugs her)

(meanwhile, mohini is following them and sees that the room is dark...)

mohini: why is the whole room dark?
(she gets her phone and rings diya's number...in the room, karan holding diya in his arms and are together..diya sees the phone vibrating on the dressing table..)

diya: erm..karan...my phone is ringing...
karan:(whispering): leave it...for tonight's sake...dont...just..leave it...i want tonight to be about us two..(karan then lets diya's hair spread across the pillows and kisses her)

(mohini hungs up as diya is not picking up)

mohini: what is going on? what are they doing?

(then thunder starts to clap and lightening is starting...the lightening flashes and through this mohini sees diya asleep in karan's arms..mohini is heartbroken)

(she goes walking along the street in the rain and and just kneels down and starts crying loudly...)

mohini(crying): this can't be happen! this can't be happening!! Tum Mere Ho..Karan..sirf mere..tum kisi aur ki nahin ho sakti..how...dare you..give my place..to her??!!!

mohini(gets up and wiping her tears): main vaada karti hoo..diya..jitni ansoon mere ankhon mein hai...unn mein se kahiin ziada tumhare ankhon mein hoge...main..main tumhe sharap deti hoo..yeh mera badwua hai...

(back at the office...anu and kashish are discussing other business proposals)

anu: ok beta...the other contract will be coming up soon..and we have to erm..get the quotation marks for that..but...we need to think of a new product...that will really make a gud profit..
kashish: ok...erm...i thought of sponsoring vending machines or events in some colleges or schools..in that way..we can get more profit..
anu: thats good..a good start..kashish...so..erm..why don't you discuss some of this with Kavya?

(kashish remembers what Swayam told her the other day)

kashish: erm..papa..i prefer to discuss this with amina and sia..rather than the others...at first..if you dont mind..
anu: ok..as you wish..but do discuss it with him at some point..ok?
kashish: ok papa..

(kashish leaves and walks over to kavya's cabin..and stands there for a minute..)

kashish(sighs): ok..here it goes..(knocks on the door)
kavya(from inside): come in
kashish(opening the door): its me
kavya(luking down): right, what do you want?
kashish(putting the file on desk): papa wanted you to discuss this through..so read it and tell me what we should sponsor or not..we have a meeting tomorrow..
kavya: ok..

(kashish turns away to leave the cabin..and leaves and shuts the door behind her..where she sees swayam)

swayam: what were you doing in there?
kashish: erm..i had to hand in a file to Kavya
swayam: why?
kashish: because papa told me to
swayam: you could have asked me to do it..
kashish: swayam! look, stop acting like you are my boss ok? because you are not..anyways..it is not even proved that kavya gave those quotation marks..
swayam: but...
kashish(interrupting): let me speak..ok? anyways..such small contracts don't come in the way of a frienship that has existed for 18 years...
swayam: kashish..but i was only looking out for you..and..
kashish: i dont need you...ok?

9kashish leaves while swayam feels angry)

swayam(thinking): She hasn't listened to me. She still trusts Kavya...once this Kavya betrays you Kashish - I promise..the first one you will run to for support...will be me!

(when everyone is at home atfer office and work..the two parents discuss Daniel~Rose's marriage)

anu: look mihir..me and prerna need to have a word with you..
mihir: about what?
anu: erm...we want to get our rose married..
tulsi: oh thats great - it will be ncie to see Rose married..hmm?
prerna: erm..about that tulsi...we want Daniel and Rose together..married..

(mihir and tulsi exchange looks)

tulsi: what?
prerna: yeah
tulsi: rose for our daniel..?
anu: yes
mihir: I think erm..we need to talk to Daniel about this...

(daniel who is on his phone)

daniel: yeah..i know..that was so funny...it wasnt me..you know...yug..seriously...you..need a lesson..
mihir: daniel!
daniel: listen..i have to go..yeah..see you at the base..tomorrow..(hungs up): ye dad?
tulsi: beta..we wanna get you married..
daniel(shocked): married? to who? with who? when?
mihir: easy..easy...anurag and prerna discussed this with us..and we want to know..whether its ok..with you if you and rose get married...
daniel: me? with rose? hmm...i, er, don't mind..ok..i'm alright with it..
mihir: ok..erm..
daniel: tc..(leaves with a smile on his face)

(rose wearing specs is reading the seventh Harry Potter book)

prerna: rose?
rose: uh-ha?
prerna: beta..idhar aao..
rose: hold mum..this is unmissiable...
prerna: later..(takes the book away from her)
rose: oh..no...Mum..i was nearly there...harry potter was going to...
prerna: come on..rose..

(rose follows prerna)

rose: yes dad?
anu: beta..we talked to daniel about this..and he has no objections..erm...are you ok with getting married..to daniel?
rose(luking down): erm..erm...erm...no problem..(smiles)
tulsi: really?
rose: yes..i'm ok with it...

(daniel goes upstairs to his room..behind the door...there is Renuka waiting)

renuka: hi daniel..
(daniel turns around and sees her)
daniel: oh hi..
renuka: how you doing?
daniel: erm...fine..fine..what are you doing here?
renuka(twirling her hair around fingers): waiting..for you..

(daniel looks up at her)

daniel(thinking): dodgy...very dodgy..ok..daniel..have to get rid of her..
renuka: you look worried..
daniel(moving away): erm..you know..you are in a guy's room..which is..erm.not a gud thing..
renuka: you r so sweet...
daniel; erm...thanx..but..that's someone else's line..

(tulsi calls daniel from downstairs)

tulsi: DANIEL! COME ON...
daniel: coming...sorry..erm..gotta go...
(daniel leaves0
renuka: oh..its ok..sooner or later..we will be together..in this house..(grins)

How was that, guys?

Precap: Kashish and Kavya are confused over what is the truth, meanwhile Renuka is hellbent in taking Rose's place in Daniel's life and Sujal promises Shravan to take revenge for his death.

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Originally posted by: Shirley

Hey thanx anu...glad u liked them..but will try and make them more better and interesting to read...😳😃

hopefully..after i finish my A-Level exams..i will finish the other ff off..its left at a angle where it leaves the readers breathless....😉

but....i only got a month left of skool..then its back to IF anf fan-fics...😛😃

Ur updates r really good..no need to thank me..thank urself for ur skill😊

All d best 4 ur exam....yeah I am waiting(holding my breath)4 the other one 2 finish...

Only 1 month..no prob...I'll wait...