Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Mohabbatein!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Mohabbatein

Love Stories...which live forever......

Character List

(all the boys r brothers and all the gals r sisters, every1 is 16yrs old)

(David Tennant) Daniel

(Ejaz Khan) Kavya

(Karan Grover) Karan

(Karan Grover) Arjun

(Rahil Azam) Aditya

(Rahil Azam) Sohan

(Karan Grover) Rahul

(Rajeev Khandelwal) Sujal

(Hrithik Roshan) Vikram

(Karan Grover) Akshat

(Karan Grover) Angad

(Rahil Azam) Rohan

(Shirley) Rose

(Tashu) Kashish

(Diya7000) Anu

(Poonam_kg) Poonam

(Mastang) Amal

(karanneha4ever) Marriyam

(Tunna) Tuhina

(Amina_877) Amina

(Gauri) Gauri

(Ziddi) Mamta

(sweet priya) Priya

(sweet_mita) Mita

(sizziling_souls) Gunjan

(sia_lovely) Sia

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok dear 😊 characters into to hogayi now start the rocking 😳 ff.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yay new ff šŸ˜›
i know its gonna be gr8 as ur other ff 😃 šŸ˜‰

and gr8 intro! šŸ‘

thanks 4 including me shirley😳

love u

Amina

Edited by amina877 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Episode 1

(The Childhood years: 6 yrs old)

(Daniel~Rose)

rose: ok..then..cinderella...lets get ready for the ball..shall we?
daniel: oii...not yet..she has to do the work...cinderella always does the work..
rose: she done lots of work...she doesnt need anymore...
daniel: ok..now...get her ready..
rose: all ready on it...(puts her the dress on the doll): she's ready..
daniel: get her in the carriage...and i will get Prince Charming...
rose: fine...
daniel(holding the doll): hello..cinderella...shall we dance? and then dont forget to drop yur slipper at the end..
rose(fussy): NO!!! you r ruining it all....not ment to be like that...
daniel: alright...then..calm down...come on then...get dancing...you two...

(daniel and rose make the two dolls dance)

rose: oh..midnight...she has to go home...
daniel: make her drop the slipper...
rose: oh..yeah..(bangs the doll against the floor)...its not cummin off!!
daniel: give it to me..(delibrately pulls the shoe off): there you go...
rose: come on..cinderella...lets run..well...daniel...make the prince run after her..
daniel: ok..(makes the doll run after the cinderella)
rose: no..u r doing it wrong...he has to pick up the shoe..first...
daniel: uff...fine...
rose: ok..later..the enxt day..the prince comes around to try the shoe on...every girl..
daniel: lets cut to the chase..come on..cinderella...

(next: Kavya~Kashish, both riding on the swing)

kavya: kashish?
kashish: what? what is it?
kavya: if you r feeling squashed, then i can get off and i can push you..
kashish: no..i'm ok..i like it this way...(smiles)
kavya(smiles back): so do i...
kavya: kashish...lets go..and jump really hard and good on my parents' bed...
kashish(mischevious smile): yeah...lets go...

(both go to kavya's parents' bedroom..and jump on the bed..ruining all the tidiness...and then laugh together)

(Next scene: Karan~Diya)

(both are playing up in a tree)

karan: so..diya...i think..we should go..now...right?
diya: yeah..wait a minute...let me get all the toys..as well..(grabs the bag of toys)
karan: ok...going down..(jumps down): come on..then...
diya: ok..coming down..(jumps)
(karan makes a painful face)

diya: what happened?
(karan is silent)
diya: karan..tell me...what happened?
karan(painfully): you..jumped...on...my toe...!!
diya(moving away): i'm sorry...
karan: its ok..lets go...

(Next: arjun~marriyam)

(marriyam tickles arjun..and arjun pushes her in self-defence..into the mud)

marriyam(in the mud): you..ruined my dress!!!
arjun: well...you knew i'm ticklish...so why did you tickle me so much that i had to push you?
marriyam(shouts): U DIDN'T HAVE TO DO ANYTHING!!!
arjun: of course..i had to..otherwise..i might have been in the mud...
marriyam: uff...i'm not talking to you now!!! hmph!
(gets upset and walks out in anger)

arjun: marriyam...i said i'm sorry...
marriyam: no..no..no...no aplogies aceepted...
arjun: apologies....not aplogies..
marriyam: thats what i said..aplogies...
(arjun laughs)
marriyam: you...making fun out of me!!!

(Next: aditya~amal)

amal: luk at these kiddies...making all this mess..uff...god...so much mess...
aditya: here..i will help you...dont worry...
amal(stopping him): ooii...no...u boys..make more mess...than these kiddies...i dont need yur help..

(aditya sits down with a upset luk)

amal(going upto him): i'm sorry....(holds her ears): i'm so sorry...
aditya(smiles): its ok..lets...get this mess tidied up..shall we?
amal: yeah..

(both clear up the mess..and co-operate with each other 😃 )

(Next: sohan~Tuhina)

sohan: ok...here...nice painting..of spiderman....YAY!!
tuhina: ok..give me..the brush..there...
sohan: ok..(gives her the brush)
tuhina: is it washed?
sohan: yep..
tuhina: sure..?
sohan: yeah...man...
tuhina: ok..(brushes her painting with it..but ruins it all)
tuhina: no..its all pink now...uff...
sohan: well..who said use pink now??? huh?
tuhina: its yur fault...u gave me that brush..and ruined it all...
sohan: well..u asked me...to give the brush to you...not my fault..
tuhina: uff...
sohan: me too...uff

(Next: Rahul~Poonam)

(poonam is playing with the thomas the tank engine train)

rahul: hey...my thomas the tank engine...
poonam: well..it was just there...so...i thought i might play with it..
rahul: but its my toy...u cant play with it...ok?
poonam: fine...who wants to play with yur toys anyway?
(throws his train toy across the room)

rahul: heeyyyy!!!
poonam: serves you right!!! hmph!
(poonam leaves)
rahul: I hate girls...

(Next scene: Sujal~Amina playing tag)

sujal:ok..amina...you have to catch me...you r it...
amina: ok..(running): i'm going to catch you...sujal..u cant run...for long..(then falls)
sujal: oh..amina...are you alright?
amina: oh..i think i hurt my knee...
sujal: oh..here...i'll give you a hand...(helps her up)
amina: thank you..
sujal: no worries...friend...
amina: best friends forever?
sujal: yeah...best friends forever..(both smile)

(mamta and gauri scene)

(the parents here are anu-prerna)

prerna: anurag...khana laga du?
anu: haan laga do..

gauri(whispers): mamta?
mamta:kya?
gauri: mama khana laga rahe hai...chalo help kar thi hai..yeah?
mamta: yeah..lets go...

(gauri starts taking everything out of the fridge and puts it on the dining table)

gauri: chalo...strawberries..hogaya...yoghurt..hogaya..
mamta: rotis bana rahe hoo...main..(scatters all the flour everywhere)
mamta: tasty rotis ban rahe hai...taste karo..gauri...
gauri: nahin..abhi nahin...dinner ready ka rahe hoo..(takes out the marmalade)
gauri: marmalade ki zaroorat hoge..shayad koi log..nashta karenge...subha se kuch nahin khaya hoga...yeah..

(prerna comes in the kitchen)

prerna: argh!! yeh kya ho raha hai...? mamta...chalo...(takes her inside)

(gauri comes out after mamta)

(rest of the kids cum down and greet prerna and anuraag)

kashish: Papaaaa!
anuraag: aaah..kashish beta..idher ao papa ke paas
(kashish sits in his lap)
anuraag: kya khana hai beta?
kashish: kuch naye papa, maine pepsi peeni hai
(anuraag gives her pepsi and kashish is drinking it, and mihir-tulsi come(the boys parents))

mihir: chalo bachon humari flight ka time hogaya hai...
rose(shocked): flight????
daniel: haan, hum kuch dhair ke liye america jaa rehe hai...
rose(angry): aur tum mujhe abh bataa rehe ho?????
daniel: fikhar mat karo main tumhe har roz email karoonga
rose: u beta

kavya(upset): bye kashish, chalo darvaazay pe mujhe chornay nahin aogi...
kashish(upset as well): haan...(gets off anyraags lap)...chalo
kavya: okay bye....(kisses kashish on the cheek), i'll miss u....

(all the virani guys get into the car and wave to their friends)

Amina: voh sab vapis kabh ayenge?
Prerna: pata nahin beta
Diya: aur humhe pata bhi nahin tha, varna main us ke angootay pe paon nahin rakti... 😳

Precap: Ten yrs go by...and the virani boys step into london, all friends now r 16 yr olds.

Howz that ppl?

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww tht was soo sweet 😳
lovely part shirley!! šŸ‘

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Posted: 19 years ago
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AWesome intro & gr8 part šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: amina877

awww tht was soo sweet 😳
lovely part shirley!! šŸ‘

thanx amina dear!😳😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: diya7000

Ok dear 😊 characters into to hogayi now start the rocking 😳 ff.

yep..going to satrt episode 2😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx!😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx 😃

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