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Posted: 18 years ago
Precap: Sujal~Amina share new memorable moments between themselves, meanwhile Swayam thinks of new ways to break up Kavya~Kashish's friendship and Renuka~Ansh finally succeed in their mission.
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Posted: 18 years ago
i'll update episode 51 tomorrow - vaada! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Yay glad to see to back shirley! 😃 🤗
😳 😳 I love this episode so much and you know why!So romantic!😳 😳 😳 Thanku so much for the wonderflul wedding!!😳😳
I hope everything is going gr8 with you!! 😛
Love you!!! 😃 🤗 🤗

Edited by amina877 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amina877

Yay glad to see to back shirley! 😃 🤗
😳 😳 I love this episode so much and you know why!So romantic!😳 😳 😳 Thanku so much for the wonderflul wedding!!😳😳
I hope everything is going gr8 with you!! 😛
Love you!!! 😃 🤗 🤗

Hey Minnie!🤗🤗

i'm fine...everything is alright..i couldnt come here..because my internet was messed up...so sorry for the long wait...😳😊

hey..no thanx 4 the wedding..yeh tho hona hi tha....haina?😛😉

tc...Love you!!🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Saniya*

great part continue soon 😃

thanx saniya😃😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 51

(Sujal~Amina arrive in Spain the other day)

amina(luking around): hey sujal..look over there..(points): its so beautifl..haina?
sujal: hmm...thats why i brought you here..

(amina holds sujal's hand as they walk by..sujal feels awkward as he holds her hand too)

amina: where do we go..first?
sujal: erm...i thought..we might go there..(points): to a hotel..first freshen up..and unpack..then start going wherever we want..
amina: ok..(smiles): what are we waiting for?

(both go to a hotel)

sujal: erm...i'm Sujal Virani..i booked two rooms..

amina: hey..sujal?
sujal: what?
amina: was it just me or did you say "two rooms"?
suja: yes i did
amina: but why?
sujal: look amina - you love me..right?
amina: yeah
sujal: and..i...love you too..
amina: so..whats the problem?
sujal: but i think our new relationship needs more time...you know..shravan's death and everything...ok?
amina: sure...i'll be waiting..(smiles)
sujal: thanx..

(both go to their individual rooms which is next door to each other..amina in her room just sits on her bed and thinks of past moments between her sujal..the song "samjho na" comes on..)

(suddenly..sujal comes ou of nowhere behind her)

amina: sujal? what are you doing here?
sujal: wherever you are..thats where i'll be..(smiles..and puts his arms around her amina closes her eyes and opens them to see that was all a dream)

amina(thinking): You've changed! Completely changed, Sujal! Is he the same Sujal who I knew from childhood? The same Sujal who I loved?

(next door, Sujal is planning new tricks in his mind to take revenge on Amina)

sujal: how? how should i do it? kill her? no...what will be the difference between her and me then/ erm...thats it! Ill turn her mad...play tricks on her mind and she will slowly and slowly go mad..

(back as he turns around he sees himself with Amina - like they used to be..totally in love..sujal cant bear to see this..and gets angrier)

sujal(in illusion): i love you..i will always love you..

(sujal grabs a vase and throws it where he sees himself and amina..then there's a knock on the door)

sujal(opening the door): who is it?
amina: its me..
sujal: oh what are you doing here?
amina: i heard a noise..something falling and breaking then you yelled..
sujal: i didn't..
amina: you did..i heard you..
sujal: erm..that must have been in my sleep..
amina: sujal..are you feeling ok?
sujal: yes..
amina: hold on..

(puts her hand on his forehead)

amina: i dont think you are well..lie down..
sujal: i'm fine..seriously..
amina: tell you what..i'll stay here..with you..
sujal(shocked): what?
amina: but i'll be on the sofa..ok?
sujal:..erm..o-ok...

(she gets a thermometer and and plcces it in his mouth..and reads it which tells her sujal's got a fever)

amina: its a fever..i cant leave you in this condition..
sujal: but we were gonna go out..so..you shoudl go..
amina: no..ot until you..get well..

(sujal begins to wonder why he is feeling different to when amina comes in front of him)

(back at sinha house...kashish is working on the business proposals)

kashish: erm..kavya?
kavya(turning around): oh..yeah..what is it?
kashish: kavya..i jsut heard from yur dad and papa..that there is a meeting tomorrow..and you know..sujal and amina are not available either..so..be there..(smiles)
kavya(thinking): first time..she's smiling at me..ever since the contract..
kashish: take care..see you..
kavya(grabbing her hand): erm..kashish?
kashish: what?
kavya: for some days i may not have been talking to you properly..so..erm...sorry about that..i was a bit too busy..
kashish: its ok..me too..
kavya: ok..i'll see you at the meeting tomorrow..
kashish: yeah..same here..

(kashish leaves the room...swayam sees all this and is furious)

swayam(thinking): The contract incident didn't work - but..Karan..and diya will amke a fine target to break these two up..

(swayam goes to see mohini who is sitting in her room)

swayam: so..already with ideas on how to break up karan and diya?
mohini: no...most of those ideas have failed..and how..how do i do it?
swayam: i know..
mohini: what..then tell me?
swayam: well..listen..

(swayam tells her the entire plan...to which mohini approves of)

mohini: oh swayam! i like that..in that way..i'll separate karan and diya..when they do...that will separate kavya and kashish..
swayam: good..

(daniel is coming back fron the shops)

daniel: mum? i done the shopping..like you told me to..
tulsi: oh..thank you..just put them in the kitchen..
daniel: ok..

(daniel finishes putting the shopping away when ansh comes in)

ansh: hey..daniel..
daniel: hey...
ansh: daniel..can i say something..if you don't mind..
daniel: what is it?
ansh: i don't think you should marry rose..
daniel(surprised): really? why is that?
ansh: because...you are not really worthy of marrying a girl like her..
daniel: concidetally..you and renuka are sayign the same thing..is it deliberate or..
ansh: no..no..erm...listen...

(sejal passes by and hears the conversation)

ansh: i..think...rose gave the contract details of ours to the opponent..
daniel(angrily): that's enough! for some reason, you may not like it that i'm getting married to her..
ansh: OF COURSE I DONT!!
daniel: why is that?
ansh: because..Renuka loves you...my friend loves you...
daniel(shocked): what?
ansh: she can't stand you getting married to someone else
daniel: but i...i love someone else
ansh: but daniel...

sejal(thinking): oh...yeh tho bada acha chance mila hai mujhe..ghar ka ek aur chakar chalana...koi baat nahin renuka...tum ek din iss ghar ki bahu zaroor banoge..

(sejal goes upstairs and tells renuak of eveything..renuak locks herself in her room..and oes over to the draw)

sejal(banging on the door): renuka? ren! suno...suno!! dan..

(daniel rushes upstairs)

daniel: what happened?
sejal: renuka..locked herself up in there...she heard that you will neevr marry her..and..
daniel: hold on..(banging against the door): open...it up renuka! ok..stay back..(gets back and kicks the door open..and the whole virani family sees renuka's wrists bleeding all over)

daniel(thinking): renuka..what have you done?
ansh(thinking): hogaya kaam!!

How was that, guys?
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Posted: 18 years ago
Precap: The Sinhas are furious at the Viranis' new decision, while Vikram~Sia decide to put things back how they used to be and Gauri is alerted about the Doctor.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Love it!!! 👏
I just hope that sujal realizes his mistake soon. 😳
Anyways Shirley its totally fine...you dont have to be sorry at all...Takecare:)
Love you! 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey shirl dear...gr8 parts... 👏 . Post soon...btw how was ur exam?
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amina877

Love it!!! 👏
I just hope that sujal realizes his mistake soon. 😳
Anyways Shirley its totally fine...you dont have to be sorry at all...Takecare:)
Love you! 🤗 🤗

awww..thanx minnie hunny....😃

oh yeah...kahiin na kahiin...to hoga...😉..he will realise his mistakes...lub ya...darling!🤗🤗

P.S. sorry for not replying..got exams...😊

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