Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Mohabbatein! - Page 40

Originally posted by: diya7000

ermmm...actually maine exactly yehi socha tha😆😆..but just read the update..it was just gr8...gr8 going👏..

Ok so u have got time..that's good😳..yeh I know during exams u won't be avialable so much as like this time😕...but what to do exams r exams.😃

awww...tum bhi..lkhen thanx..for yur comments...😳😃

yeah..i have at least a month...😉😛..then for da whole of june..i'm off😭..but at the end of june and beginning of july..i'm back..wohi masti..wohi mohabbatein.wohi hasse or wagera!😳😃

ok ppl - thinking of updating a quick update - Episode 47 😃 😉

Episode 47

(at Torchwood, Pooja and Tosh come in)

pooja: so, tosh, have you found anything about this "doctor"?
tosh: erm..sort of..
pooja: what does..sort of mean?
tosh: well..erm...i saved them on my computer..and i sent them off for printing...copies should be coming out anyways..but..
pooja: ok..lets go out for a while..you know for a break...
tosh: yeah...

(both go out and get some coffee)

tosh(giving her the cup): hold this..pooja...
pooja; sure..
tosh: thanx...

(both get out and tosh sorts her purse out then suddenly a young man bumps into her)

tosh: oii..watch it
man(without turning around): sorry...ma'am..
tosh: oii..you..come back..
man(turns around): what?
tosh: actually..never mind...

(tosh and pooja head back to the building..while the young man walks upto a big blue box 😉he opens up the door and goes in)

tosh(taking her coat off): such a insolent young man...no manners at all..
pooja: leave it tosh..hota hai..anyways..wehre are those copies?
tosh: ah-ha..one minute...

(takes the copies..which are photographs of a special function that happened in London about 100 years ago..back in 1907..)

pooja: and what are we looking for in this photo?
tosh: anything..a guy in the description that Gauri gave in her sleep..

(tosh is looking in the photo..hen she notices a familiar figure...she sees the same young man in the photo the man who bumped into her before...he looked exactly the same..100 years have passed but he looked exactly the same as if he never aged)

tosh: OMG! OMG!
pooja: ok..is it just me..or are you seeing Tom Cruise in here?
tosh: no..do you remember that man who bumped into me earlier on?
pooja: yeah? so?
tosh: describe him..
pooja: hmm...fair skin...brown suit...light brown coat..just like Gauri ssaid...
tosh(points 2 photo): look over there..

(pooja sees the same man and is surprised)

pooja: OMG..thats him..but..this is taken in 1907 and now its 2007...100 years have passed but he is still the same..like he never ages..or..
tosh: i got a horrible feeling that he...he..
pooja: what?
tosh: i dont know...

(kashish is in her room..wondering how their company never got the contract - then swayam comes in)

swayam: hi kashish
kashish: hi swayam - you alright?
swayam: yeah - and you?
kashish: fine...
swayam: we worked so hard?
kashish: pardon?
swayam: i was just saying that we worked so hard to get that contract but we didnt get it...
kashish: hey...this all happens in business...but next time..we will try our best...hmm?
swayam: but...if it wasnt for kavya...we would have got the contract..
kashish: what? what was that?
swayam: erm...luk...kavya...
kashish: kavya did what?
swayam: kavya..erm..
kashish: tell me!
swayam: kavya secretly told our quotation marks to the opposite company..

9kashish is shocked)

kashish: what?
swayam: its true..
kashish: how can you be so sure?
swayam: i heard him..talking on his phone to Mr. Malhotra yesterday night...

(kashish sits down with a depressed look on her face)

swayam: hey..kashish..its not yur fault...
kashish: i..need to be alone..
swayam: but if we need to succeed...you have to stop talking to kavya..act like you never know him..
kashish(upset): ok..but..i need to be alone...

(swayam leaves..while kashish sits alone in her room)

(back at switzerland..karan and diya have gone out for a walk)

karan: a bit cold..today isnt it?
diya: well mister, you knew that switzerland is a cold place and still you complain?
karan(sighs): clever girl..
diya: stop..now..
karan: shall..we get a small snack on the way?
diya: if you want..but we were going to get dinner from room service back at the hotel..remember?
karan: oh yeah...come on..

(as they go by..there is a man who is telling a tale to his friends)

man: and i said that you cant accept yur wife in the next six months and he believed me, You should have seen the look on his face..
man 2: was that really true then?
man; no..i was paid to tell that lie..

(karan and diya hear this..karan gets furious)

karan(angrily): a lie? are you telling me that all that you told me was a lie?
diya: karan..please..lets just go..
man: listen to yur wife..boy..
karan: no..you tell me..why did you tell this lie to me?
man; a woman from yur wife's family told me..
diya: who was that?
man: erm...mohini..i think..

(diya seems angry but remains calm)

diya(holding his hand): karan..lets go...come on..
karan: but..
diya(holding it tighter): come on..now!

(both go back to the hotel...diya takes her shawl off and puts it away)

karan: erm..diya?
diya: what?
karan: erm..i'm really sorry...because..of this lie..i'm even resposible...
diya: for what?
karan: for hurting you..the way i just turned away from you last night was...(hugs her): i'm sorry..i really am...
diya: karan..just leave it..i mean...its bedtime anyway...(turns away..but karan grabs her hand)
karan: you want to accept me..but yur anger wont let you..
diya: karan..plz..
karan: dont speak...(whispers): sshhh....

(back at the sinha house - daniel~rose sit together talking)

rose: so..when are you going back to ..you know?
daniel: oh..the day after tomorrow..i'll be absent until sujal and amina get married..
rose: right..erm..
daniel: oh and another thing.remember..us two going out the other day?
rose: yeah?
daniel: i hugged you..and..erm...i got yur perfume all over me..

(rose starts laughing)

daniel: not funny...rose...
rose: and then what happened?
daniel: kavya smelt it off me..
rose: and?
daniel: i made up an excuse...
rose(sniggering): right..
daniel: next time..i'll makr you smell of my aftershave or something...
rose: really?
daniel: yeah...

(ansh looks at the both of them and feels jealous...prerna comes by)

prerna: ansh..beta..are you ok?
ansh: erm..i'm fine..aunty..and you?
prerna: oh..i'm fine thanks..
ansh: erm...aunty...diya is married...amina will be married..shouldnt yur third daughter be considered next?
prerna: third one? oh..you mean..rose?
ansh: yes...

(prerna turns to look at rose and sees her laughng with daniel)

prerna: i think you are right..its time rose found someone..and believe me..(smiles): i have found someone for her...
ansh: really? who?
prerna: erm..(pauses): erm...shall i tell you?
ansh: yes...
prerna: dnaiel..

(ansh feels utter anger and hatred0

ansh(shocked): w-what?
prerna: imean..look at them both...but...dont tell any1..and if this wedding doesnt happen...i..my heart will be broken forever...

(prerna leaves)

How was that guys?

Precap: Karan~Diya become one, meanwhile the two families arrange Daniel~Rose's marriage and Vikram~Sia brace each other against all the problems.

😳

Nice Parts Shirley! 👏
And yay Daniel and Rose Marriage! 😃 🥳

Good Luck with your studies and everything! 😃 🤗
Takecare 🤗

Originally posted by: amina877

Nice Parts Shirley! 👏
And yay Daniel and Rose Marriage! 😃 🥳

Good Luck with your studies and everything! 😃 🤗
Takecare 🤗

aww...thanx minnie jaan (if i can call you that)😳😛

and yeah....thanx 4 the gud luck wid the studies...just got a month left of skool!🥳😃

ok ppl - updating Episode 48 😃 😉

Episode 48

(vikram just sits quietly in his room..thinking of whats going on in the family)

vikram: I thought of something else and now something else has happened - i...(sighs): what on earth is happening?

(sia hears him and comes in)

sia(putting her hands in jeans pockets): is everything ok, vikram?
vikram: i'm not sure
sia: why? what happened?
vikram: i mean, erm, i thought, when we would get back we can tell mum and dad about us two and how we feel towards each other but...
sia: its ok - carry on..
vikram: but we cant..
sia: why is that then?
vikram: because look, shravan's passed away its been a week or two and on the other hand..karan and diya..
sia: what happened to them?
vikram: erm..
sia: tell me what happened?
vikram: you remember when the priest said that karan and diya cant have a real relationship..
sia; yeah? so?
vikram: that was a lie..
sia(shocked): a lie?
vikram: but who told that lie..i dont know...
sia: well, we have to find out - and we need to stick together...
vikram(holding hands): yeah..thanx sia..
sia: no worries.

(both give a hug to each other, meanwhile mohini overhears this and is furious)

mohini(thinking): Looks like i have to do something...

(back at switzerland...it is morning...karan wakes up and sees diya asleep not in his arms but on the sofa)

karan: great!

(he remembers last night)

last night (karan):diya..why is this so difficult for you?
diya: because...i dont know..i got a bad feeling that if we do accept each other then we will break up..
karan: why do you feel like that?
diya: i dont know why..i just do...

(karan breaks free of the memory and goes to get ready)

(back at sinha house, prerna decides to talk to anurag about rose)

prerna: anu, can i say something?
anu: sure prerna course you can, what is it hunny?
prerna: erm, diya is the eldest and she is married, amina the second is going to go soon..not long and what about rose?
anu: in all good time prerna...whats the rush?
prerna: i found someone for her..i was just wondering whether you approve of him or not..
anu: who?
prerna: Daniel Virani..what do you think of him?
anu: dnaiel..
prerna: hmm..
anu: for rose?
prerna: hmm..
anu: erm...i think they will look good..but..we need to talk to mihir and tulsi bhabhi for this..
prerna: but i was jsut wondering..dont they look good together...
anu: hmm..they do...(smiles)

How was that guys? 😳

Precap: Mohini plans something dreadful against Diya~Karan, meanwhile Kavya~Kashish seem to ignore each other more and more, while Ansh plans to ruin Rose's chances of being with Daniel and Torchwood decides to track more and more of the mytserious Doctor.

😳

Enjoy & stay tuned1
But sorry for giving such a short update! 😭