SS :For the wrong,and for the right COMPLETE,PG89* - Page 70

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Posted: 12 years ago
You just made every wrong right..

Woah!

If Arnav had not taken divorce, if Khushi wouldn't have given herself another chance...all of it would've been a waste.

That...that incident taught her AND him something good.. glad to read about that!

But you left us for the readers to decide if he was in love with her or not!

Well, I think he was. He just walked away then because everything was wrong then... and well, TIME. It plays a major role in such ...relationships.


Khushi is a survivor. Always was. Even in the show.
But she still loves Arnav, right? But this time...for the right reasons and in a right way.. she left him...wanted to give herself and him time when he again met her after 2 years.. or why else would he affect her like that?



And well, as you've left the story at this point, I can't help but feel that this time.. they would give each other a chance for the right reasons?

Though you've ended this in a way that readers can either imagine that they are now just neighbors or imagine them dating and falling for each other again..but in a right way. And for the right reasons.

I don't know how that makes me feel though!


I loved this SS.

Had a request, can we have an epilogue? People might think that an epilogue will not be nice.. but, is it possible for you to write one, for this one?
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Posted: 12 years ago
jst perfect endng dear...
lovd readng every bit ov it...
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thnxxx 4 da pm ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it..immensely...
It was gratifying to read that Khushi has embarked on a new journey..where she has V as her support system..and, those sessions with the doc, sure have proved salubrious...the change is palpable and, I am happy for her...
It left me flummoxed ... I cannot believe that Arnav is her next door neighbor, once again...like they said... let the right happen!!
I have loved being a part of this unconventional story...hope to read another one, ..anon...and, thank you for the PM :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy ending😊
so our khushi recovered and reconciled with arnav , 😊
dont want to know what happened with lav , she would have got someone better

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ending! It's so right (pardon the pun!)...if something starts from a wrong place, it can never really become right. A forgotten principle which you brought to life.


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Posted: 12 years ago
you updated, great
happy ending always make me happy
khushi back to normal 😊
arnav divorced, 😊
khushi and arnav together,😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
OH NO my comment didn't post!!!
nonono

refreshed the page it didn't post ughhh


Edited by Shrutee7 - 12 years ago
reflorated thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shrutee7

OH NO my comment didn't post!!!
nonono

refreshed the page it didn't post ughhh


Shru, you're wasting space OMG you're committing a federal crime 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: V323

Shru, you're wasting space OMG you're committing a federal crime 🤣



-.- Sue me.

For a sec there I thought the bhootni came back but I saw your name and your words had vowels in them (Thank the Lord)

And please throttle my Internet connection I'm actually disappointed :|
Edited by Shrutee7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
right/wrong, arnav and khushi or no arnav and khushi, tragic end or no tragic end, now doesn't matter because I liked the way you ended this story on a positive note, with a little message to the readers and I got it.

It always requires a lot of will power to change the wrongs to rights, khushi did it with her will power. Arnav did not do it with will power, but instead he gathered up some courage and corrected his mistake. So, I guess the story was more about Khushi and Arnav from Khushi's pov.

Whatever, happened that day fateful day was very wrong from every aspect, both Arnav and Khushi were not in their right minds. But at the end I'm glad Arnav manned up and told Lavanya that he yearned for his freedom and took Khushi to the hospital. The attraction is still there but its not something that can be labelled as love that can evolve to commitment. So, I don't think there is any future for arnav-khushi together right now, because I see a woman who is yearning for some kind of stability and security in her life and a man wanting to enjoy his freedom. So maybe not now in near future.

Love this story.

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