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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Okay so basically, I deserve a standing ovation for I delayed a trip to the bathroom and resd. Yes, put your hands together. PUT THEM. To quote Khushi - "f**king twits" 😆

So when this starts, I'm like okay YAY so this is gonna be a simple sweet story with Arnav as the slightly poor and Khushi as his rich(?) and supportive wife. Then I thought maybe the daddy went whoring around so these two eloped. And then I read "Auburn skin"

I'm like ... auburn skin? Thats new. Isn't Khushi supposed to be a snow-white kinda shit? I'm not racist, dude I wanna be auburn myself. Its such a lovely colour to the skin! 😳

Then I read Lavanya. I'm like ... there goes the simplicity by ten percent. And then I read "The marriage is like the house" And in that one line ... I got it.

If I were to put this in a fb status update thing, I'd probably go "Its complicated"

1. Arnav - This guy seems ... kinda snobbish. You know, the kind who's used to comforts, but is suddenly forced to live in a situation not so comfortable. You get what I mean? He's one Arnav Uppitty Raizada, I'm telling you - deciding Khushi is bad looking just based on her piercings and shabbiness. -..-

2. Lavanya is ... I thought she's one of those who's all "glass full hai" kind of person. And then I see that little slip "The marriage is like the house" And I know all that laughter and glee is just put on, a facade. So I'm waiting to see the real Lavanya. Not the Lavanya who's trying to make things easier for them by pretending its still sunshine and rainbows.

3. Khushi - she's Khushi Mawali Gupta, ain't she? Okay so I hate tongue piercings. The idea of them grosses me out. I have an upper piercing and all, and I plan to get my eyebrow pierced. Maybe even a phoenix tattoo on my back, but NOT my tongue. I'd get so grossed. Ewww. Moving on though, I love her. Despite the tongue piercings. We could totally share our apartments. I don't wear pants when I'm sleeping over at my friends' place either. my home is another issue though, moms y'no? I think wearing pants at home is a useless practise. I comb my hair though, I'm not allowed to be this slobby and messy at home. 😆 Mom. -.-

Anyway, so HACKER? I think hackers are very sexy. Its so cool what all you can do when you train your fingers the right way. I know it sounds sexual. Whats your point though?

But there is this air of mystery -

what happened between Arnav and Lavanya?

Also - another thing - Khushi peers through her window and she spots a diamond. And I'm not ready to believe that a woman can spot a diamond anywhere. DUDE THEY LIVE WINDOWS AWAY. So my natural conclusion would be that the rock is big?

My question is ... A and L living in such a bad vala house, then how come she has diamonds that big?

-Vee

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Yeh tu trailer tha, picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!

thanks for the PM ...

and a wonderful surprise from you :)

Edited by nnhk - 12 years ago

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Arnav and Lavanya in a ruined, and scattered marriage both giving a shot to a new house, a new chance to stick together and a few laughs... interesting

Khushi is a badass, independent, pierced all over, hacker... very interesting

And now they are across the window neighbours... very very very interesting.

I'm looking forward to more :)

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nothing's ever straightforward with you is it M?😆

So to put it simply (though its far from simple) - Arnav and Lavanya are married...and their marriage is not going so well either. But hey, they've decided to give it another shot, another chance.

Lavanya tries to hide it all SO well...and yet...her pain and her fear with the future is seen at times.

So what's the real deal between Arnav and La? Cause he doesn't seem too comfortable with everything around him..and seems to be doing it just for the sake of it...as of now.

Khushi...seems really sexy, badass, independant and has that 'I don't care what you think' sort of attitude. I love her. And to top all that...she's a HACKER. COOL. :D

Of course...I'm not going to be making any assumptions as of now...it'll probably be wrong anywayz.😆

Great start M! :D

*off to read chapter two*

Edited by ..SankiMedhz.. - 12 years ago

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

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Posted: 12 years ago

Way! Another story! So excited!

Lavanya and Arnav in a rocky relationship and enters the laidback, carefree hacker for a living- Khushi. Ohhh... this is going to get interesting.

What part will Khushi play in their lives? Will Lavanya and Arnav survive and manage to sucessfully rekindle their relationship? Will Khushi and Arnav's develop a relationship? Is Lavanya always that happy? Will I ever shut up? Errr time for me to stop with the annoying questions.

Looking forward to how the story unfolds.

Edited by ElenaElenor - 12 years ago