SS :For the wrong,and for the right COMPLETE,PG89* - Page 71

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Posted: 12 years ago
It's beautiful! Full paisa wasool read! Thanks for the pm. Pls pm me if you write more and have you decided on giving the links if your FF's to read pls?????!!! Thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just read this story full as I had not received your PM for this...must say, it was a short and sweet one :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
woah woah WOAH!!!! This is NOT what i expected...Sooo happy to see Khushi getting some peace from all her inner turmoil and live a better life! and im happy to see Arnav letting go of Lavanya aswell.. I just wish it ended with a bit more romance between the two..or with a bit more stability in their relationship or whatever they have :D All in all just loved the whole SS...quite different from others! thank you...hope to read more stories from you n wish you re-start the blog... ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! That was a totally out of the box SS and I thoroughly enjoyed
reading it..
Loved how life gave them another chance...and was so happy to see Khushi doing better and dealing with her demons...eveything ended...or should i say begun...beautifully...
I hope you have a lot more coming our way..thanks!
Cheers
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a happy ending of a sort.
Loved this SS, it one of a kind.

looking forward to read more stories from you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...

Great ending...

I'm glad that they met again...

But i wish that you would continue..
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Posted: 12 years ago
unres-ed and commented in page 92!
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Posted: 12 years ago
So I really played the story in my head again and again...am I allowed to say that the ending made me a tad bit sad? I know I have no right to be. It is an Arnav-Khushi ff and it is not surprising that no body really cared what happened to La...She has loving parents who dote on her and she is young, beautiful...so of course her life will be back on track in no time...,She was probably a collateral damage in the grand scheme of events to get Arnav-Khushi a happy ending. But is it impossible to believe that she could have actually loved Arnav and although their decision to get married was hasty, it might have been earnest from La's side. Why did anyone not want to think what pain she had to endure to get out of this sham of a marriage? I know the world does not work that way. Arnav told Khushi that she should not be sorry that he ended up a divorcee. Its true that Arnav played a bigger role in hurting La, but Khushi did share the blame and she felt guilty about that. Arnav' telling her otherwise just made me feel that he did not even respect Lavanya. I fail to empathize with Arnav.

So although I feel happy forKhushi as an individual, somehow the possibility of them getting back together, left me a little uneasy. Humans are flawed and their psyches are often differing shades of grey. I understand that. But maybe as a married woman, though unreasonable, I felt that them getting back together would make right every wrong they had done to La, together, knowingly and uncaring of.

But then again, I can be foolishly idealistic and impractically prudish. Yet I had to say it. Now I'm relieved.😊
Edited by cloverleaf - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cloverleaf

So I really played the story in my head again and again...am I allowed to say that the ending made me a tad bit sad? I know I have no right to be. It is an Arnav-Khushi ff and it is not surprising that no body really cared what happened to La...She has loving parents who dote on her and she is young, beautiful...so of course her life will be back on track in no time...,She was probably a collateral damage in the grand scheme of events to get Arnav-Khushi a happy ending. But is it impossible to believe that she could have actually loved Arnav and although their decision to get married was hasty, it might have been earnest from La's side. Why did anyone not want to think what pain she had to endure to get out of this sham of a marriage? I know the world does not work that way. Arnav told Khushi that she should not be sorry that he ended up a divorcee. Its true that Arnav played a bigger role in hurting La, but Khushi did share the blame and she felt guilty about that. Arnav' telling her otherwise just made me feel that he did not even respect Lavanya. I fail to empathize with Arnav.


So although I feel happy forKhushi as an individual, somehow the possibility of them getting back together, left me a little uneasy. Humans are flawed and their psyches are often differing shades of grey. I understand that. But maybe as a married woman, though unreasonable, I felt that them getting back together would make right every wrong they had done to La, together, knowingly and uncaring of.

But then again, I can be foolishly idealistic and impractically prudish. Yet I had to say it. Now I'm relieved.😊




Cloverleaf, I don't know who you are and where you live, but I freakin' love your thoughts. Now here's an answer- instead of living with a person and wondering what's going on in his mind or what would he be thinking after seeing another walking girl, it's better to leave him rather living your life wondering and thinking and crying. Pain however, is involved in both sides; one can only learn to deal with it. Yes Lavanya was misjudged and was treated cruelly in the end, but this is how life teaches you, by making you fall for some wrong reasons that you chose and thought were right, and then making you stand up and see more clearly, the right and the wrong.

Hope it clarifies :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: masam




Cloverleaf, I don't know who you are and where you live, but I freakin' love your thoughts. Now here's an answer- instead of living with a person and wondering what's going on in his mind or what would he be thinking after seeing another walking girl, it's better to leave him rather living your life wondering and thinking and crying. Pain however, is involved in both sides; one can only learn to deal with it. Yes Lavanya was misjudged and was treated cruelly in the end, but this is how life teaches you, by making you fall for some wrong reasons that you chose and thought were right, and then making you stand up and see more clearly, the right and the wrong.

Hope it clarifies :)


Hi Masam,
Well thank you for liking my comment. Means a lot to me. I get your point. I never expected Lavanya and Arnav to get back together. More for Lavanya's sake than Arnav's. She deserved better than a lying, cheating, sorry excuse of a husband that Arnav had been to her. We all make mistakes and we cannot hold on to them forever. We have to let go of our guilt/regret eventually and move on with our lives. It is luck that has brought Arnav & Khushi back into each other's lives and this time around they probably have a better shot at happiness. So I salute these two women, but it is the man who I felt got out of it, practically unscathed. I mean yes he had to go through a messy divorce, but he never really wanted to be married to La. So he cheated on his newly wed wife, divorced her and now by divine intervention he has again come to the door of the woman he had most likely fallen in love with. There is nothing wrong there, just a little unfair I think. But then again, who am I decide that? If I can't feel happy for Arnav at least I should let him be. Poetic justice be damned! 😉
Edited by cloverleaf - 12 years ago

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