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haminasto

@haminasto

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wats with men becoming lions wen wife's not around!!!?

now show all Latin bravery n be safe Arnavji!!!!!!!!!!

is the child serving for the missing Khushi-ness in here?...

waiting...

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Thank you for telling beforehand that its a happywala ending😊

Not in a mood sad kahani...

Nice narrative...when will khushiji reach arnav.

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vandana73

@vandana73

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Arnav answered that boy's queries inspite of having fever and headache just because he had Khushi's eyes!
As soon as train ride was mentioned I envisioned an accident
So sad to read about it
Thank god u are giving it a happy ending relievef actually
Waiting for the next part

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happy_cupcake

@happy_cupcake

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

superb narration

but sad story 😭

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Firstly , thank you for dropping the PM, Vee!!

A captivating update...

The title is beffitting...so like Arnav...loved the intricacies... Khush...the boy with the hazel eyes...very endearing, with such innocent queries... waiting to be rescued along with Arnav...he is Arnav's guardian angel...and, reading about the details of the train accident was unnerving...waiting to read the next...

Edited by Aanchal15 - 12 years ago

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Bushra

@cmileyfreaky

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

HOLY SHIT Vee! i loved it!

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

The whole train accident followed by Arnav dragging himself out was written so well by you ,, its kind of haunting me in my mind !!😕

Whats the connection between Arnav and Khush ?? Some thing freaky !!!

PS:Glitter not updated since so long ???😭

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: _disha_
The whole train accident followed by Arnav dragging himself out was written so well by you ,, its kind of haunting me in my mind !!😕

Whats the connection between Arnav and Khush ?? Some thing freaky !!!

PS:Glitter not updated since so long ???😭

I have exams, I wrote this to blow off steam 😆 Glitter on 28th, pakka 😃