Three Shot - Fortitudo || Complete

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Arati

@RTlicious

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Loved this...the emotions and feelings were very raw...you described the derailment very well...i could actually imagine all that happening...

So, what's gonna happen to arnav and the boy? and the boys mother and brother? Can't wait for the next one!

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Wow its awesome V!
U make a train ride feel a spooky lol
Thank god no sad endiNg
I wonder abtt the lil khush

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

oh wow! that was a dramatic first part! Cant wait to see what else you have in store!

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Hey I added a bit to my comment on page 3

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rima

@rima

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

exquisitely written and narrated

hope the next part matches the momentum

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

An intriguing shot which is written in an amazing manner.

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

arnav and khush

khush have so many similarities with arnav Khushi

what u plan?

please update soon

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richa1792

@richa1792

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Hola..!!

This is my first time reading any of your works.!!

And well, its GOOD.!!

At first i thought, Arnav was married to Khushi.!

Then when there was this child with the hazel eyes and "Khush" as his name, i was not so sure.

May be khushi was not in his life any,ore and this was his kid? Long shot i know, butu still.!!

And now that you have promised a happy ending, well yayyy..!!!!

Amazing update.

Richa.

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AMNP

@AMNP

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Very interesting...seems like there is some kind of connection between Arnav and Khush...very curious to know the next part ..pls update soon 😊.

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

I loved the start...it was intriguing...
Has arnav lost his legs??...curious to knw abou khush...
Update soon..

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