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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Thre seems to be some connection between arnav and d boy... some kinda mysterious thing... and ur tone quite scares me...theres a kind of impasse here... waiting for part two.
Nice and intriguing. ..

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dilectus

@dilectus

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

where are you taking it Vee??

Why can i feel that Arnav's wife here not meant khushi??

ofcourse i will be more than happy if i am proven wrong.

will the child be made orphan too?? or here ASR will save the child from a fate like him, a fate of an orphan, of being alone, of growing up too fast??

god..am so demanding and pushy..aint I??

P.S.: HAYE BABAJI!! mera 400th post hai ye!!! haye main mar gayi!!!!😃

Edited by dilectus - 12 years ago

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

V 323...IT WAS HEART WRENCHING ...TOTALLY ALAG

CONTINUE

N WHERE ARE OTHER UPDATES ??

THANKS FOR THIS ONE

KEEP ME ALERT

KKKA

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Wow Vee, this is good stuff.
You're a real good writer I must say.
Loved this part. The Arnav-Khush interaction was really cute.
And that last bit was well... Can't wait for the next part to be updated. Soon please?

Edited: I was online through phone when I had read and commented, so couldn't write all the things I wanted to. But you must know that, that the last bit was really well-written. The emotions were so raw! It shocked me! I did not expect the train to crash. I think the mother and the brother of Khush have not survived, have they? Painful yet beautiful picture it was, the last one.

Cheers!

Edited by Anarocksick - 12 years ago

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nj.123

@nj.123

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

I just started reading this TS thinking that this was just going to be a short story that usually helps me get through a lazy day but my my I was so wrong. I literally widened my eyes and stared at my computer screen when you described the blast, the pain and agony was wonderfully described in a few words and I am eagerly waiting to know what happens next.

A brilliant and heartbreaking start!

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Nice title. Very good start and I like this style of writing. The beginning looks promising.

He's still the same Arnav who wants to do everything and ofcourse 'becomes a lion when madam is not around'.

Would love to read this further. Thank you for the pm!

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toblerone

@toblerone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

wow, very nice!! i really like your way of writing, i think i've never told you that, sorry 😳

the interaction between arnav and khush was so cute 😊!!

i didn't expect there would be this explosion!! where is khushi?? i hope she will come soon!!

can't wait to read the next part!! thanks for the pm 😊

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Very interesting ! There's a connection between them ..?

Hope you update soon .

Edited by annieK - 12 years ago

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chahat128

@chahat128

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

awesm loved it..
Plx pm me whn u updt

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Loved it, waiting to read more.

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