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Srija Singh

@srija.singh04

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Gripping! Will eagerly wait for the next update.

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Wow! That was quite an impactful beginning. Is the child a construct of Arnav's pain-riddled brain or is he real? Waiting to read the rest of the story.

Thanks ever so much for assuring us about the ending. If you feel you are not up for a sad ending, be assured we readers too are not!! 😃

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

wow nice start, even with a three shot, liked the way the boy does not fall into his trap 😆

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Wow! That was amazing! I can't wait to read more! :)

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Saima

@Diaphanous

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Interesting. Liking it a lot. Update soon.

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nilanjana

@Nilanjana_20

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

OOOHH desperately waiting for next part

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wildandsweet

@wildandsweet

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Wow

Awesome lives it

The interactin between Arnav and Khush wonderful

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

This is good.. Quite good.

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

*GASP* I actually gasped out loud while reading the chapter!

This was very, very nicely written!

You had me hanging off every word, and now I am desperate to know what happens next!

The little boy was adorable, and I loved how you showed that Arnav still had the whole reserved thing about him, but he was a lot more relaxed around kids now - definitely a positive effect of Khushi in his life.

Another thing that really touched my heart was how you showed that something as small as his meeting finishing early - him catching the early train and then the horrible incident - it almost seemed like fate.

I mean if his meeting had finished just a few minutes later, and he had missed that train, then he won't have been in that train. We have so many such incident in our real life where we wonder what if it had happened differently?

Not sure if I am making much sense :P

I am very excited to read more!