Torn Pages of a Diary...[Last Chapter - p 45]

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Onir
Uska watch slow hai shayad... 😆

Hopefully sirf watch...😉

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: dqno1

Hopefully sirf watch...😉

Arey nahi sirf watch hi hoga... otherwise toh she is 2mins wali... 😆

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/81105877

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Those of you who wish to see Naina and Sameer can Click here

Edited by ChandlerBing - 7 years ago

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

😊 res

off to work... will be back to read...

Thanks for updating...🤗

STICKING TONGUE OUT AT JAZZERETTE...🤗

ME 1st for 1st time...

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

😊

-- Edit --

Geet's description in this part gave a clear picture of what she initially was - an introvert, shy but very close to her friends, loves them & can do anything for them. Now the qualities are there but then she has withdrawn herself itno a shell & in pain, guilt trying to bear it all within her. The earlier part I guess 3rd one of them dancing, showed that dance is her form of expression & liberation.

I guess I have already siad this before that I picturise Tweety as You... (Don't ask me why... It's just that I can picturise so, unless you give her a face 😉).

Hahaha! The cake shop man thought of Tweety being a young child... 3-4 years old girl. I don't blame him afterall the tweety cake (A cartoon character with all the flashy colour... ) with the flower anyone will imagine it for some toddler. I liked that whole scene of real age revelation. I was grinning while reading the whole cake shop scene... especially loved the embarassment & flushing face of both the shop man & Geet.

The excitement that she was feeling for their time together, the night out & sneaky behaviour ...was so well put together. Naina's ringtones of cat purring & of flushing toilet reminded me of the sounds few of classmates used to make during 'boring' lectures just to have some fun. 😆 All this just added to all the good times the trio had. Now I so want all the suspense to be revealed as early as possible.

The scene in the bus with Sameer rescuing her was so good. I was apprehensive right form the start when Geet got into the bus from a deserted road. Loved this style of the silent harmless stalker protecting all those related to Naina though unknowingly.

I liked how you saved her as well how Geet trusted him... but I guess I wouldn't have trusted anyone so easily.

Waiting to see what happens in the semi-finals... 😊

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

😃😆

naaku ivala avi chetilo debbalu unayi 😆 anduke telugu lo raastuna.

naaku sameer and naina..iddaru nacharu..i thot naina shraddha kapoor untundu emo ani...sameer i expected either this guy or kunal kapoor.😊

but yup i loved it 😛

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Shradda Kapoor though i love, but i can't see her in the happy face I always see Naina with. I want that goofy grin whenever i think about her. Hence it is Asha Negi

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Onir
So the person writing the diary is ... Sameer. 😊 (I would love to see his pic...)

Liked this sisiter talks... especially the maggie noodles part, Yucky noodles 😆😆

Does anybody call you that... 😆

I forgot how many types of noodles I am called by now. 2 minutes, yucky, chilli garlic, tubelight whatever...😆

Apart fromt that... I loved the bubliness & cute persona of Naina. I seriously miss her in the lives of G & T now. She must be so integral part of their lives & the whole bonding.

The butt-o-logy 😆 Liked it though. All her self talks & cribbing was so cute. Trust me its quite a shock absorber in the whole body... 🤣 & not only getting treated is difficult but even treating is difficult... 😆

Ah comes from the horse' mouth. Pains of being a doc eh?😆

Waiting for more here...