Torn Pages of a Diary...[Last Chapter - p 45]

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Edited My comment ... The second one above... 😆😆😆

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

HAYE MY LUCKY DAY.. got an update...

mai ja ja kar wapis aa rahi hu..😆
my sis is going to kill me for this..

i like this guy sameer.

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

SO SAMEER IS THE ONE WHO SAVED HER

GEET IS RIGHT TO WONDER HOW HE KNOWS ALL OF THEM

AND THERE WAS SOMETHING IN HIS VOICE WHEN HE ASKED IF IT WAS NAINA'S BDAY

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

The Tweety cake... how cute of Naina to irritate Tweesha like that. It is definitely a choice form of expressing love for me too...

I remember answering the phone in India and Dad's colleague was suppposed to drop some papers off to him. He came with a big box of pedas thinking Dad had a small girl. Poor guy was so embarassed when he saw that I was a teenager.

The plans to celebrate Tweesha's birthday with her were so cute.

The bus ride with the 4 boys instilled a fear in me until Sameer came along. Poor chap. Could not leave Naina out of it and gave himself away.

It's true how even among the unknowns there are different feelings that come up in us. I suppose our sixth sense is always alert to help us unless we stifle it.

So the saga begins now... will they go to the stadium or not... I think Tweesha will jump at it, Geet will be the convincer and Naina will be dragged into it.

Looking forward to the pehli mulakat...

Thanks for updating Shika.

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

the fourth torn page

a moment it all takes

which is what i wanted to say abt ur work

just a moment of reading of ur wonderful work and readers will fall in love with it

just a moment it takes dear

😊

so SAMEER hawa ka jhoka has fallen for his angel

loved naina and meghna's convo

meghna's friend teased her by calling yucky noodles

oh but i love maggi and even maggie

😛

naina trying to touch her ankle on a lone lane

was beautifully written and even her fall

but nanina did not know that sameer is watching all her antics

and sameer doesnt know that ur wonderful writing helps us to watch them both in the screen of our mind

would love to see who u have in ur mind for sameer

lovely update dear

though have not read the web of love till now

these torn pages are very intriguing dear

now turning the next torn page and will comment abt it

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

shikha that was a very nice update

first the scene in cake shop was really good one

i never knew that irritaing some one is also a way of expressing our love

but after a second thought i realised yes sometimes it is

we love to see our loved one's expression when they are irritated and then we love manofying them

flusing toilet ring tone is also a very good idea 😆

when we u were writing such light stuff then how did the scary scene of bus came into ur mind?

was this inspired by delhi incidence

ur secret desire of saving that girl ?

( which i wished when i read this part )

brilliantly written bus scene and all her fears , apprehensions were well portrayed

felt really relieved that it was sameer

( though i thought may b it's maan's entry )

liked naina and sameer's pic

naina with masti filled eyes

and sameer looks like a man of substance

waiting for the next torn page

( but why did sameer tear such wonderful pages from his diary

why did he waste his diary😆😆😆😆😆😆 )

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

part 4
awesome...
wow this Sameer is too good...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

part 5
awesome...
that bus incident really gave me a scare...
but glad Sameer came at the right moment...
cont soon dear...

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palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

For my favourite girl,who is quite conscious about her weight these days...

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ddgcmgfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Hey Shikha:
So finally read all the 5 chapters...the story of the elusive third couple. I love Sameer, he seems very mature. Then there is this naive almost childlike Naina. She seems like a dreamer. They make cute couple, they would balance each other out 😆. I do sometimes believe we look for qualities we lack in our better halves. Then again that is what is meant by "complimenting each other".😊 I am very curious to know what happened with Naina...and now Sameer. So Naina is from a conservative background...is that the reason of her sudden disappearance? Its beautiful the way you have made Sameer "smitten at first sight" and then fall in love with Naina. Will be interesting to see Naina's reaction, he is handsome no doubt😉. The story reminds me of my college days, the innocent "lovers" around...not sure how many actually became life partners though. But it is beautiful while it lasts. Looking forward to more as always!