Torn Pages of a Diary...[Last Chapter - p 45]

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

finaly i came for few min to take sme break and cudn't stop coming here...
life is hell with office and studies..😔

u knw i read it mujhe laga ye ladka who is stalking the angle is maan and angle is geet..

phir darr laga tum Maina ki love story banaugi...

but now i concluded ye to koi or hi naina ka deewana hai..

it's nice change sometimes when heroine alone is not an angel and not everyone is behind her... (don't kill me for this, i'm little different or mad u can conclude ur self. 😆)

i'm waiting for maan's entry here.. shud i expect this..

me loving both stories...

and abhi thode din iss comment se kaam chalao..

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

part 3
awesome dear...
loved it so much...
so beautifully written about their bonding...
cont soon dear...

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Edited my comment on page 5 😊

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

just read all the torn pages of this diary😆

oh wow too good dear

terrific writing shikha

what a description of every thing be it surroundings or different forns of dance or beauty of a girl or the shapes of their faces

i think ur friends wont have any problem in imagining ur spcl someone when u will describe him to them

( as tweesha and naina wanted to teach geet )😆😆

and ur sense of humor paraya mard...

or ur intelligent lines like..."One should battle the ties they are bound by before battling for something more important and pressing. They needed to be set free from expectations...

each and every aspects are so amazing

well done👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

narrator's casual way to talking to his team mates was superb

very good approach

will read web of love and then comment

and pls next time u decide to change ur account name

dont forget to add me to ur new account

dont want to miss on ur wonderful writing

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

THAP THAP THAP!!!

😊

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

So..The guy is "Sameer"..Beautiful name..😊

Is he somehow related to naina's disappearance at present...

I know I have said it before too but I wont't hesitate to repeat myself.. More I read about their past,More I miss them..and Right now I am missing Naina in WOL very much.....

She was utterly cute with her effort of touching her ankles in the air and "BUM-pedia" later on...😃I totally understand Sameer's predicament..Any guy could fall for her...

As usual,awesomely written bratty...😊

waiting for more...

PS-Maggie,you can call your sis "Nano"...😊

PPS-I want to see "Sameer"...😃

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago