Torn Pages of a Diary...[Last Chapter - p 45]

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

When It comes to "Dance",I prefer to keep my mouth "shut"...Thank you for making me understand,"how does it feel when you dance"with your words...!!!as I have never felt this feeling and I would never feel it...

Naina is beautiful...

and her dance companion is also beautiful and her description matches to "geet" because you always describe geet this way..specially,"The heart shaped face"😊

Waiting for more identities to reveal..specially owner of the diary...

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

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This one was a treat... 😳

It was so good to see the earlier days of these 3 friends, their love, bonding, nok-jhok... typical teenage girls with all the goossip, library talks, & boy talks... 😆 It feels sad to know that something so drastic happened that this whole dynamics of their friendship changed... One who went missing, the other engulfed in her own guilt, while another one just not aware of all that transpired & hurt on being left out of it all.

The boy I don't know But yes he is someone with shades & very deep characteristics. Sometimes he appears so strong with leading & paving path for others while sometimes just being in the shadows getting small joys from being his teenage boyish self sneaking & eavesdropping on some girls girlish talks about a boy. I liked how he tries to justify his reason for curiosity in Naina's life & happenings yet understanding that its quite normal for curiosity purpose & nothing else... Somewhere wanting to know more than her name. 😳😉

Tweesha's comment on paraya mard was so hillarious... 🤣 I was taken back to times when my 5 friends & I used to be like this ... with 4 of them trying to drill their oh so "gyan" about worldly (boy) stuff into my another friends' & my head while we both used just be mute speactators to it all & just pretend to be rapt listeners to avoid getting a bashing up for not being "Normal" and just being introverts & into our books... I so miss all of them now... as we all our at different places for our specialisations... still in contact through technology...

Imran was the Shahid kapoor... 😆 When they saw him listening to the princi iwth other two... I was reminded of all the times I satnd in front of my HOD listening to her boring bhashan of how everything should be & how dissapointed she is woith the juniors I need to train them well, while my two juniors stand behind & make all faces & I have to keep a serious face of understanding it all without laughing... 😆

The whole stalkers being spotted by the boys was so hillarious... 😆

Geet madam forgot her spectacles... Bechari Tweesha itna mehnat gaya paani mein... 😆 I used to be like Geet walking by my friends while one friend whenever she used to look at any hot handsome blue eyed boy passing by she used to nudge me to look at him... but till the time I used to try looking he used to pass by ... & my frined used to be like 'kya karu iska mein'... 😆

Oh I love all these moments ... thanks for making me relive them... 😃

Looking forward to what actually transpired... & who is this boy... 😊

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

These three friends are super fun,I tell you..More I am getting to know about their college days and past,more I am getting sad because everything has changed in the present...😭

That library scene reminded me of something..Me and my bestie were in "old science magazine" section for completion of a special mission...We want to steal the magazines😆 because issuing the books were tedious task providing the long line of students at the counter..

Since we don't have our bags with us,It was very hard for us to hide the magazines somewhere,hence we decided to tear the "pages" of our interest from the magazines..but libraries are always dead silent and "tearing" noise could have alarmed anyone,hence my friend asked me,"tu jake "thak thak" kar,i would tear the pages"..

I was tapping the tables,pulling the chairs here and there to make noises till my friend tore the pages...🤣

I loved this chapter dear...

I am still confused who is owner of the diary...😕 I know its not maan but who???

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Now I got the story...this diary consist the past of three BFF - Tweesha, Naina & Geet...sorry me tube light...you wrote this in WOL, but oculd not connect TPOD to WOL in first two chapters...third chapter made it clear

They had a blast time when they were in collage, enjoying, drooling...tweesha & naina both were bold and on the other hand geet was little shy types.

Loved the drooling part over junior shahid kapoor...oops...poor geet forgot her specs and could not watch the hotty

Is this Imran who was responsible for naina state...just guessing

Now its confirmed that the owner of the dairy is not maan...

Lets see who is he...?...vicky or imran...again just guessing

Now want to know more of their collage life, cont soon

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

🤗in the midst of some writing.. maafi pls.. not want to lose the scenes in my head...🤗

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: dqno1

🤗in the midst of some writing.. maafi pls.. not want to lose the scenes in my head...🤗

is it possible to love you all more than I already do? I think it is. Kick me before i go all emotional.🤗🤗🤗

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
is it possible to love you all more than I already do? I think it is. Kick me before i go all emotional.🤗🤗🤗

Writing the scene after the thappad and seriously not able to leave Dev at the moment😳😳

If I read your writing, I won't be able to write for 2 days...🤗kicking is your style..

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Hayye I would love to read the scene. By the way you know I haven't read recent chapter of TL yet cuz I want to read it when m thru PC to listen to the song simultaneously. 😛
you put me on a pedestal Avi and it scares me. I dont deserve the praise anyway go back to writing my fav thappad scene. What a sadist I am! 😆 😆 😆

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

I am adoring these three together...

Tweesha takes the cake in all her behavior. I adore this girl. Their own personal Gundi..⭐️

Geet not having her glasses had me laughing so hard. All that work and then pachka..splat!!!😆

Being caught by Imran was icing on the cake and the ever hopefuls Praneet and Rohit, thought they were also being looked at... As if...😲

I liked his reluctance to think about Naina too much. It's been only two days, he thought but somewhere he was eager to be part of that circle to find out more about her.

The whole chapter and the visual way you write is such a treat to read.

I felt like I was in line with them observing the minute things that you notice.

Somewhere in me as I read this, try as I may, I could not wonder about where Naina is in WOL.

Was he the reason for the split up?

Loving their journey as I get to see more of the trio in their carefree days.

Thanks for updating and waiting for more soon.

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago