Kuch Pal Zindagi Ke...UPDATED pg47 - Page 29

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_M

really good kiran 👏 what a way to propose 😆 loved it. can't wait 4 the shaddi 😊

hehhee...thanks a lot...par beta there is a loooooooooooooooooooooooot of time in the shadi hhahha!!!!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow kiran jeee awesome part loved it too too gooood..conttinue sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok.....so i am posting the next part...do comment...and thanks to everyone who commented...lub ya allll muaaaaaaaaaaah!!!

Its morninnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggg....................

yeh subaah Sujal Kashish ki zindagi ka aik khusurat aghaaz tha...lets see into their shed hehhee
Sujal is sleeping in a sitting position...with his back against the wall...while Kashish is sleeping with her head on his chest....and Sujal has his arms around her...kuch der baad Sujal ki ankh khulti hai....he yawns...then looks at Kashsih...
Woh Kashish ko dekh ker smile kerta hai...uss ka chehray se baal hatata hai aur kisses her on her head....Kashish ahista se jagti hai...she is embarassed to see the way she had been sleeping hehe...woh aik dum sahi ho ker beth jati hai
Sujal: Goood morningg...
Kashish: gud morning....
Sujal: lagta hai bhut der ho gai.....ohoo...yahan to 12 bajj gaye hain...kia Kashish tum bbhi na...
Kashish: ab maine kia kia...
Sujal: kitna soti ho tum??
Kashish: achaaa??? aur ap bhi utni hi der soye ho jitni der main...
Sujal: Kashish...tum yeh aap ker ke baat na kia karo...
Kashish: kyun???
Sujal: kuch izzat izaat si feel hoti hai...(smirking)
Kashish: shut up...Sujal...
Sujal: bass...yeh do lafz...shut up....aur kuch bolna nahi ata...
Kashish: ata hai na....
Sujal: kia???
Kashish: kal jo bola tha....
Sujal: (acts) mujhe to kuch yaad nahi...
Kashish: acha yaad nahi huh???
Woh uss ke kaan pakarti hai....
Sujal: oooww!! acha baba sorry main mazak ker rhaa tha...yaad hhai kia kaha tha...
Kashish: agar kabhi bhulay na to main tumhara galla ghont dungi...
Woh mazak main uss ke gallay epr haath rakhti hai..Sujal laughs...
Sujal: oh God...i really love u...(he puts his arms around her)
Kashish hugs him back....
Kashish: i love u too...
Sujal: acha suno...abhi nikalte hain...upar ja ker garri bhi theek kerwani hai...
Kashish: hmmm...(Kashish ka chehra utar sa jata hai)
Sujal: tumhain kia hua...
Kashish: wapis ja ker sab kuch kkitna badal jayega....hum pata nahi dobara itne pass asakein ge ke nahi...
Sujal: Kashish....tum bhagwan ko bhut manti ho na???
Kashish: hmmm...(nods)
Sujal: to bass phir...un per chor do...woh hi koi zariya banatay rahay ge...humain milane ka...
Kashish smiles...
Sujal: ab utho aur chalooo....

They both reach the roadside....Sujal ne Kashish ko godd main uthaya hota hai...
Kashish: thank God yahan takk puhanch gaye...
Sujal: hmmm...ab mechanic ko dhundhna hai...
Kashish: woh to theek hai par mujhe neeche to utaro....
Sujal: aissay ziada sahi haii...(naughtily)
Kashish: tum nahi sudhro ge....
kuch der takk chalte rehne ke baad they see the road get wider....aur side per shops nazar annay lagti hain...
Sujal: thank God!!! ab shayed koi mechanic mill jaye...
They search for the mechanic....jo ke fortunately mil jata hai...
By the time he goes back with other men and fetches the car...its 5 o clock...
They start checking the car...
Kashish tugs at Sujal's sleeve...both are tired out....
Kashish: Sujjaalll..
Sujal: haan Kashish...
Kashish: mujhe bhut bhook lagi hai...
Sujal: hmmm...acha...tum yahiin ruko main kuch le ker ata hun..
Kashish: (aik dum pareshan ho jati hai) kahan ja rahay ho>???
Sujal: Kashish!! pareshan kyun ho rahi ho....yeh samne store hai wahan se kuch le ata hun...tum yahiin betho...pehle hi thakki hui ho...hmm???
Kashish nods....
He gets her sumthing to eat...they sit at a nearby dhabba and order some food while the car is being repaired...when the mechanic comes....
Mechanic: sahab jee iss ko to theek honay main 2-3 din lagay ge....
Sujal: lekin kyun???
Mechanic: sir iss main break oil nahi hai...aur servicing ki bhi zarurat hai...tyre main hawa bhi nahi hai...
Sujal: kuch kero yaar humain jaldi nikalna hai...
Mechanic: sahab ap idhar se kuch aggay jjayen ge to aik hotel hai...wahan aik do raat guzar lijiye...parsun tarsun apko apki garri mil jayegi...
Sujal: shitt!!
Kashish: Sujal...yeh to bhut problem ho gai...ab kia karain???
Sujal: tum pareshan na ho...maine Akshat ko bata dia hai aur saath main yeh bhi keh dia hai keh tumhare ghar per khabar na karain...aunty aissay hi pareshan ho jayengi...do dinnon ki hi to baat hai....
Kashish: pata nahi...kuch sahi nahi ho rahha....
Sujal: Kashissh...tum fikar kyun kerti ho...main hun na...
Kashish smiles....
Shaam ka wwaqt ho jata hai...they both are slowly walking towards the nearby hotel which is not so nearby hehehe....
Kashish: aur kitni door Sujal???
Sujal: pata nahiii....
They both are walking when the clouds open up and it starts raining
Kashish: lo!!! ab aik iss ki kammi thi...
Sujal: come on Kashish...barish ho rahi hai...itna acha mausam hai....
Kashish: acha mausam??? mere kapre bheeg gaye hain...
Sujal: Kashish...dunt be a spoilsport....baarish main saath bheegne ka maza hi kuch aur hai...
He drags Kashish to the centre of the road...
He swirls her around...and Kashish laughs....musssiiiccc.....

Sujal: Bahonke darmiaaannn.....
Do pyaar mil rahay hainnn....
Bahonke darmiaan...(he twirls her around while she laughs)
Do pyaar mil rahay hain...
Janay kiaa....boley mann....
Doley sunn...ke badan...
Dharkan banii zubaan....(he swings her towards himself)

Kashish: Bahonke darmiaan...do pyaar mil rahay hain...(kashish envelops herself in Sujal's arms...)
Jannay kia...bole mann...
Doley sun ke badan...Dharkan banni zubaan...(She looks upto in his eyes...and both smile)

Music....( Kashish gets away from him...and runs around in the rain, laughing....Sujal watches her and smiles...then he goes near her aur peeche se uss ke baal side per kerta hai...Kashish catches her breath and closes her eyes....)

Sujal: Khultay...band hotey...labon ki yeh ankahi...(He gently kisses her shoulder...Kashish shivers)
Khultay band hote labon ki yhe ankahi....
Mujhse keh rahi hai keh barhne de beykhudi,....(He comes forward....looks at Kashish...then gently he caresses Kashish's neck with his hand....)
Mil yun ke dorr jayen..
Nas nas main bijlian...( He kisses Kashish's neck....and then her beauty bone)

Kashish: Bahonke darmiaan...do pyaar mil rahay hain..(Kashish opens her eyes...and looks at him...then gives in....wrapped in his arms)
Jannay kia...bole mann...
Doley sun ke badan...Dharkan banni zubaan...( she holds him tight to her as he stroked her back)


Musicc........(Sujal twirls Kashish around...she laughs and gets away from him....woh uss ki taraf barhta jata hai while she steps backwards, with her gaze on him....She takrofies with a tree....they are off the road now...she sees Sujal coming veryyyy close....she tries to get away par Sujal tree ke donon side per hatah rakh deta hai,....looking at her intensely)


Kashish: Asmaaan ko bhi yeh...haseen raaz hai pasand...(Kashish side per dkehti hai sharma kay...Sujal uss ka chehra apni taraf kerti hai)
Uljhi uljhi sanson ki awaaaz hai pasand...(both watch each other with bated breath...their eyes full of love and desire...)
Moti luta rahi hain....
Sawan ki badliaaann...(Sujal comes tooooo close to her...Kashish gently strokes his jawline...lost in him)
Bahon ke darmiaan...do pyaar mil rahay hain...

Bahonke darmiaan...do pyaar mil rahay hain...(Sujal kisses Kashish's cheeks....drinking the rain water on her cheeks)
Jannay kia...(Kashish holds him tight from around his shoulder...)
Jannay kia...( He puts a hand in her hair....stroking his hand against her cheek)
Bole mann....bole mann...
Doley sun ke badan...Dharkan banni zubaan...(they both come forward...lost in eachother's eyes)

Bahooooooonkkeeee darmiaaaaaaaaannnn......(at last Sujal's lips lightly brush against hers...and then meet again.....and then they kiss......)

Sujal and Kashish are still wrapped in their intense scene....he is holding her against the tree...with his hands all around her.....and she has her hands in his hair...and both are kissing intensly....they both are so damn involved in each other....their kiss gets deeper....and then suddenly they break off....panting for breath...then both look at each other....and Kashish falls into his arms....with a longing of love and he holds her tight, as if never letting her go...

kuch ziada hi ganda ho gaya hehehehhe...my mind is perverted hehehehe...doooo comment!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
wah waaah hhehehe kiran jeee naughty hogai lol....gr88 part loved it it was damn romantic continue sooon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
FANTASTIC....I loved your stories..plz continue!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
kiran read the FF after many days but its going great. I am loving it. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey kiran i just read ur whole fanfic 😊 . it's awesome yaar 😉 . too good and the part was damn romantic 😳 . just loved it seriously!!! 👏 continue soon plz..... can't wait any longer.
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks a lot everyone....i am working on the next part...will soon update....

Honi...long time no c....kahan ho tum???? khair gud to see u back....ab comment kerti rehna...
thanx patelin n golu....welcome back...
Fravashi...thanks a lot shweety....u new here at ma ff link rite???? keep reading and do comment...

main kal ker dungi post...till then...keep commenting..
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Posted: 18 years ago
wat a romantic part dear..... 👏 👏 👏 awesome...cont soon.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part can't wait 4 the next update,

Love,

Saniya

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