Kuch Pal Zindagi Ke...UPDATED pg47 - Page 28

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wonderful part
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thanks for ur comments...here is the next part....


Kashish points to her shoes jo donon peeche road per chor aye thay...Sujal smiels
he goes back aur Kashish ko neeche le ker bethta hai...takkay woh jutay pehan le....
Kahsish jutay pehan hi rai hoti hai...jab aggay se garri ki headlites Sujal ke chehray per parti hain...
He luks up to see a truck looming up in their direction...specially Kashish ki taraf...
Sujal: KAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSH!!!!!!!
Sujal Kashish ko pakar ker side per jump ker deta hai...
Kashish who is caught unawares...Sujal ke saath hi hoti hai...roadside pr slope hoti hai...
Both go down...rolling polling over eachother....
Kuch der dhakay khannay ke baad they cum to a standstill...
Kashish Sujal ke neeche hoti hai....us ke sarr per thori si chot ati hai aur Sujal ke haath per...
Kashish: aaaahhh...ouch...
Sujal gets up...aur side per bethta hai...
Donon thora sa hosh sambhalte ain...chakar agaye thay hehehe...
Kashish: Sujjjaaalll.....
Sujal: haan Kashish...main..main yahiin hun...
He holds her hand and makes her sit up....
Sujal: tum theek to ho na??? (concerned)
Kashish nods, putting a handd to her head
Kashish: aur tum??
Sujal: main theek hun...
Kashish: hum kahan hain???
Sujal: pata nahi....road se koi 15 foot neeche...
Kashish: KIAAA???
Sujal: haan...
Kashish: tumne mere upar jump kyun marri...idiot...
Sujal: agar jump na marta to tum uss truck ke neeche ajati...
Kashish: kaunsa truck???
Sujal: Kashish...tumhari yadasht to theek hai na>?? (lauging)
Kashish: shut up Sujal...yeh mazak ka waqt nahi hai...
Sujal: haan....mazak ka nahi..beth ker politics discuss kerte hain...
Kashish gives him a look...
They both stand up...and look around...
Kashish: yahan to koi bhi nahi hai!!!
Sujal: kyun?? tumhai kia laga tha...yahan tumhare istaqbaal main log phul le ker kharray honge...
Kashish: SujaaallL!!! tum kyun mujhe harr waqt tang kerte rehtay ho...
Sujal smies....they both start walking around...
Kashish: itni raat ho gai hai...hum upar kese puhanche gay...
Sujal: puhanch jayenge Kashish...tum fikar na karo...main hun na...
Kashish: issi baat ki to fikar hai..
Sujal laughs....they start walking upwards...

Kashish upar ja hi rahi hoti hai jab uss ka dupatta aik jharri main phansta hai..
Woh murr ker dupata nikalne lagti hai jab uss ki ungli per kanta lagta hai aur khoon behne shuru ho jata hai...
Sujal aik dumm se uss ka hatah pakarta hai.....he holds her finger and sucks the blood away...
Kashish looks at him lovingly...
Sujal: ok??
Kashish nods...woh uss ka haath chorta hai to she sees ke uss ka haath burri tarah se injured hota hai...
Kashish: Sujall...tumhara haath...
Sujal: kia hua mere haath ko...
Kashish: khoon beh raha hai...lao mujhe dikhao...
Sujal: rehne do Kashish...mamooli si chot hai...
Kashish: mamooli si chot nahi hai yeh...! kitna khoon beh raha hai....
She holds his hand....and makes him sit down...on a leveled place...phir uss ke samne bethti hai...backpack main se pani ki bottle nikalti hai...aur uss ka zakham saaf kerti hai...
Sujal looks at her intently all teh while...she pharofies her dupata and covers his wound...
Kashish: ab theek hai??
Sujal: theek to pehle bhi tha...par ab behtar hai...
He smiles...par Kashish ka chehra kuch murjhaya hota hai...
Sujal: kia baat hai Kashish...
Kashish: tumne meri liye apni jaan khatre main...
Sujal: (interrupts her) tumhare liye nahi...apne liye...
Kashish luks up at him
Kashish: kia matlabb???
Sujal: kuch nahi...tum nahi samjho gi...chalain...
Kashish nods...
They both start walkin upwards...kuch aur upar jannay ke baad...Kashish sees a shed nearby...aik khalli sa shed...sirf char deewarain aur aik lite
Kashish: Sujal...woh dekho!!!
Sujal: lagta hai yahan koi madad mill jayegi..chalo..
They both go over to the shed...par there is no one there...
Kashish: yahan to koi bhi nahi hai...
Sujal: lagta hai kisi guard ka kamra tha...par ab yahan koi nahi ha...good...raat guzarne ka intizaam to hua...
Kashish: kia??? hum yahan rahainge???
Sujal: bahir jharion main rehne se to behtar hai..aur agar hum upar road takk puhanch bhi gaye to garri takk puhanchne ka koi faida nahi....na madad mille gi aur na koi faida hoga...behtar hai yahan raat guzarain aur subah hote hi kisi mechanic ko dhund ker garri repair kerwa lein..
Kashish: hmmmmm....tum theek keh rahay ho...
Sujal: woh to main hamesha hi theek kehta hun...
Kashish smiles...

Kuch der baad donon ne floor per kuch chadrain bicha di thi (aik cupboard thi shed main wahan se nikal ker.....logicx hehhe)....aur donon bethey baatain ker rahay thay...
Kashish suddenly notices that her shirt is torn from several places....and her dupatta too....shalwar keechar aur matti se bhari hoti hi (aye haye)...
She starts feeling uncomfortable...
Sujal notices this....He opens his backpack and takes out his night suit...
Sujal: Kashish...tum yeh pehan lo.....
Kashish luks at him...
Sujal: tumhare kapron se to behtar hain...wiasay bhi tum kuch uncomfortable ho rahi ho to tum yeh...(hands the clothes to her)
Kashish: aur tum??
Sujal: mere pass extra shirt hai..woh kal pehan luga...aur mere kapre theek hai...main bahir jata hun tum change kero..ok??
Kashish nods...
He goes outside and comes in when she calls him...
Sujal ussay dekhte saath hansnay lagta hai
The shirt is too laarge for her...bazu latak rahay hotay hain and she has pulled the pajama too high...
Kashish: hans kyun rahay ho???
Sujal: tum...tum in kapron main..bhtu cute lag rahi ho...
Kashish luks at herself and starts laughing
After some time.....both are lying down...trying to get some sleep...
Kashish: Sujall....
Sujal: haan Kashish...
Kashish: tumse aik baat pucho....
Sujal: haan bolo...
Kashish: agar aj...main uss truck ke neeche ajati...aur tum kuch na kar patay...to tum kia kartay...
Sujal looks at her
Sujal: yeh kiss kism ka beyhuda sawal hai...
Kashish: bolo na Sujal....tum kia kartay???
Sujal sits up....and then stands up...he goes and stands over near the wall...luking outside...
Kashish comes and stands behind him...
Kashish: batao na Sujal...
Sujal: agar tumhain kuch ho jata na Kashish...to main khud apni jaan de ker tumhain bachanay ki koshish kerta....
Kashish: aur agar tum na bacha pattay to???
Sujal: to main zinda to rehta parr woh zindagi mout se bhi battar hoti....shayed main apni jaan le leta....shayed...(boley jata hai)
Kashish: kia???(surprised)
Sujal turns...luking at her with an intensity she had never seen in his eyes before...
Sujal: (holds her shoulders) haan Kashish....agar tum per aik aanch bhi ajati to main khud ko kabhi mauf na kar pata....main....main tumhare beghair kese jee sakta hun...
Kashish: yeh tum kia keh rahay ho Sujal...(shrugging away his hands from her shoulders)
Sujal: woh jo mai hamesha tumse kehna chhata tha...woh jo main kabhi keh nahi paya...
Kashish: kia...??
Sujal: main nahi janta yeh kia hai....kyun hai...lekin sirf itna janta hun keh tum mujhe bhut achi lagti ho...mera din tumse mille beghair mukammil nahi hota....tumhain na dekhun to bechain ho jata hun....tumse itna kuch kehna chahta hun par keh nahi pata...aissa mere saath pehle kabhi nahi hua Kashish...par mujhe lagta hai main tumse pyaar...
Kashish: yeh kia baqwas hai Sujal....tumhain andaza hai keh tum kia keh rahay ho???? (ghussay main)
Sujal: haan Kashish...(holds her shoulders) achi tarah se andaza hai mujhe keh main kia keh raha hun...uss larki se apne dil ka haal byaan ker raha hun jiss se main beyhad pyaar kerta hun...
Kashish: yeh ghalat hai Sujal....(turns away) aissa nahi ho sakta...tum mujhse pyar kese ker sakte ho...
Sujal: koi tumse pyaar kaisay nahi ker sakta Kashish??? tum main to woh kashish hai jo mujhe tumhari taraf baar baar khench lati hai...
Kashish: jo bhi hai...Sujal....main tumse pyaar nahi kerte...
Dhamaakkaayyy...Sujal ke chehray per...
Sujal: kiaa????
Kashish: (ankhon main ansu) haan...main tumse pyaar nahi kerti...suna tumne...NAHI KERTI MAIN TUMSE PYAAR...
Sujal: Kashish tum...
Kashish: bolne do mujhe Sujal....main tumse pyaar nahi kerti..main kisi se pyar nahi kerti...mujhe koi haq nahi hai kisi se pyaar kerne ka...kyunki main jiss se pyaar kerti hun woh mujhse door ho jata hai...chor ke chala jata hai mujhe....aur main nahi chahti Sujal keh mere pyaar ki waja se tum bhi mujhe chor ker chalay jao...(breaks down)
Sujal: Nahi Kashish tum...
Kashish: haan Sujal...main nahi chahti keh aik baar phir main kisi apne ko kho dun....tumhain nahi batana chahti woh sab kuch jo mere dil mai hai....kaisay jannay dun main ab tumhain apni zindagi se...kaisay...(rotay huay)
Sujal chup chapp ussay dekh raha hota hai...
Kashish: tum mere lye kya ho yeh koi nahi janta....tum kud bhi nahi....tum mera woh sab kuch ho jiss ki mujhe zarurat hai...aik dost...aik hamsafar...dukh sukh main saath denay wala saathi....hamesha mera saath chalne wala woh insan jisse mai kisi haal main khona nahi chahti....
Sujall...aik dum khamosshh hota hai....
Kashish: jiss ke saharay aj mein apni zindagi guzaar rahi hun...jo mere liye mera sab kuch hai...meri muhabat, meri zindagi, mera pyaar, meri ibadat.....sab kuch...
SUjal ke chehray per aur dhamakay...khushi walay...
Kashish is crying soooo badly....ro ro ke ankhain laal ho jati hain hehehe
Sujal: Kashish tum yeh....
Kashish: haan Sujal haan...tum hi ho woh jiss ne pehli baar mere dil ko chua hai...jiss se maine sachi muhabat ki hai....ab kaisay jannay dun apni zindagi se...kaisayy???
Sujal cmes forward...and holds her face in his face
Sujal: Kashish....dekho...meri taraf dekho...
Kashish luks up....
Sujal: jo insan din raat...harr pal har lamha tumhare saath guzarna chahta hai...woh tumhain kaisay chor sakta hai.....tum mujhe apni zindagi se jannay nahi dena chahti par yeh to socha keh jiss insan ki subah hi Kashish ko dekh ker hoti hai...woh insan Kashish ke beghair kaisay jee skata hai...jee skata hai??? bolo Kashish
Kashish luks at him...crying...
Sujal: nahi Kashish....nahi jee skata main tumhare beghair.....
Kashish: par Sujal...
Sujal: par war kuch nahi Kashish....hum agar akhatay hain...saath hain.... to apni harr subah ko khubsurat banna lainge....apne harr dukh sukh baant leinge....aur sarri zindagi aik dusre ke liye...aik dusre ke saath....meethey yaadain bana leinge....kyun...dogi mera saath...dogi Kashish???
Kashish just looks at him...uss ke ansu girte hain...
Sujal apni bazu kholta hai aur Kashish uss ke gallay lag jati hai...
They both share a loooooooooooooooong, warm hug....
Kashish: I luv u Sujal....i really, really luv u!!!
Sujal: i luv u too.....
They separate...Sujal kisses Kashish's forehead and wipes her tears
Sujal: aj ke baad....main nahi chahta keh kisi bhi qarran meri Kashish ki ankhon main ansu ayen...samjhi???
Kashish smiles...nodding...
Sujal: chalo ab yeh rona dhona band kero....huh???
Kashish wipes her tears.....and Sujal smiles...

Sujal is sitting against the wall...while Kashish is leaning against his chest....and he has his arms around her
Sujal: Kashish...
Kashish: haan Sujal...( al contented hehhe)
Sujal: main soch raha tha...keh yahan se bahir nikalte hi hum shadi ker lete hain...
Kashish: kyun??? (luks at him)
Sujal: kia matlab kyun??? pyaar kia hai...shadi kerni hai na????
Kashish: haan baba kerni hai...
Sujal: to theek hai...hum kal hi shadi ker lete hain...
Kashish: itni jaldi kia hai...tum officially mera rishta lao gay...aur mumma papa mera haaath tumhare haath main deinge tab hi humari shadi hogi...
Sujal: leyy!!! itni lambi planning.....main itni der intezar nahi ker sakta...
Kashish: kiss cheez ka intezar....main to hun na tumhare saath...(she holds his hand and kisses it)
Sujal: haan woh to sahi hai...par main foraaan se tumhain apni patni banana chahta hun...MRS.SUJAL GAREWAL
Kashish: Ahaha!! Mrs.Sujal Garewall!! itni asani se nahi...
Sujal: kyun bhayii???
Kashish: maine suna hai keh waqt ke saath saath pyaar main aur mazbuti aur taqat ajati hai....
Sujal: woh sab mujhe nahi pata...main to jaldi se shadi ker ke suhaagraat manana chahta hun..
Kashish turns to luk at him...
Kashish: SUJAAALLL!!! (hits him)
Sujal: areyu iss main marne ki kia baat hai...shadi ke baad to suhaagraat hoti hai na...
Kashish: haan haan hoti hai par shadi ke baad....tumhain itni jaldi kia hai???
Sujal: woh kia hai na...main harr tareeqay se tumhain apna banana chhata hun...tann, mann aur dhan se....
Kashish gives him a luk
Sujal: mann to ho gaya...dhan bhi ho jayega...ab bass tann ki barri hai...(naughtily)
Kashish murr ker ussay hug ker leti hai...hiding her face in his neck....
Sujal laughs and puts his arm around her...kissing her forehead....

Guys thats it for today...parh ke batna plzzzzzzzzzzz ke kaisa hai..ok tcz...muah..bye..lub kiran!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey very good part........yeah i am so happy that they proposed to each other....... 😆 sujal is quit funny...i want you to accept with TANE, MAAN and DHAN.. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i missed your last update......so both the parts were fantastic.......really loved reading them.....

sujal's tan, mann, dhan logic is just too much 😆

And last part me wo askhat ki orderbaazi bhi mast thi n so was that kripa-angad horror film scene 😆 😆 😆


continue soon!!

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vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
astaghirullah hehehe.....tan maan and dhan...wah jee hehehe....what a dramatic proposal hehehe....ye sab itni jaldhi ho gaya 😉 😉 😉 tooo goood....continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev1

astaghirullah hehehe.....tan maan and dhan...wah jee hehehe....what a dramatic proposal hehehe....ye sab itni jaldhi ho gaya 😉 😉 😉 tooo goood....continue soon 👏

😆 faraahhh...meri kahani mein sab kuch jalddddddddddddi se hota hai hehehe

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey kiran gr8 part 👏 👏 👏 so finaly muhabbat ka izhar ho hi gaya...and sujal tan man dhan wala dialogue 😉 ...was too good...cont soon dear...waiting for the next part.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
really good kiran 👏 what a way to propose 😆 loved it. can't wait 4 the shaddi 😊

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