Kuch Pal Zindagi Ke...UPDATED pg47 - Page 31

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Posted: 18 years ago
wah kya part thi!!!Luvd it kiran apoo!!! 😛
Too good!Cont soon ok?? 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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chal be shanre..mang bhar hahahahahaha....gundi lagi hai parvati hehehehe.......wah jeee wallaa part......awww ab jahan sab kuch hi gaya to bed bhi share karle hehehehee....i am sure unki riti riwaaaj ka ehsaas arhe ga hahahahahahahahaha

great part loved ittttttt...........plz agaye jaldhi likhna.... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow kiran awesopme part loved it tooo tooooo ggooooood continue sooooon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey kiran lovely part.... 👏 👏 👏 cont soon ... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
kya part that yaar..... 👏

amazing....!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
ahaaan.. fit part...!! maza agaya!! 👏

Lekin yeh Sujal toh mujhe BONGA lagta hai... bahee aisee bhi kya majboorii k kisi ko sachayee hee nahi batanii...hehehe 😆 😆

but overall.. its was gr88888888!!

Post the nextt part soon.. luv yaaa..!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Lolz...hey guys...yaar main aj se aik nayi cheez daal rahi hun story main....jab koi aisi situation ati hai keh sujal kashish ya koi bhi character kuch sochta hai to uss ki jagah i will write e.g.
for sujal....
Akshat Pops-up: Sujal ....blah blah...
aise jaise sujal ka conscience Akshat ki zubaan bol rahi ho hahahhahahaha....the person will change according to the situation...e.g. girl advice ke liye Akshat, beauty tips ke liye krippa and so on...jiss ko nahi samjah ayi parh ekr samjh lo hehehehehe....


Raat time....
Sujal enters his room jahan Kashish has changed into a nightie (gauri ne sarrray kapre provide kiye hain heheheh)....aur pillows straight ker rhai hai...
Kashish: agaye ap janab???? (sarcastically)
Sujal: haan aa to gaya hun...par agar apko koi aitraaz hai to chala jata hun...(smirking)
Kashish: ha-ha-ha!!! bad joke....
Sujal just smiles...aur dur se hi bed per jump marta hai...sprawled over...lying on his stomach...
Sujal: (yawwwnnnss....) mujhe to bhut neend arahi hai aur yeh bed bhut fit hai.....ok Kashish...gud nite....
He pretends to go to sleep....
Kashish picks up a pillow aur uss ke sarr per marti hai...
Sujal: (sirf chehra upar kerta hai...)..ab kia hai??? (chir ker bolta hai)
Kashish: excuse me...ap yahan nahi...wahan so rahay hain...(points to the floor...
Floor per Kashish ne aik sheet aur aik pillow rakah hota hai hehehe...
Sujal: aur yeh tumse kiss ne kaha???
Kashish: kiss ne kaha kaa kia matlab...main keh rahi hun na...(hands on hips) tum aj wahiin so ge...
Sujal: tum keh rahi ho aur mein ker lunga...bilkul...
Phir wse lait jata hai...
Kashish: Sujal...tum iss bed per nahi so rhay....
Sujal: yeh tum decide kerne wali kaun hoti ho????(sits up)
Kashish: achaa???jab neeche beth ker Shreyaa se gappain maar rahay thay tabb to kuch nahi ho raha tha...
Sujal: oooohhh....to yeh baat hai...tum jealous kyun ho rahi ho agar main Shreya se baat ker raha tha to???
Kashish: oh pleaseeee...main kyun jealous hongi???
Sujal: theek hai...matt ho....main soney laga hum...subah baat kerte hain...byeeee...
Kashish: theek hai...tumhain sona hai to so jao...main neeche so jati hun...
Sujal: ok fine...(cheekily) catch sum good sleep....gud nite...
woh phir se soney ki acting kerta hai...Kashish is left standing there...angry aur pareshan...she ahd expected Sujal to say he wud sleep there....Sujal hides his face with a pillow and is smiling like anything....
Ab woh soch rahi hoti hai keh kia kare...
Kashish: ahemmm...(clears her throat)..
Sujal murr ker dkehta hai
Sujal: tum abhi takk yehiin kharri ho??? dekho meri fikar matt kero main so jaunga...ab tum bhi ja ker so jao ok....(mischeviously)
Kashish: FINEEE!!!!!!
Sujal: (thinks....)
Akshat Pops-up: TRINGGG!!!! Sujal beta.....jab aik larki FINE bolti hai to uska matlab hota hai....not fine at alll!!! yeh woh lafz hai jo aik larki tabb bolti hai jab uss ka ghussa level top per ho......better not risk it.......
Sujal: (comes out of the thought) ummm...Kashissshhh???
Kashish who has by then settled on the floor looks up
Kashish: KIA HAI?????(full time ghussa)
Sujal: (gulps his saliva) ummm....wohhh...tumhain kia hua???
Kashish: KUCH NAHII!!!!
Akshat Pops-up: TRIINNNG!!! Sujal....tu yeh baat zehen mein dahi ki tarah jamma le....jab koi larki kisi sawal ke jawab main Kuch nahi kehti hai to siren ki ghantian bajj jani chahiye....it means u r in for serious trouble mahn....bewarree.....
Sujal: lagta to nahi keh tumhain kuch nahi hua...(innocently)
Kashish: tumhain iss se kia...tum so na araam se apne bed per...
Sujal: (sits up and starts laughing) Kashisssshhh...tum bhi na...main to mazak ker raha tha....tum to serious ho gai....
Kashish: tum kehna kia chahte ho....main harr baat ko seriously le leti hun...? mere mein sense of humor nahi hai...????
Sujal: haaan....main to...
Kashish looks at him
Kashish: kia kaha tum ne???? (angrily hehehhe)
Sujal: nahi main to keh raha tha keh tumhara sense of humor to....wowww....superb haii....bhalla main apko kuch keh skata hun???? (controlling his laughter)
Kashish: Sujal...kuch der pehle takk to tumhain sakht neend arahi thi...ab sona nahi hai???(sarcastically)
Sujal: kkia Kashish yaar tum to mere saath biwion ki tarah larr rahi ho.... (bites his tongue)
Kashish: (stands up) kia kaha tumne??? Mainnnn....??? Biwi ki tarah.....how dare u....jao main tumse baat nahi kerti...(fake ghussa)
Sujal gets up from the bed smling...Kashish apna moun dusri taraf ekr elti hai...
woh uth ker uss ke paas aker bethta hai....Kashish opens her eyes to look at him
Kashish: ab kia hai??? (ghussay main)
Sujal just smiles....aur apna haath aggay kerta hai...
Kashish looks at his hand and then herself.....
Kashish: kiaa???
Sujal: chalo utho....
Kashish: nahi main yahan theek hun...(nakhre main)
Sujal shakes his head as if saying yeh nahi sudhre gi...He holds her upper arm and drags her up....then bends down, picks her up and drops her on the bed
Kashish: Sujal yeh sab kerne ki zarurat nahi...mai neeche so jaungi...
Sujal: (seriously) bass Kashish...maine keh dia na...tum yahiin so gi...thats it...no more arguements...now go to sleep...
He turns and lies down on the floor, and puts an arm over his face, covering his eyes...
Kashish looks at him, smiles and lies down

Abhi woh donon laitay hi hotey hain keh koi darwazay per knock ekrta hai...Sujal chhere se bazuu hatata hai and luks up...
Sujal: main dekhta hun...(getting up)
Kashish: aik second Sujal...
She hurriedly gets up aur Sujal ka pillow aur sheet utha ker bed per rakhti hai...
Kashish: ab jao...
Sujal: yeh kyun???
Kashish: unhain yeh to nahi lagna chahiye na keh hum shadi shuda nahi hain...ya koi problem hai...humare beech....
Sujal nods...opens the door...its Gauri
Gauri: i am so sorry main itni raat ko agayi...lekin tum apna cell phone neeche bhul aye thay...
She looks at Sujal....
Sujal: oh...haan...thanks Gauri jee...
Gauri: Bhabhi bolo gey to ziada acha lagay ga....(smiles at him)
Sujal: okkaayyy...thanks Bhabhi...
Gauri smiles...hands him his cellfone
Gauri: ok phir main chalti hun...gud nite...kuch chhaiye ho to bata dnea
Kashish passes a smile to her...she leaves....
Sujal: phewww!!! that was a close one..
Kashish: sahee keh rahey ho...agar Bhabhi ko pata chal jata na to....
Sujal: khair choro...tum b so jao...huh???
kashish nods and lies down...Sujal ne abhi taqia neeche rakha hi hota hai keh phir se knock hota hai....woh jaldi se pillow upar rakh ke darwaza kholta hai...its Simran, Gauri's daughter
Sujal neeche dekhta hi nahi hai..kyunki smane koi chehra nahi hota to ussay lagta hai koi nahi tha..neeche dekhta hi nahi hai...
Sujal: (turns to Kashish) koi nahi hai!!!
Simran passes by....tugs his shirt
Simran: main hun uncle...(in her cute sweet voice heheh)
Sujal: arey app....sorry beta maine ap ko dekha nahi...(smiles and sits down to face her) kia kaam tha???
Simran: mujhe mumma ne bheja hai...woh keh rahi thi keh Kashish aunty ko yeh dawai dun aur yeh haldi wala dhud bhi aur kaha hai keh chup chaap woh yeh dhud pee lein..
Sujal turns to look at Kashish confused
Sujal: dawa??? dudhh....tumhari tabiyat to theek hai na???
Kashish: haan woh...(stands up and comes to Simran...take sthe glass and dawai from her) thank u beta....apni mumma ko thanks kehna...
Simran: ok aunty...gud nite...
Se leaves the room....Kashish closes the door and aavoiding Sujal's gaze she goes towards the bed...places the dawa n dudh on the bedside table...and turns to see Sujal rite in front of her...gazing at her strongly
Kashish: kia baat hai Sujal tum mujhe aisse kyun dekh rahe ho???
Sujal: tumhari tabiyat theek nai hai aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi....
Kashish: Sujall...!!! tabiyat kharab nahi hai...sirf halka sa sarr main dard tha iss liye Bhabhi se dawa le li...
Sujal: phir bhi tumhain mujhe batana chahiye tha...
Kashish: Sujal its ok..
Sujal: no its not ok!!! (holds her arms) Kashish...muje acha nahi lagta jab tumse related baat mujhe kisi aur ke mun se sunani pare....main chahta hun ke harr baat sabse pehle tum mujhe batao...u get that...
Kashish: haan baba...sorry ghalti ho gai...ainda nahi karungi....
Sujal: u better....acha ab tum lait jao
He makes her lay down on the bed.....covers her with a sheet...then sits beside her...strokes her head
Sujal: arey tumne to apni dawa li hi nahi....chalo jaldi se tablet le lo...
He makes her take the tablet....and then makes her drink the milk....
Kashish: yuccckk!!! yeh itna ganda tha...(makes a face)
Sujal: ganda hi sahi par iss se tumhari tabiat theek ho jayegi...ab tum so jao huh???
he smiles at her and gets up abd turns.....Kashish peeche se uss ka haath pakar leti hun....
Kashish: Sujall...???
Sujal: haan Kashish...
Kashish: kahan ja rahay ho??? (darri hui si)
Sujal: yahiin hun Kashish....main bass neeche...(she interrupts him)
Kashish: nahi...tum neeche nahi so gey....mujhe tumhara ehsaas apne aas paas acha lagta hai...jab takk main so nahi jati tab takk to mere pass....(chup ho jati hai)
Sujal smiles...he comes over and sits on the opposite side of the bed....facing Kashish....
Sujal: ab theek hai...??? ab tum so jao...
Kashish side palati hai.....seedhi laitati hai smiles at Sujal....aur ankhain band ekr leti hai...
Sujal also half leans on his side...facing Kashish...luking at him and stroking her head slowly....

Musiiiiccc.....

Kashish:
So jaunnn mainnnnn...tum agarrr...(she opens her eyes to luk at Sujal)
mere khawbaon main aooo......
mere khawabon main aooo....( Sujal smiles at her....keeps storking her hair)
Kho jaun main...tum agar....
meri yaadon main aoooo...meri yaadon main aooo....

Jagi nazar main......(she looks at him with an ocean of love in her eyes hehehehhe..)
Soyi nazar main...harr pall sanam tum jhilmilaoo....(Sujal looks intently at her....then slowly puts a hand over her eyes...)
So jaun maaaaiiiin...tum agaarr
mere khawabon main aoooo.....(He makes her close her eyes...and she smiles with her eyes closed)
mere khawbaon main aoooooo......
Kho jaun maiiiinnnn....tum agar....
meri yaadon main aoooo.....
meri yaadon main aoooo....(Sujal bends down and lightly kisses her forehead)

Music....Kashish turns her side, smiling....she imagines herself standing in a kitchen, with an apron on and hair tied up....doing some work when Sujal comes in and hugs ehr from behind...she turns with her mouth open and both laugh....then he cleans her forehead and cheeks jahan attay ke nishaan hote hein hehehhehehehe.....and gives her a small peck on her nose....

Sujal: (looking down at Kashish...)
Meri khushi main..shamil raho tumm.....(he turns around as well...remembering how they both had confessed their love)
Iss zindagi maaaain....shamil raho tum...
Yun to hain lakhonnn....armaan dil main....(looks at kashish and slowly touches his heart....smiles)
Mehfil main jannay mehfil raho tum...
Honton se mere...(he remembers the time when they had kissed)
Shaam sawerey...
Yunhi sanam tum muskurao...

So jaoonnn main tum agar...(he lies down on his side....smiling)
mere khawabon main aooo....
Kho jaun maiiiinnn...tum agar...(he closes his eyes and kashish's face comes in front of him)
meri yaddon main aooo...
Meri yaadon main ao...

Music....Sujal imagines himself working in the office, looking up at files when Kashish enters with some food....she makes him put away the file aur khanna tiffin main se nikal ekr uss ke samne rakhti hai...woh uss ke moun main nawal dalti hai and smiles...Sujal slowly holds her hand and kisses it while Kashish shies....he smiles at his own thought...

Kashish:
Banke sitaraaa....ankho main chamko...(she turns around to see Sujal lying down on the other side...)
In ati jati sanson main mehko...
Bass jao ake....tum meri jaan main...(She slowly moves towards him and puts a hand in his hair ruffling them, thinking he is asleep)
Dil baan ke mereee seeney main dharko...(Sujal slowly turns around....both face eachother...kashish is surprised to see he is awake heheh)
Tum mujhko chaho...(Kashish looks at Sujal....ankhain neeche ker leti hai)
Bass mujhko chaho...
Sarray jahan ko bhull jaooo...(Sujal looks at her...and then extends his arms, pulling her closer to him, in a hug like position)
So jaun main...tum agar mere khawabon main aooo...
Mere khawabi main aoo...(Kashish contently lays her head on his chest while he puts his arms around her protectively)
Kho jaun main...tum gaar...
meri yaadon main aooo...(she looks at him and smiles...)
meri yaadon main...

Sujal: Jagi nazzar main,....(Sujal kisses her forehead...)
Soyi nazar main...(Kashish raises her face to meet his gaze...)
Harr pal sanam tum jhilmilao...(Sujal slowly comes forward and kisses her cheek)
So jaunn main....tum agar....mere khawabon main aooo...
Kho jaun main....tum agar meri yadon main ao....(Kashish apna chehra sharam ke marray neeche ker leti hai....on his chest..Sujal smiles and hugs her tighter)

Both:
Mere khawabon main aooo....(Kashish closes her eyes....smiling, content lyng in his arms...)
Meri yaadooon main aooo...(Sujal also closes his eyes....with his arms around her and his chin touching her head....lol....)
Hmmmmmmmmhmmm...
ahhhmmmhmmm....

Lo jee...shukar hai yeh donon soye to sahi...in ko sulanay main pura adha ghanta aur aik gannay ki zarurat parri hehehehehehehe....ok jee do commentofy....lolz....lub ya all...kiran!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
great part yaar... kitna cute part tha...bilkul tumharii taraahh!! Love you.... post the next part soon... 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey saraaa....thanks a lot...lub yaa!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh shit...yeh main hi hun....lolz...farah ke id se ayi huun hehehehehhehe...aik kaam karna tha...sowiiee....

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