Swaron SS:Missing Life...[Chap 11 Pg 70]

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pooja123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

this part was too cute...
wanna read more asap!!!
update soon and conitnue to pm me plsss

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Namrata Jadhav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

i knw update fab hoga fhirbe kal padhake comment karke bataungi ok cya tc..

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swaron_tanha4

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Awsum di ⭐️
beautifully penned dwn... ⭐️
luved sharon agn... 😳
nd wow how sweet swayam was...swayam tu phr se sapna dekh rha hoga...wow wow wow 👏
update soon di...cnt wait to read more 😊

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Sunil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

it was awesome update
swayam nd sharon are two souls bt in each other embrace they r one
they r pouring all their love on each other with their all heart
their pure love for each other which indicates they r mean to be each other
nd finally sharon confess her love to him
n show our love to each other
i love d update

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Shishir Darsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

My comment give you jitters 😲, this was the best joke I heard in these days 😆. And don't worry about me not giving honest opinion about any work. I will definitely pin point issues which I like or don't like.

Coming to the update. It was just wow. I don't know why you were worried because this update was just awesome. One day Swayam had said - hamara first kiss bhi bahut special hoga! I bet it can't get special than this. I really liked the way how whole update started and build up a crescendo which finally culminated in their first kiss. Fantsticaly done. And the best way you did it by keeping the very essensce of their character intact. Sharon is still the one who speaks with more with her eye with Swayam than words and Swayam is still the person wo can read every heartbeat of her and is madly in love with her. So when Sharon finally confessed and kissed him I could totally see him behaving in the way you described. Similarly the way Sharon felt happy after confessing was just perfect a dn in complete sync with her character. Loved it. Will be waiting for the next update :)

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Rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Omg omg:-) Woww SUPERB SUPERB SUPERB:-):-) really FANTASTIC:-):-):-) plz cont soon:-) jus loved it:-):-)

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Wow...
Amazing megha..
Beautifully penned...
Luvd it...😊

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paro1311

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

just read the 2 parts and loved it!!

it so awesome wen these two refer to each other as "their life". thts just so swaron.

i know this is fictional writing but its such a pleasure reading this wer sharon tries to make swayam feel special.

Sharon had decided that she is going to open up to him. She had told herself that there was really no need for her to have any inhibitions with the man who could read her in and out. She had decided she is going to shower him with all the love she could. She had decided she is going to go out of her way for him. He deserved every bit of it. She had decided she is going to make him feel special. She knew she couldn't turn back time, but she could create new memories. She had decided to finally, let go!

this is exactly wat i wish to c on the show as well :) thanx for writing somethin along these lines.

ps: thanx for the pm binju :)

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User123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Awesum part Di.
Loved it! <3
more Over because humesha swayam sharon ko special feel karvata hai, but this time sharon is making efforts to make him feel special!
Mast Updt tha!
Loved it :*
Thank Youu for the Pm.
Eagerly waiting for the nxt part
Keep Writting :)
Love,MiNi