Swaron SS:Missing Life...[Chap 11 Pg 70]

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

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UNRES
I have no words to describe how much I loved this update.Sort of words right now.Actually I read this part 10 times still I m thinking like idiot what to write...:p
Coming to update
Seriously it is ur first write ups na?It was a beautifully penned chapter.We always see swayam pampering sharon but its really good to read sharon finally showing her feeling n open up to him.Swayam shocked state was amusing.Hehe he still think he is dreaming..:p.Loved the part where they pour out their love through a kiss.It was like a dream to see swaron like this in each other embrace.
Loved the update
Waiting for next part eagerly

Edited by sadiyaswaron - 12 years ago

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

RES 4 BINJU DII

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Gudiya di...🤗
Aapne itni achi update dhi hai ki now I m short of words...u have penned down each and every word amazingly...a born writer I must say...:)

Coming to the update...Loved the way Sharon told that she likes to spend her time alone with swayam...oh my seems like she have literally fallen head over heels on swayam...:)

"Sharon: No, no more, no more tears Swayam. I can't give you any more tears. No more."
I loved the way she said these lines...it shows how much she cares for him and also her pain to see him in tears were also clearly depicted...
Not to forget their waltz inside the room...Sharon describing swayam as the man who can read her in and out was actually perfect for swayam...and oh my the kiss was heavenly...being their first kiss it was indeed way too special...

"kya yeh sab sach mein ho raha hai? M sure I am dreaming. Phir se Swayam, phir se tu jaagte hue sapne dekh raha hai."
Aww how cute was swayam here...it's not just sharon but even I was adoring him through these lines...:D
"cause I love you Sharon, I love you a lot. Cause you are a part of me. Apne dil ki baat jaane ke liye words ki zarurat nahi hoti na?"
This is again one of my favorite part here...And their last confession was too good...it clearly conveyed their pure love and made them more magical...

U just portrayed swaron just the way I wanted them to be in the show...once again awesome dii...😳

Edited by sweetsimi123 - 12 years ago

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

RES 4 NAMRATA

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awww..!! first i anna give u a tight vala jhappi for this update 🤗

sharon doing sooo much for our swayam is like a dream come true for me..

evry1 here write's on swayam's POV wen it comes to expressing love but u wrote it the oder way n it turned out to b sooo beautiful girl.. 👍🏼

ur really a gud writer i must say.. coz this being ur first writeup u hav written it so beautifully

SHaron planning a suprise.. she saying dat she missed him.. those cute moments between dem were beautifully penned..!!

continue writing dear n giv us such fab stuff to read.. 😊

God Bless..!! 😊

Edited by sweetsimi123 - 12 years ago

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

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unres

di awesome update 🤗

dis was totally unexpected from sharon

luved sharon's dis side...totally a pleasant shocker

beautifully written 👏 ⭐️

This wasn't mere collaboration of two physical bodies. This kiss marked the mingling of two souls, the mingling of two soul mates.

continue soon

Edited by ShrutikaSwaRon - 12 years ago

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

... kya comment du samjh nhi aarhahai 😃😭😃😃😃👏👏

fab PART

THANK 4 SCRAP😆😆

LOVE IT PLZ UPDATE NEXT CHPTER 👏👏👏

REALLY FAB 1😭👏👏👏👏😃

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Megha dii you are just fantastic. Yaar aap tho kamal hai ji👍🏼 Wow what an update, sharons love pouring out to swayam is so well written, aw i really wish that entry and meeting of swaron is as sweet as this update. It is awesome wonderfull and absolutely fantasticcc. You are one of the splendid updater of the forum. Good job dii very well done.