Swaron SS:Missing Life...[Chap 11 Pg 70]

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Diii... 🤗
You know,this upd
ate got me goosebumps...
I mean,it was just 'Heavenly'...
The kiss scene was described so well...you have mixed your perfect care,tenderness,affection...to curve out this epic scene of two soulmates...only a great writer can do this job,dii... 🤗
I have just one more thing left, to say... 😊

I am in ❤️ with your writing... 😳

loads of love... 😊

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enrique305

@enrique305

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

amazing update

great job

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Roger

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

unres my comment on page 6

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

That was a very sweet update and I loved how it all felt like a dream for Swayam and that Sharon actually confessed her love for him !! Really sweet !!

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Ausum update 👏
Swaron in each other embrace n d way dey were pouring out their love to each other i loved readg d update🤗
"He knew, he just knew that his love, has finally fallen in love, and fallen deep!""No, no more, no more tears Swayam. I can't give you any more tears. No more."I liked d way she said dese lines.it showed her pain to see him in tears...
Sharon's pov were she decides to open up finally to swayam was beautifully written..
"KaiseTum mujhe itni acchi tarah kaise samajhte ho? How did you know mujhe kuch kehna hai?" "cause I love you Sharon, I love you a lot. Cause you are a part of me. Apne dil ki baat jaane ke liye words ki zarurat nahi hoti na?"dat was a perfect n cute reply
The kiss scene was discribed nicely "Both were pouring all their love through the kiss. This wasn't mere collaboration of two physical bodies. This kiss marked the mingling of two souls, the mingling of two soul mates."
U just portrayed swaron just the way i wanted to c dem in d3
Thank u simren for d pm.. cant wait for the next part...

Edited by lassipriya - 12 years ago

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

sorry 4 being late nice update.the way u wrote everything was absolute brilliant. u r new addition in the list of good writer present here.

and sim thanks 4 pm.

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Trouble_Magnet

@Trouble_Magnet

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Awesome update..:D

you've written it beautifully..:)

P.S. I didn't get the PM ..:'(
Thank god I had bookmarked it..😆

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Kesha

@Radiance.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

*faints*

SUCH A GOOD PART!

Update soon 😉

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Read two parts in one go. Amazing concept, no rather a simple concept with amazing execution. This is the very SwaRon that we all know, Swayam expressing his love through words and Sharon through actions. Both the parts were awesomely penned down, thank you for the PM's and update sooner please

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--Rumeli--

@--Rumeli--

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

sweetly described how swayam was thoroughly in trance and sharon wanted to make him feel loved!they indeed couldnt get enuf of each other!!pretty romanctic they are goin to spend a cosy vaction with each other for all the time they missed being together!I liked it how you potrayed Sharon to be so expressive towards swayam about her feelings!beautifully written as usual Megha!
do update soon!cant wait to read the next part!

Edited by --Rumeli-- - 12 years ago

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