Swaron SS:Missing Life...[Chap 11 Pg 70] - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

i told u my condition!!

guys who ever wants me to update, bug deeps...m gonna write part 3 only after she updates u and me back to us!!!! 😃

good luck deeps! 😉 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: megsy


i told u my condition!!

guys who ever wants me to update, bug deeps...m gonna write part 3 only after she updates u and me back to us!!!! 😃

good luck deeps! 😉 😃😃😃



this is not fair 😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
u said correct... there is more yaayness in this update...
but m short of words...!!!! jab shock se bahar aaungi tab kuch bol paaungi na...!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: riafulwani

u said correct... there is more yaayness in this update...

but m short of words...!!!! jab shock se bahar aaungi tab kuch bol paaungi na...!!!!!


jaldi apne shock se bahar aa ria!!! m waitinggg 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: megsy


jaldi apne shock se bahar aa ria!!! m waitinggg 😃


sorry dii...!!!1
aapke shock ki intensity bohot high hai...
thoda time lagega... lolz... :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: marauder

My comment give you jitters 😲, this was the best joke I heard in these days 😆. And don't worry about me not giving honest opinion about any work. I will definitely pin point issues which I like or don't like.

Coming to the update. It was just wow. I don't know why you were worried because this update was just awesome. One day Swayam had said - hamara first kiss bhi bahut special hoga! I bet it can't get special than this. I really liked the way how whole update started and build up a crescendo which finally culminated in their first kiss. Fantsticaly done. And the best way you did it by keeping the very essensce of their character intact. Sharon is still the one who speaks with more with her eye with Swayam than words and Swayam is still the person wo can read every heartbeat of her and is madly in love with her. So when Sharon finally confessed and kissed him I could totally see him behaving in the way you described. Similarly the way Sharon felt happy after confessing was just perfect a dn in complete sync with her character. Loved it. Will be waiting for the next update :)


bhai joke nahi hai..sach haii... pata nahi agar expectations meet nahi hote to nayi writer ka apne in depth analysis se kya karte! [:p]

i am glad tujhe acchi lagi... relaxed!! [:p]
and m glad u could visualise swayam and sharon behavin the way i described them...u made my day as a writer!

tere se scrap pe baat karti hoon...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: riafulwani


sorry dii...!!!1
aapke shock ki intensity bohot high hai...
thoda time lagega... lolz... :P

areey tu to gayab hone waali hai ek do dinno mein.. phir march mein aayegi...tab tak agar mujhe wait karayegi to main to hanging megha of missing life ho jaungi!

yeh kya likha maine [:p]
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: megsy

areey tu to gayab hone waali hai ek do dinno mein.. phir march mein aayegi...tab tak agar mujhe wait karayegi to main to hanging megha of missing life ho jaungi!

yeh kya likha maine [:p]


haan di.. ye kya likha aapne...
vo padhne k baad mera bhi yahi dialogue tha...!!!
Edited by riafulwani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: riafulwani


haan di.. ye kya likha aapne...
vo padhne k baad mera bhi yahi dialogue tha...!!!


hanging megha of missing life 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: megsy


hanging megha of missing life 😲


hehe...!!!!! haan...
koi baat nahi march is not too far...!!!!!!!!! lolz :p :P :P

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