My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH

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Krishana Tulsi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#41

omg this is a great fan fic i love it sooo mcuh its sooo gud!!! plz plz plz continue soon i love it lots...but plz let angad n kripa be together n dont seperate them too mcuh!!!! ...just a sugesstion!!! ...well dun its fab ...absolutly lov it! 👏 👏

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purishivani

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Posted: 19 years ago

#42

Hey great job! u are an wasome writer! Continue very soon!! 😛

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Mahek

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Posted: 19 years ago

#43

nice fanfic 👏 👏
continue soon 😉

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himani

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Posted: 19 years ago

#44

wow i just read ur fan-fic!r u sure this is ur first fan-fic? cuz uwrite like a pro!!! 😉 i luv ur story!sooo happy a-k r together....priya and raj will find someone eventually..hopefully 😆 cont soon
himani 😛

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Kimzzz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#45

so gudddddddd!!!!!!!!!
please please continue soon!

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girlie18

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Posted: 19 years ago

#46

awesome prts
jus read 4rm da start
cont soon
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Aisha_86

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Posted: 19 years ago

#47

sorry guys its taking long 😭 i'll continue asap!

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rani

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Posted: 19 years ago

#48

hey i just caught up with the whole thing and i must say that it is AWESOME!!! please continue soon.

i luv the way you include pics. it helps us imagine the scene better.

luv rani

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~kRiPaFaN8~

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Posted: 19 years ago

#49

i really like this fan-fic! please continue when you can! 😃

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Aisha_86

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Posted: 19 years ago

#50

Ok guys I am reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally sorry for making u wait so long😭 But I'll continue now..

Ok so.. Angad and kripa have finally realised there true feelings for each others...It's the next day and Angad has woken up early...Everybody is surprised when hes right on time for breakfast and he is chearfull! Nobody ever saw him smile first thing in the morning... he's always grumpy😉...In fact nobody ever saw him in the morning..But angad doesn't come sit for breakfast..

Naina: Angad beta kahaan jaa rahe ho tum? (why oh woman let him go😳) Don't you wanna have breakfast?

Angad: No mum I'll have some on the way...Mujhe kuch kaam hai..

Dilip: what kaam? Office is closed today..

Angad: woh...I'm going to mandir...

Dilip: you are going to?!

Angad: Mandir dad..you know pray to god..?

No one can believe what they are hearing and start laughing out loud..Angad ignores them and leaves..

Once reached there he sees his destiny...Kripa is waiting there for him..She was worriying all night about what would happen with priya and their families so she decided they should go to the Mandir..Angad never really believed in god.. But this time he believed in Kripa..

Kripa: Finally angad..Mein kab se tumhara wait kar rahi hoo.>

Angad: I told you to come with me.. Didn't I 😉 Angad looks naugthy at her..

Kripa: Tum jaante ho na.. If we went together my mom would have foud out and startr asking me al those questions😆.. Lekin chalo ab..

Angad and kripa both step in the mandir and start praying...

Kripa prays to god: "Bhagwan plz angad ko uski saari khushiyan dena.." While on the other hand angad prays for kripa's happiness..THey both are each others happiness.. now isn't that easy😳

Then a pandit comes and telss them to take some parshad..He puts a tikka on angads forehead and wants to put on on kripa's too..But angad stops him (ok guys seriously i stole this from another serial.. but this would look damn good on A-K)...he than puts the tikka on kripa himself and they both start gazing at each other...The pandit is like Aheem! And they snap out of there dream...

They go somewhere private and start talking about there future togheter..

Kripa: angad mujhe bohat dar lag raha hai.. what will our parents do.. What will priya do?

Angad: I know kripa..But you don't worry mein sab theek kar doo ga.. Let priuya come ones.. I want to tell her first before I tell anybody else...I promise everything will be alright..

Angad sees kripa is worrying sick and tries to keep her hopes up while he isn't confident himself...

Angad: Kripa...I know you are the one I want to be with..No one will drive us apart..

Angad kisses kripa.s forehead😳

Kripa feels relieved and they both go home..This time angad does drop kripa and someones is watching out of his window...

Now both angad and kripa are waiting for the scare of their life... wanna now what it is? Keep on reading😆

To be continued😳

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