My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
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brilliant part
cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awsum Jaan,

I loved ur FF, Try to post more parts before saturday because after that I will off for a long vocation. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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woah! yaar that was REALLY awesome! I LOVE this fan-fic A LOT!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
omg this is great!!!! plz continue lov it!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Kripa and Angad have reached home.. Angad has dropped kripa home.. and someone saw that😕

Kripa walks in and her eyes fall open... Mr Mittal and Raj are having tea wit Kripa's mom.. She spots her daughter and runs towards kripa with a lot of joy on her face...She hugs her daughter..

Neelam: Kripa beta I'm so happy....Tumhe pata hai..Meine tumhaari engagement fix kardi hai.. WITH RAJ!..

Kripas mouth falls open.. she can't believe what shes hearing..This can't be true.. not know.. not know she has found the love of her life......

Kripa: But mo...

Neelam interrupts her daugter: You don't know kripa dis is the happiest day of my life... Meine tumhare dad ko phone pe bata diya..He's coming this weekend and he's soo happy... You know I liked raj from the beginning.. and I know you like him too..

Kripa is quit and keeps staring at her mother...she has never seen her mother this happy.. but she hasn't ever felt this bad before... Her mothers smile isn't making her happy a bit...Kripa's runs upstairs..

Neelam: sharma gayi..(i hate you witch😡)

***Scene switches over to the khanna's***

Angad still doesn't know anything and is very happy he enters his house and wants to run upstairs...Sur stops her brother..

Sur: Bhai..I've to tell you something very funny..Guess whos upstairs in your room..

Sur gives her brother a naughty look...Angad doesn't like the sound of it a bit..

Sur: PRIYAAA!!!! Priya comes out of the room and runs towards angad and hugs him tightly (she was in his room..looking out of the window..saw kripa getting out of angads car😳..but she acts innocent)

Angad is like W😳T and steps out of their hug...

Priya: Angad I'm so happy to see you... wait I'll be right back I want to show you something..

Priya goes back into the room...to get angad his gift..

Sur: Bhai theres another surprise... guess what😉 Raj and uncle have gone over to Kripa's house to ask for her hand.. remember raj is totally in love with kripa....

Angad: WHAT!!!!! This cant be happening!



Angad runs out of his house and runs straight to kripas house..Sur doesn't understand what her brother is doing she is astonished..

Angad reaches kripas house and sees her mother talking and laughing with Mr Mittal and Raj...

Neelam sees angad and jumps off the sofa: Angad beta! I'm so glad you came.. Yeh lo mithaai khao..

She stuffs barfi in angads mouth.. angad takes it out of her hand and eats it hesitantly...

Neelam: Angad i am so happy...Dekho na humne Kripa or Raj ki shaadi fix kar li hai...Their engagement is next week...

Angad looks at aunty with full tears in his eyes.. nobody notices this.. Just then Kripa joins them and looks with angad with a lot of guilt.. He can't believe she said yes.. But he knows she didn't have any other choice.. Angad and kripa both look at each other while Kripa's mom goes on and on about the engagement..

Neelam: Angad tum mere bete jaise ho.. Naina is like my sister... And I want you to arrange Kripa's engagement party.. You and sur have to help me out... Why don't you do the invitations...

Angad can't believe this... Inviting people to the engagement of the love of his life?! Angad looks away and wants to walk a way and never look back again.. But he feels he is leaving behind something precious..

Angad turns around and says: Ji aunty..I'll do whatever you want me to do...

He looks at kripa and kripa looks away and starts crying.. Again nobody notices..

Angad walks out of the house and kripa goes back to her room... They both start crying over their Kismat...




***Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai?*****

Now what point have angad and kripa reached in their lives??? What will happen next?

STay tuned😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part!!! plz continue soon! 😛 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome twist 👏 ... but also sad! 😭 hope a-k get back soon anyways awesome part!!!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I know its too sad for both of them.. But I've to put some drama in it😉😆

Ok so Angad and kripa are both heartbroken... Kripa is in her room thinking of what Angad might be doing and thinking.. She can't catch any sleep and goes for a walk... She goes to the same temple where she and angad shared there first hug😳

There she sees him.. Angad is also there.. Feeling the loneliest man on the world.



Kripa: Angad.....

Angad turns around and is amazed to see kripa here at this time..

Angad: Kripa tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho? Go home it's late..

Kripa: listen angad..plz

Angad: Listen to what?? You are getting engaged next week.. And the funniest thing is.. I'LL ARRANGE IT! Unbelievable isn't it..

Angad gives a forced laugh

Kripa : Angad I'm very sorry..

Angad: NO kripa just stop it.. I won't let you get engaged! We love each other... I told you no one will drive us apart... TUM MERI HOO! Only mine! Understand?

Kripa: Angad stop it! Why dont u understand.. It's too late... You are already engaged to priya and my parents have arranged my marriage too.. We cant be this selfish... Look at all the hearts we will break..

Angad: Selfish? You aren't giving me my happiness.. YOU ARE BEING SELFISH! You are scared of waht your parents will think.. You don't care about my feelings DO YOU? Can't you just give me MY happiness?



Kripa starts crying and looks away.. she can't face angad anymore..

Angad: Tumhaari khamoshi sab kuch keh gayi...I won't bother you anymore..

Angad leaves a heartbroken kripa and himself is feeling like he'll die if he walks one more step away..

The next day angad doesn't want to come out of his bedroom... His mom comes in..

Naina: ANgad beta utho...Wake up..What happened?

Angad: I'm not feeling good...just leave me alone for a while okay?

Naina's gut feelings say something isn't right here....she goes to priya and tells her to talk to him..

Priya: Angad...Come on.. we are going on a trip today... and you have to come with us..

Angad: No I'm not feeling very well...BUt maybe you are right.. Maybe it will be good for me.. Who's going?

Priya: Everybody! You know even kripa will go coz my dad insisted becoz raj insisted.. Gosh I really don't want her to go...

Angad: Uhmm actually.. I can't come you know... I...I have to go for a business trip myself... and I'll be leaving today too..

Priya: NO! You have to come..! I wont talk to you ever again

Angad: Look I'm really sorry but business comes first.. I HAVE TO BE THERE! Theres no way i'll miss that .. SO I AM SORRY..

Angad looks away in no mood of any discussion on this point.. PRiya is angry and walks away..

In the living room everyone has gathered around to leave for the trip...Kripa doesnt see angad..and goes upstairs...She has to talk to him..

angad is standing near the window and kripa knock on the door..

Angad: LEave me alone I told you I am not coming..

Kripa: Angad....

ANgad hears kripa's voice and turns around..



Angad: Kripa..What are you doing...Don't you have to go or something?

Kripa: Yes I'm going...Par...Maine tumhe kuch dena tha..

Kripa wants to give angad a letter... but angad doesn't even look at her.. he has tears in his eyes and asks her to leave... Kripa leaves is on the table and asks him to read it ONCE for her sake... Then she leaves..

Kripa and her mom leave with the khanna's and the mittals... Everyone is disappointed Angad couldn't come becoz of the businesstrip and ask dilip.. Dilip says he doesn;t know anything about a businesstrip and pria is Amazed...Kripa knows better😉

Kripa is in the car..Thinking about angad and all their moments together...



The song "Dil teri deewanagi mein kho gaya hai..Ho gaya Ishq tumse ho gaya hai"😆 from the movie kismat plays on the background..and kripa cries.. and hides her face as if she's sleeping.. They have almost arrived at the dilips farmhouse..

Meanwhile angad is still in his room and sees the letter kripa wrote for him.. Hesitantly he opens it up..

He reads whats written in it..:


"I know I've hurt you..I cant see you heartbroken..But I can't see my parents heartbroke either...This is what they want.. And I Can make them happy...even if though I'll never be happy.. coz my happiness lies with you..

Kripa has also written a little poem which breaks angads heart into thousands of pieces...

"Mein bewafa..Mein Bekadar..
Meine tera dil tora..Mera bhi dil toota magar
Tujhko nahi iski khabar..Teri yaad mein.. Dil thaam kar..
Tarpoo ghi main..saari Umar.."


Angad starts crying all over again and realises kripa's right.. Shes as heartbroke as he is and she is as helpless as he is.. He can't break priya's and his parents heart either..Angad realises he has to talk to kripa and rushes to the car..

Meanwhile kripa and the others are already at the farmhouse.. Everybody is having fun inside..But kripa is walking outside alone...Suddenly she hears a car brake behind her... and she turns around... Angad steps out of the car and looks at kripa with tearfull eyes... HE opens his arms and kripa runs to him with the light of speed...

They hug and angad kisses her al over..:




****Mil gayi Manzil mujhko..Par raasta abhi khatam nahi huwa😳***

To Be continued😛

Edited by Aisha_86 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part... but y so much heartbreak for angad and kripa? 😭 cont soon plz!!!!!! 👏

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