JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
"NOW" what I could say..."Dil keh raha hai/Tujh se yum rishta jod loon/Teri Dhadkanon ko choon loon/Tera jism od loon." Jaya I guess this is exactly what Adrit and Shyla think.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaishree soft beautiful story. I like the pace the story is unfolding. Please make a longer update the next one. Request. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jay awesome superb fantastic. This a beautiful mature love story. Am in love with it. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
THEN [NAREN]

Naren arrived in his own style. People seemed to love him immediately. His smile always melted even the most hard hearted.

They sat discussing for hours about everything.

Suddenly in-between the nth cup of coffee he asked,

Who is this Shyla?

I have been hearing her name pop up in almost every sentence, he asked with a wink.

Found a village belle, he asked laughing.

Did you sing "Gori tera Gaon bada''" bursting into loud laugh.

"Oh shut Up Naren" she is just someone helping me at the clinic.

"Oh really'?

Yes, REALLY.

Adrit grinned, and turned towards the sea, and the Topic of their discussion appeared in his view.

He did not realize he was staring, till he felt a tap on his shoulder.

Hmmm so that is Shyla?

I think I will introduce myself.

Before Adrit could stop him, Naren had already taken off.

Ok, but keep safe distance, she is accident prone Adrit laughingly called out.

He watched as Naren charmed Shyla with his smile. She was dwarfed by Naren's height.

She slightly moved her head and caught him looking towards them.

Their eyes met, seemed to freeze, then both flushed and turned away.

She was soon laughing at something he was telling her.

More animated talking, Naren was drawing her attention towards Adrit, both looked towards him, she was nodding and turned her gaze which rested on him and it looked like she was smiling at him. He returned it with a smile and a wave.

Naren returned with a big grin, she is so sweet.

She is all yours Naren , Adrit dimpled.

Na, you know I am deeply in love.

But, Adrit she will make you a lovely wife.

No, not interested,

One, I am married to my work. Don't need any distractions,

Two, she is way too young. Adrit said conclusively.

Naren remained non committal.[WORK ,, YOUNG!!! MY FOOT]


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏Bravo super update. I love this Naren guy. He is so sweet ekdum pakka dost. So thick chemistry bet Adrit and Shyla perfect setup to fall deeply in love. Next update jaldi. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Naren is Saurav...u made him thinking Saurav..100%

okk so Shyla is too young to Adrit ..i like it😉

and about previous update..its breathtaking again..but couldn't understand how one is able to eat chocolate ,ccoffe , egg with surgical mask..and if one needs to wear surgical mask theyn how it can be taken off..for sometime
Edited by Kadamvari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm.Jaya "THEN"(NAREN) should help Adrit to get married.😉Till then allow me to ing.
P.S. Naren seems taller than Shyla...is his character played by our dear SRJ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
ARu,, she did not eat it.. Read it again.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

Hmm.Jaya "THEN"(NAREN) should help Adrit to get married.😉Till then allow me to ing.
P.S. Naren seems taller than Shyla...is his character played by our dear SRJ?


Well yes i did have SR in mind when i wrote about Naren.. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

Naren is Saurav...u made him thinking Saurav..100%

okk so Shyla is too young to Adrit ..i like it😉

and about previous update..its breathtaking again..but couldn't understand how one is able to eat chocolate ,ccoffe , egg with surgical mask..and if one needs to wear surgical mask theyn how it can be taken off..for sometime


See told u sooner or later u will know who the characters are.
I will tell u about the mask a little later. 😆

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