JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahh Jaya now I get it Naren is tall because he is modeled on Vishnu😉..So who is Kruti modeled after?? Nice update so Naren will play cupid for Adrit and Shyla. Nice guy. Waiting to read next. The eye lock described is superb. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

NOW


His mobile rang, stopping his thoughts.

He pulled the mobile from his pocket.

As he did so, a handkerchief slipped out and fell slowly to the ground.

He turned to answer the call.

The white handkerchief caught her eye.

She looked at the beautifully embroidered A on it…

she kept looking at the A,

She went still, her lips dry, the scar on her face throbbed painfully, she felt bright lights inside of her eyes , her lips moved soundlessly,

She felt a drop of sweat form on her forehead, a panic attack was coming on, her head ached,

She pressed the little button on her wheel chair,

She kept pressing it repeatedly,

Adrit heard the clicking and turned,

He stopped talking when he saw her,

She was sweating profusely and was feverishly moving her wheelchair.

He moved towards her, his hands stretched to hold the wheel chair.

[HE DID NOT EVEN KNOW HER NAME]

"LA' he called….

[ WHY DID THE NAME I KEEP HIDDEN IN SOUL COME TO MY LIPS]

She choked, she could not breathe as she heard "LA"

She struggled to get up from the chair, but felt darkness come over her as she passed out.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my Shyla slowly but surely getting glimpses of her past life. So the meeting ended just there. La so he called her La...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
La

i can't breathe after reading ur updates..and i will lose breathe soon if i don't get more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm.Interesting Jaya...please update the next part as soon as possible. I eagerly want to know what does happen after Shyla's Panic attack?? It seems she had an accident and lost her memory partially and this panic attack may help her to revive.
Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lolz... i am trying to write really quick ,, but I am trying to build up their love for each other and their getting together. 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
thank Rimi, Aru and consu for reading it and commenting so quickly. Makes me want to get the next update up and about quickly
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

thank Rimi, Aru and consu for reading it and commenting so quickly. Makes me want to get the next update up and about quickly


You are most welcome Jaya🤗.And please allow me to sing something on your "NOW"...
"Kehte hai khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye/kissi na kissi ko hai banaya har kissi ke liye/tera milna hai uss Rab ka ishara mano/Mujhko banaya hai tere jaise he kissi ke liye/kehte hai khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye/kissi na kissi ko hai banaya har kissi ke liye/kuch toh hai tujhse Rabta/Kaise hum kahein humein kya pata/kuch toh hai tujh se Raabta/ Tu humsafar ho/phir kya fikr ho/jeenein ki wajah yehi hai/marna issi ke liye..."
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u rimi darling,, that is so beautiful and apt ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Naren..is Saurabh..!! Who else with heart warming smile and twinkling eyes..!!

Shyla is way too younger..!!Now that has doubled my interest..!! 😆
Though I was already imagining them..that way..m glad u mentioned it..!! Exciting..!!

Thanks..Do continue..Jaya.. 😊

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