JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: consuela

Hahaha ROFL not on your FF dear. I will leave that to you. 😉



hope ur bhana's will create a new ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Jaya superbly written. But I have missed so many parts already . Need time to go through with them. But your 'NOW" is something I can imagine.It is a nice piece of painting for me.😳And "SETTING UP" is so sweet and refreshing.
Will comment on your other parts later.
And one request if possible please do PM me whenever you update. Please.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaya your "OH NO" is so sweet and little hilarious. And Shyla is painter and she paints Adrit.😆And Adrit thinks to buy an helmet and armour for his protection🤣wow.
"NOW" is very good and describes both Adrit and Shyla's situation well. Jaya I bow to you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaya I am agreeing with you."SHE SHOULD STOP FALLING" .Otherwise Adrit will not have any of his bones unbroken.😆But seriously what does tarun Sharma do with Shyla's dupatta??
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Posted: 12 years ago
"CONTINUED" is hmm...1. Shyla and her inner voice conversation is interesting.
2.Her mother Mala is very caring.
3. her cousin brothers Vishak and Tarun are just like our divine brothers.Love them.
4.She should stop falling.😆
5. Her family is very beautiful and full of warmth and love. Just like our Mahadev family.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow am looking forward to Adrit's first confrontation with Shya. So much of nervous excitement. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..a whole day passed without any injuries to Dr. Adrit..!! That's an achievement..!! 😆

Dr.Kruti..another..close friend of A..Hmmm..!!

The present scenario is full of tension..interesting..!!

Thanks..Jaya.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice so do I see a triangle love story in the making. The thought of kruti making him happy interesting. Should be a very close friend and colleague. Looking forward to the next update. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rimi , consu , ARu , Sia limmy Karuna thank u all for reading dears.
Next update coming up girls. ,
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Posted: 12 years ago


NOW

She wheeled herself to the edge of the sit out.

The breeze gently blew her hair.

He sat watching her silently.

She turned, sensing his gaze.

He smiled,

She wanted to reach out.

She smiled,

He wanted to take that mask off.

Adrit was always extremely patient in getting to know his patients.

But this time he felt impatient, restless and a sense of urgency.

He picked up the bowl of chocolates and approached her.

Chocolate... he extended one towards her.

Her fingers brushed against his as she took it.

A tingle seemed to run through both of them.

She felt a warmth grow on her cheeks.

He looked at his fingers.

A touch...a touch... How he missed / longed for someone's touch.

He looked towards her..

First time in years, he felt a tears forming in his eyes.

Why is this stranger making me feel...


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago

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