Arhi SS|New Year's Resolutions|LastPart- B&C p130 *complete!*

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Hey!

Thanks for the PM.

Well-written.

Descriptive.

Lengthy 😊

I like that Payal seems to be aware of the way Khushi is behaving ... interesting.

Khushi's camadie with her bro-in-law is amusing here. Bless them 😳

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HPfan24

@HPfan24

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Loved it.
I always wanted Payal to have a significant role in the show. She was so protective over Khushi during the beginning, but that seemed to have been forgotten later on. It's so nice to see that aspect in your story.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Please update soon.

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kpk1002

@kpk1002

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Well worth the long wait😊 Please keep the updates coming...love this series❤️

Thanks for the PM.

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yadiyada

@yadiyada

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Loved the update. Was worth the wait..looking forward to the next update. Please please make it soon!

I like this Arnav very much!

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

lovely. i really adore your writing style. the khushi payal bond that was so great in the serial unfortunately was not explored on our screens. i love your treatment of it. the reactions of the young payal were heart rending.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

LOVED THE UPDATE LOVED HOW PAYAL KNEW HER LITTLE SISTER WAS KEEPING SOMETHING FROM HER BUT WAS NOT SURE WHAT LOVED KHUSHI WAS FEELING GULITY FOR LIYING TO HER AND KHUSHI TIRED OF FIGHTING WITH ASR LOVED THEIR SISTERLY BOND THANKS FOR THE PM

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Atyay

@Atyay

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Fantastic update!! Loved it. 👏
Please continue soon...

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archa2810

@archa2810

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Poor akash.. He must b praying that khushi does not spill the beans

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Oh I just loved it, did not want it to get over, I was mesmerised by the words and the scene created by them...I could vividly picture it all!

Loved her turmoil, her emotions and her replaying the words and trying to analyse them, her confusion and the implications were so beautifully described...

Loved the entire scene with payal, payal though quiet seems to be Khushi s strength and more than just a sister, loved their relationship...

Loved how Arnav cannot get over her in her simple and natural stuff and he wants more...

Loved it all, cannot wait for part 2