UPDATE !!!
I actually checked the date of posting 2 to 3 times before reading it !!
Amazing Part !!
For me the highlight of the chapter was the relationship you depicted between Payal and Khushi ...
The way you described both of their views , it was really heartwarming to read about depiction of such a beautiful and soulful relationship between the sisters ...
The understanding , bonding , vibrations , intuition and everything was so amazing btw the soul sisters (felt like calling them so, after reading this update ..)
Khushi really is confused about her feelings , his feelings and everything that is related to them !!
Love her carefree nature she has among everyone ...
However long the update is , it always seems short !! Some greedy person I am .. !!
Ooh !! The ending was superb !! Cant seem to have the patience to wait for the next part !!!
Update Soon ..
Waiting ..
PS : Have sent Buddy request . Please do send PM..
Thanks ..
PPS : May we hope for an chapter of ' Mohhobat Door Jaane Na De ' ?
Thanks !!
Edited by RainyDays - 12 years ago
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