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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#311

It was so nice to read the update for this beautiful FF !! Thank you very much for updating.

NK and his meddling is going to be fun to read. Also Arnav's realisation of his emotions is an interesting journey to read.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#312

So Khushi is quite adamant about not going to Shantivan ...

what will Arnav's reaction be I wonder 😆

Payal realised that something was bothering K ...

waiting for the next chapter ... 😆

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katunkka

@katunkka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

I love the fact that its very detailed. Aww khushi must hqve been hurt for her to gp to such length to avoid shantivan.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

good to see ur update after such a long long time dear

i was missing this story

thx for the awesome writing -

i always love the elaborate descriptive way of your writing - it has a very special effect on your readers, dear

super awesome part -

will wait for the next one

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

So glad to see ur update after a long gap.

Interesting update and i guess next chapter will be more captivating.

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#316

Ohh if the last update belonged to Aakash, this one belonged to Payal. At least for me. What an affectionate, selfless, perceptive and loving sister... looking out for her baby sister; nothing about Khushi would miss her notice. Loved her! Also your description of Khushi's gut wrenching pain and guilt, her efforts to deal with the war between her heart and her mind. I am glad she is resilient, sticking to her resolution of staying away from Arnav.

Now there was a precap, does that mean we'll have our next update soon? Please?

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meem17

@meem17

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Loved it
Cant wait for more
Thanks for the pm

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#318

Really great...
Amazing how you have characterized Payal as someone who can read beyond words & lies of Khushi. The insight into their relationship how it started and grew over the years was fabulous.
It's not only Payal but Khushi also understood that her sister is doubting her reasons and well may be able to catch her lie.
The ligh-hearted moment in the end with Akash coming and Khushi telling him how she liked his look from the previous day was great.
And then came the moment I was thinking if will happen or not - Arnav & Khushi face to face even after so many trials on her part to dodge any sort of meeting him.
Brilliant.. Can't wait for the next part.. Spoilers seem so much fun...

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SS88

@SS88

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#319

Oh finally! Welcome back :) A very nice update. And if our Payaliya continues to be the observant one and Arnav the lovesick Romeo, then I'm sure she'll put two and two together and realize why her sister wanted to stay away as she correctly surmised!