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yas23 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...wow...wow
wht a mindblowing update...that really is amazing
hats of to thm the way they planned everything to catch sik was superb bt at the end unfortunately went worng
loved arjun nd the pilot sence was so funny
cant wait for ariya millan
waiting to read more
thanks once again for the pm
update soon
nd ples ples pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg your story is full of so many twists and turns.
when arjun and team surround skinader i was like finally arjun had the upper hand finally he is going to teach skkiy a lesson but turns out he still doesn't know where riya was.
it was really well written didn't know what to except while reading it. really good ff love reading it. looking forward to read riya's and arjun's milan
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx for the update 👍🏼 It was wonderful! I really loved the twist in the story... the part were they are all disguised and fool sik... it was just too smart! Way to go ETF team for pulling something like that off without sik knowing 👏 Sik should have know who he was dealing with 😉 I just hope that soon riya and arjun come back home safe and sound. You have done a wonderful job putting expressing everyones emotions and also by expressing the situations in the story and keeping the readers glued to ur ff. Keep up the great work
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry I didn't comment before, I had gotten very sick. Part 8 was amazing!I hadn't thought that arjun would have found out were sikander was heading. Part 9: hats off to you! You deserve a standing ovation! I mean the way you showed how the ETF team found siki and how they outsmarted him. Mindblowing! Arjun got a little overconfident when decoding the message but that say probably his princely side or his excitement for finally finding Riya. Update soon! And thanks for the pm.

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Congrats on having 100 pages on this thread!!!
Edited by iluvrainaarti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update muskan dear...
bang on wow...!!!
hayee arjun n shree ne private jet uda diya sik ka hehe..
rathod cab driver...!!
shreetu really tough to say sik as sir hmm..
pilot ne to kamal hi kr diya arjun ko gay samajhkar rofl...
Arjun really fit d cameras everywhere lol,,..
baby eagle nest grt...
sik ke bro ka nam sky rofl..
Loved d bonding btw kaka n arjun..
sik as royal guest lolz..
yr sik ka torture bs itna i imagine electric shock lolz
Sumthing happens in past btw arjun n father...
claps!!
yr
i
want
to read
every
part
so either
u
wrote
or
pm
i dnt mind
i want
to read every part..
dnt want
to
miss it
dis
update was
a real cliffhanger fr me
ek gana sik ke liye
apni
to
jaise taise kat jayegi tumhara kya hoga janabeali
rofl..
waiting fr ariya milan,.
do
continudm
very
soon
ur
addicted
n
greedy
reader
lol
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all thanks alot for the PM
the first scene was dhamekadar sik ko shock main dekhar man prasann huyi
arjun was with sik in his private jet still didnt identify arjun thats brilliant
the part with the piolet was hilarious
but the decoding was really confusing their again sik scored.
There is no barrier for arjuns anger.
Arjuns fathers love towards riya is commendable but the cold war is still on between father and son. Iam sure Next update gonna breath taking
eagerly waiting for it.
Sorry for the late comment hop u wont mind.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey girl..
Superb update.. I loved everything abt this update..
I will tell u many fav things in ur update one by one..
I know it wasnt there but i imagined arjun's entry in the place where that sicko was standing like a king of the jungle.. He must have strutted in the room like a LION(wic he is as Amit calls him)
I loved his killer smile wic he gave to that sicko..
Sicko being surrounded by my fav team...
N i did imagine Arjun circling that sicko..
Hawww Arjun knows how to fly a plane? Multitalented guy he is...
I do believe in the lines said by Riya..
The situation between Arjun n the pilot was damn hilarious...
The way Arjun told one of the plain clotted police as to not to salute him...
The way Arjun explaining Sicko everything as how he sidetracked by ETF this time was so awesome..
When Shree said that this man calls himself a high profile criminal ??!! was mast...
However, when Arjun decoded the message wrong, was crushed.. I was hoping that in this update maybe ARIYA would meet finally...
Koi nahi hai!!!! they say nah sabhar ka phal meetha hota hai..
I hope u got what u loved abt this update,, In short i loved everything...
Thanks a lott for writing such a wonderful story... Update soon...
I m greedy...!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
that was absolutely wonderful and also i did not expect such a twist in it! really hope that riya and arjun are soon reunited! please update soon! can't wait to read more! really excited! arjun and shree are super talented! sik is too clever in the FF... hoping to see him make a mistake and arjun use that to kill him! the prince in arjun is power! loved it a lot! the king's comments to sik was highly remarkable! really wonderful update... glad that to have read this FF! can't wait to read abt riya and arjun's wonderful phase of their life since they have yet to live like a proper couple loving each other... i am already anticipating the next update...
Edited by arul01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH wat a shock I thought that now Arjun would know where Riya is and
save her but you brought such a twist and turn ,
But nice one Arjun fooling sikander .Truly i was having so much fun
Now just hope Riya gets back and sikander is punished really hard
Can't wait for ur next update 👍🏼
Edited by Christeee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW! Fabulous update.
Finally Sick Sikkander is caught. Arjun's plan was brilliant. He was two steps ahead of Sikki this time. It was really foolish of him to think that the ETF won't notice the plane landing sound. Seriously an old man will order a mashroom pizza.
That conversation with that pilot was so funny. 🤣
Arjun ko plane chalana bhi ata hai. Tell me what he can't do.
Arjun's father is a true king. " Don't forget I have my son" I love this dialogue. He is very proud of his son.
Ahh this Sick Sikkander. 😡 . I wish Arjun was right.
Etf team work was really amazing.
Love the update di. So Ariya will be united in the next part. Eagerly waiting for that.
Thnks for the PM.
Congrats di for completing 100 pages.
Edited by Arieltabi - 12 years ago

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