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Nazneen

@naz_2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

i ws always a silent reader...bt i needed to comment dis 1..

u r a truely amazing writer.. 👏

waiting for ariya to be togethr..😊

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sarahjareen

@sarahjareen

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

You write beautifully...love the plot. update soon?

When you will update it?????????????????

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sana khan

@sanakhan.khan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#753

hey mastimuskaan...m new here n just read aal d parts of ur story in a 1go...n i loved it alot👏 u r such a gr8 writer... foh me its like reading a book i jst loved it..sad for roshni bt i hpe arjun will soon save riya...n there iz no ariya moments in the last part(disappoint) bt it was simply v.good...n plz add me to ur buddy list n pm me whenever u update next part😊

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50ShadesOfMe

@50ShadesOfMe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

Hey!! 😊

An awesome update again!

But no Ariya?!

Arrgghh.. This sikander.. 😡 I hate him to the core!! 😡

Acha hai next update mein marr jaayega!! 😡 Shaayad? 😕

And poor Arjun got the clues wrong?? 😭 Awww

Riya is with Sikander's bro! 😔

I loved Arjun's dad! He is fab! 😃

Im desperately waiting for the next chap!!

Ariya milan.. Hayyee!! 😳😳

And plz start mein hi milwa dena yaar!! plz! 😆

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Omg I can't believe I didn't see this till now. I gotta run to class so I'll reserve this =)

Back! I dunno if I should be upset that Arjun couldn't crack the code or laugh because I kind of though baby referred to Riya. On a side note though, after reading your update I started using code words with my sister🤣

Edited by -Ravjot- - 12 years ago

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@Wj.mad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#756

They still can't find riya.
I wish dey find her soon.
Conversation between d pilot nd arjun,sik nd arjun was nice
haha...
Im not good in commenting but
loved d update
it was (let me think)

emm

PERFECT
waiting 4 ariya milan
update soon

Edited by Wj.mad - 12 years ago

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

muskan don't get angry on me

i missed so may updates...but now im back

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Baap re so many up and down in ariya life ...

im gone kill this sikandar if i found him

...how dare he touch riya and make arjun suffer...too bad

but the flashback ...god its just hot yaar

...ariya romance Omg,,,,,,,,breath taking...

you writen it awesome...but the roshini part is so horrible...i really don't want to imagine riya in that condition...

the way arjun working hard to find his wife, his life, his riya is mind blowing

...he really love her so much ...and it shows in his action...i thought he don't love her but now i think the way he love riya no one will do...

most imp part is a prince in a cop body ...the way he talk with that fishermen is...muhaaa...

i really don't have words to describe but just fantastic ...you written in perfect and amazing

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abt the note;-

have some pity on us ,,,,,,,,,,

why are u doing this...we all are addicted to your ff...so we cant wait for long...

i don't know how to write long comments so i added some graphics hope it will make u happy

Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago

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Shru

@funkylicious

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#758

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m sry yaar if I happen to come ol through lappy I will definitely edit this today ..

P.s I have read it ages ago musku... I knw u have a knife in ur had that ur happily ready to stab me with pleasure haha...just kidding I knw ur nt as cruel as the eagle.

btw ye Arjun dumb h kya he seriously couldn't understand who the Baby was seriously I understood the second I read it 🤣

Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago

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-Rajvi-

@-Rajvi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#759

Hey!
Amazing update Muskaan...

And now that was a complete surprise package,amazing planning done by Arjun and the whole ETF team...(credit goes to u)😉

Small convo b/w Arjun and pilot cracked me up...dostana and woh bhi Arjun...lolzzz🤣

Sad that Arjun misunderstood the conversation but i don't know why i feel that Sikander is still not saying the whole truth,something behind the conversation is still missing...is it so kya??or m i thinking too much??? 😆

Please do continue soon...eagerly waiting to read more...sorry for being late
Thanks for the PM!