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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#711

wow!! kamal ki planning ki arjun ne!! but got the last clue wrong... ab sikender kya kam thi uska bro bhi aagaya

poor riya!! 😭 ariya milan in next update ☺️ excited!!!

amazing update.. but kafi short tha when compared to earlier updates 😔.. koi baat nahi!! update soon!!🤗

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athira

@shruti-love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#712

superb part

loved the way etf trapped sik plan,and the scene in plane when arjun ask pilot to take his cloths was too good,that scene really hilarious one,and that sikender i hate him so much want to torture him so much and kill him,arjun and kaka scene was good,so sad ater so much effort they didnt found riya. any ways overall it was awesome & rocking update as always ,now really cant wait for ariya meeting and its a request plss torture sikender very badly that he will never forget in this ff.

and plss update next part soon really cant for next part and pm me if you are going to pm next part.

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

OH MY GOD!! that was indeed very beautiful... I wait a lot for ur Update and ur updates justify my wait ...

So thanks...!!

And this was indeed very fantastic... Sikander couldnt be sicker than this..!!

I liked the royal manner u showed..!

And very very very very excited for the next part!!

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fasiha

@fasiha_rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#714

first thing to ur beautiful ff👏

shittt i thought arjun has cracked the code correctly😕😕😕

but sik was also smart

so all arjun's confidence gone to drain

poor pilot what did he think about arjun😆

poor arjun was surrounded by guards so he couldnt kill sik or else sik ki anthim yatra nikhal chuki thi

omggg what a condition sik has put infront of the king😭😭😭

poor father has only one choice 😭😭

either son or daughter-in law

hope arjun finds riya soon😊

and kill that sikk

last but not least loved sikander😆

usne tho saara arjun and etf plan ko fail kardhiya😆

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#715

amazing part dr...

riya line gave arjun strength that was nice ...

pilot and arjun washroom scene chance less while reading laughing like a mad...

dammit how pilot think arjun like that...

ETF act was so nice...always they are proving as ETFians...

little bit angry on u there is no ariya scene...

day by day ur making the story very interesting...

i wish shree would mixed poission in that pizza...

hw cheep that sik was... surely i am going to kill him😡😡

arjun dad was so nice...hw confident he was about her son...

👏👏 this for ur lovely update...

come soon with next part dr...

don't forget to PM...

Edited by anu91 - 12 years ago

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#716

OH MY GOD!!!! sooo close to finding Riya... idiot Sik... I want 2 kill him like Arjun... i can well imagine Chotu's state while calling Sik 'sir'!!! and Shree while delivering pizza!!! and Rathode's while Sik was blabbering... and his highness' when Sik said the last line!!! welll Sik u can go to HELL cause u are NOT getting Arjun OR Riya in ANY case!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BTW u are not ending this FF with Ariya Milaap, na????

2 pages gone... 13 to go...!!

Hey i want 2 say k update soon because seeing this FF's PM i am like, "YAY FADING BUTTERFLY!!!" so i can't wait!!!

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#717

Muskaan,

u r seriously amazing

Wo last waali dhamki mast hian...i was actually ROFLing after reading dat

Mujhko PM karogi na????😉

Awesum thi wo dhamki...👏

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Coming to chapter

...i loved sikander n arjun ki Convo

OMG dat was very Cool

Arjun n Pilot...kya dostana tha 🤣 🤣

I was thinking throughout y cant sikander for 1ce cudnt gues it was ETF

Loved Mr rawte d King ki entry

n arjun ka anger...Oh GOSH awesum

Ria n arjun gonna meet soon...woho

Super excited to know how will dey meet

Continue soon Muskaan

n do PM me ...😉

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#718

Oh my god!!!!!

That was totally awesome dude!!!!! I mean that was epic!!!!

I just loved the way Arjun talked to Sikandar!!!! God I could just imagine the conversation!

The funny part in this was the way Arjun eyed the pilot. Good!!!! I was laughing out loud on that part!!

it could have been a part of Dostana 2!! LOl😆😆

Loved the part where Sikandar said, "Don't forget I have your daughter in law!"

and then Arjun's Dad said, "Don't forget I have my son!".

That part was just grawsome!!! (great+awesome)

Oh I can't wait for the next update!!! Oh and I really want some Ariya moments!!!! Please please put as much ariya moments as you can in the next one and make it a long one!!!

Please

Update soon!!!

😊

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angelicdeepti

@angelicdeepti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#719

oh my goodness...what a threat...u really known how to make the readers comment on ur ff...wow...

ur story line has been quite an innovative one...u hav really portrayed the emotional upheaval of riya, arjun & the other charecters...best was arjuns & riya...really got to learn a lot from u ,as a writer...u hav written in such a manner that the person reading it can actually feel them...

looking forward for more of ur writings