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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

nice part dear...👏

i really feel disgusting about sik and his bro

kitna thang karke rakha hai😡

and riya hope she's fine

nice work dear... it shows you have put in alot of writing and thinking efforts while drafting this tale

i am eagerly waiting for ariya milap...😳

i hope riya arjun ke pas aane ke badbhi uss se na dare...aur arjun ka love care and possessiveness towards her samaj sake...

please do update soon ...

always waiting for your update

littlebrat😆

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

Waooo dr
always awesome update...
lv to see arjun as a prince...
n the airport scence was supub dr ...remove ur dress...i m not that type of man...i m police officer...i say i m not interrested...
hahhhaaa hhhaaa hhhaass omggg that scence is totaly funyy graght job dr.
n the secret messege part was also gud...
sikander totaly changed the meening of meg...
gr8 dr maine to soncha bhi nahi ehsa ho sakta haiii,
n. the last part ...i swe i kill that sikander...truly such a bad person...
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etf plaining was supub...for caught sik...
ohhhbb finaly ariya milan . ...cant wait for next part...plz plz plz update soon
n the blady sik brother how dare he to hold riya by her hairrr
plz update soon

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Pisces_Gurl

@Pisces_Gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Yuppiiiee...
Ur update here...well ur update is worth waiting for yaar..
Bcoz its alwayz superb...
Once again great part ...the way Arjun-Sik convo was going was gr8..
I believe next update will be the best n a bang bcoz it will b Ariya milan.
Finally Riya willl be with Arjun...waiting for his apology ..
Nn plz do PM me if ur updating the next part in Pm...don't forget that m a regular reader as well as regular commentator...pleeaasshhh...

Update soon ok... 😉

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#724

Hey Muskaan!

Really loved this update. It must be really hard for Arjun to realize that he has lost once again!

And the precap is so foreboding- it looks like RIya is in danger and the king has to choose between Arjun and Riya- a hard choice indeed!

Waiting for the next one eagerly:)

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

hi muskaan🤗...u know intiaaaly i was also a silent reader...but in 4 chapter u made a boundation so made my account in if...aapne mujh jaise silent reader ko active kar diya hai i hope doosre log bhi jald hi aa jaayenge...mujhe na aapki indhamkiyon se bahut darr lagta hai kabhi kabhi...but stiill i loved ur writing today i get to know abot etf ke hidden talent...arjun pilot bann gaya n shree tooo👏👏👏👏

n arjun n the pilot scene was too funny...that sik😡...kya karoon iska har waqt arjun ko pareshaan karta hai...but proud of etf...kya trap bichaya sik ke liye n poor phas bhi gaya...ha loved arjun's prince' look...mr.rawte is also a nice person...hope they save riya soon...waiting for ariya milan part...n thax 4 the pm...update soon

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Prakrithy

@Arya1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Dhamki also now? 😛

Jokes apart...I'm quite desperately waiting for Ariya milan.

The bird, nest, eagle and baby thing was so cool. Despite the fact that it played against Arjun.
I am waiting for how Arjun is gonna find his Riya.

Eagerly awaiting your next update.

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shafa mohamed

@shaff

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Posted: 12 years ago

#727

its was a mindblowing update... i was looking forward to it... first im sorry i cdnt cmmnt before coz im little bxy these days... im thinking to take a small off frm my work... anyways i really like the way etf caught sik... i hope riya will be fine... i like the prince in arjun... aaawww so nice of arjun he really loves riya... n tht piolet wala thng is v funny... n ofcourse our dear shree's joke on sikky... n rathores punch...

so thts it for nw... plx update sooon... waiting for the nxt one...

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Khushboo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#728

Amazing update once again! You are truly an amazing writer!

Thank you so much for the PM 😊

Loved the airport scene where the pilot thought Arjun was gay and how he told the pilot to remove his clothes 😆

Arjun is super sharp to figure out where Sikander is going and loved the whole ETF team was in charge! It was sad that Arjun misunderstood the message. Loved the thrashing he got from Arjun and Rathore!

Arjun's dad and Kaka seems really nice and i like how his dad considers Riya his daughter!

Can't believe that Sikander asked for Arjun's life in return of Riya. Sikander is so ruthless.

The precap made me excited for Ariya milap ❤️

Can't wait to read the next update! 😊

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Awesome update! Loved the way Arjun planned everything. I hate Sikander... I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#730

Finally..update hogaya..kitna lamba intezaar kiya...nd it was worth w8ing too..
Loved the washroom convo...
Sik's msg was hard to understand..
Arjun as prince nd king's order..
That was really great..
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arjun being himself piolt..nd shree assisting him.. rathod taxi driver nd chotu- the receptionist...who had imagined so but it came true..

precap- finally riya is in front of arjun after so long... now egarly w8ing for ariya milan scene... update next part soon..

Edited by Princeess07 - 12 years ago