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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#741

heyy thx fr d pm..!!!

super duper awsum update..!!!👏👏⭐️

lvd it..!!

finally dey caught sikander..!!!

bt still riya is captive with sik's bro..!!!😭

1st flashback scene ws awsum..!!😆

bechara pilot arjun ko kya smjh rha ta..!!! dat scene ws awsum..!!🤣

lvd hw arjun plannd ol thngs n ws way ahead of sik..!!

n dat sik abhi tk riya ussi ke pass h..!!😡

lvd hw evry1 at etf is worried fr riya..!!!

waitn fr ariya to meet..!!

precap is awsum..!!!

cant wait fr d nxt part..!!!😳

continue soon..!!!

Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#742

loved it... i read the whole story today and i was like wow... i just loved it.. i really felt like bashing Arjun for behaving like this with Riya but then when i read the update where he had done so cos of his fear for her safety i felt really sorry for him... then his search for his love was dealt by u in a really nice way... i love the relationship between Rathore and Riya... just awesome yaar... i loved to hate Sik so much... now this was really good... it would have been a shock for him to find Arjun here... but i felt really bad for Arjun when he came to know tat he had miss read the msg... but now i wonder, was this Sik telling the truth or was he again lying to save his hide... hmmm but then ur precap kind of reassurein me but still i'm not cleared... i just hope Riya is not hurt yaar... cant bear it...

love the concept... and especially the way you have taken it...
now if you'v decide to give the next update in pm pls do pm me... i'd really die of suspense if i dont know what happened...
but just update yaar... there might be people away from ur pm list who check out and comment on ur updates right?? so pls do update here itself...
loved it... need it... will read it and comment too...

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#743

😭 No Ariya, Kitni zaleem ban gayi ho ab😭

Humein Tarpa tarpa ke maar rahe ho😭

Meri Riya kahan par hein????

Aur mujhe laga ki aab Ariya milan nazdheek hein, par ab yeh Sikander ka bhai kahan se a tapka😭

No Ariya, you broke my heart...

Why did you break my heart😉😭

Now lets be serious, finally Arjun has got Sikander, but yeh Sikander to bahut chalak hein, Riya ouske bhai ke paas hein, and Sikander isnt even scared...

But loved when Arjun was beating him, but Arjun control control, if he kills him how will Arjun find our Riya...

Arjun's father is very imposing, loved his character a lot

And finally you promised Ariya in your precap, now dont be too shaitan and only make Ariya meet in the end of your next update, warna katti tumse

Since update itna short tha, comment bhi short hoga😆

Ok Muskaan Dhamki Queen😆

Well waiting patiently for your next update with a red candle😆 and dreaming "ARIYA ARIYa ARIYA..."😆

I know bilkul pagal hoon mein😉

Forgot to add about the poor pilot who thought Arjun was going to rape him🤣

That was so funny, i'm still laughing thinking about that😆

I didnt know that Arjun had such orientation Muskaan😉

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago

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Scarlett kevin

@Mrs.JamesBarne

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#744

Hi di . Sorry for being a silent reader this long . But di i just love your ff a lot and lot . Everyone used to write ariya where arjun is a cop and riya is a research specialist but you are writing a totally different concept . Really love this a lot and lot . Just want ariya to meet soon . Please di forgive your little sis for her mistake and pm me from the next part . Please accept my sorry . I think u will . Love you for this a lot and lot :-)

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#745

that was such an awesome update :) loved it... very well written

their whole plan to catch sikander was just superb and very well executed...

loved the way arjun was explaining to sikander how they tricked him and how he was the one who was flying the plane and rathore was the driver of the cab...

awww how sweet shree helped arjun in flying the plane :)

arjun and that pilot's dostanna part was hilarious especially the part where arjun said take your clothes off 😆 i was literally laughing while reading that part...

the secret message was very unique...

shree is just too adorable :) love how he wanted to poison sikander's pizza... love shree's dialogue "this man calls himself a high profile criminal!? he thinks that an old man will order a mushroom pizza and no one in this world would suspect him!"

chotu as receptionist :) too cute

loved rathore's punch 😃 sikander deserved it...

ice cold water on sikander's face 😆

oh god arjun didn't crack the code correctly 😔

i absolutely hate this sikander so so much 😡 if i were arjun i would have killed him instantly...

so happy that arjun's dad stopped him from killing that idiot sikander and also how he has full confidence in arjun :)

love how mr. rawte asked sikander to tell where his daughter riya is.. he considers her as his daughter... how sweet of him :)

can't believe that idiot sikander asked for arjun's life in return of riya... he is just sick...

sikander's brother is cruel just like his sick brother... how dare he to hold poor riya by her hairs..

hope arjun finds riya soon and kill that loser sikander

precap sounds interesting

finally arjun and riya are going to meet in next part ❤️

eagerly waiting for next part

thanks for the PM :)

continue soon

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#746

wow lovely update
loved king & prince so much
like father like son amazing😛
liked arjun's tricks to catch sik
pilot scene was superb🤣
lovely team effort
of course hv 2 mention about his hidden cameras & shree's mushroom pizza😆
oops riya is not safe yet, hope she ll be

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#747

the code
omg it's totally different from what arjun thought😲
sik is so clever yaar
but he totally flopped in finding etf's disguise & in food issue😆

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#748

Muskaan:

even in the midst of such a serious update, I was rofling at the arjun-pilot MU🤣, gosh, I had to clasp my mouth to prevent myself from being heard. Arjun's plan was undoubtedly foolproof👏.. the way he tracked down sikadar by following the leads and then the disguises by the entire team ..WOW👏 ! but I have a doubt here, the coded message that sikandar had sent to his brother obviously hinted at riya's whereabouts but then, he said that it was meant for his brother himself and not riya. Umm, really😲 ? so is riya with his brother or at a different place😲 ? loved arjun and kaka convo, and His Highness, Suryakant Raute 's faith on his son's abilities. Update soon.

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Arooj Arain

@aroojarain

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#749

ohh wow.. read last two chps in one go.. pehley late ho gaye thi.. bt aftr reading dat jus want to they were simply awesome..:) lovd it.. uff arjun ka gussa.. nd wow preacap seems gud... update soon.. wait nahi hotab fr nxt part..:p