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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rajvi20

Amazing update...

Flashback scenes were fantastic...Riya comparing herself with Arjun in SUV was very hilarious...i wish she get's to know soon that if he is the Prince charming then she is no less than a princess
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Riya and Amit bonding was so cute...and Amit calling Arjun's cabin "The Lion's den" was very funny..😆

And yayyy Arjun finally caught Sikander...can't wait to read more...please update sooner...
and i m very happy that you are planing to extend it...

Thanks for the PM!



awww thansksss
yes riya may not be a princess by birth but she is surely a princess by looks and by her deeds...😳😳

yur welcome..

and thanksss again..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nakshatra92

amazing update 😉happy to see dat sik is trapped 😊

lykd riya - amit bonding
amit is so funny 😆
eagerly waitng for nxt update 😊


thanks dear...😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Amazing update. I like Riya and Amits bonding .Amit is so cute and innocent. He called Arjun lion. 😆
Poor Arjun he loves Riya a lot. But he can't say it. He wants to protect her that's why he is hurting her. And then he can't even see tears in her eyes .
That's not fair ek toh yeh cliffhanger uper se yeh precap. Hum sabki jaan logi kya di.
Love the update. Sorry for the late and short comment. Next time will give a long one.


awww dear...so nice of you...its okay...i will wait for lng reply...thanksss
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fasiha_rocks

sorry for the late comment😳😳😳

first of all thanx a lottt for two lovely parts
bechara amit ko 5 floors chadna paada poor boy😆
loved arjun's concern for riya😊😊😊
loved the flashback part a lottt
he is such a caring husband but never shows it
he cant tolerate a single tear in riya's eyes
so finally etf caught hold of sikander👏👏👏
but i have a doubt😕😕😕
how did etf reach to solapur b4 sikander???????


its okay dear...better late than never...but you are not even late...you replied and that is what counts...thanks aloottt

and your doubt will be cleared soonnn...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: littlebrat

hey muskan when can we get the new update dear

really buhat time hogaya hai na

eagerly waiting for next part

yep in 5 mins...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Sneha..

Hey!

I knw.. I knw.. I said Im not gonna comment.. but dad renewed my net pack so here I am! 😆
Coming to the update..
I dont knw which word to use now.. Awesome, Superb, flawless, Excellent etc etc saare words use kar chuki hoon mein..🤔😆
Jokes apart.. It was an wonderful update!! 😃
Aww.. Riya weeped for hours?!
Ahaan 😉 Riya at Arjun's office.. 😳
I liked the way he cared for her.. Uske akele bahar aane per kitna darr gaya tha bechara! 😔
And Arjun came to drop her till home!! Aww.. sweet.. And TG.. his words got that sparkle in her eyes bck.. 😳
Whoa!
Sikander being welcomed by Arjun! 😎
Intresting!! 😉
And he knows about Riya.. Wow!!
Eagerly waiting for the next update! 😊

aww thannks dear...i have no words to describe my feeling..i am grateful, honored, and i am speechlesss...thanks dear...i just can say that...thanks..😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago


CHAPTER NINE

Soon the whole ETF was around Sikandar, holding their guns on his head. ETF- Rathore, Shree and Chotu. They surrounded him so that he doesn't get a chance to run away.

Sik looked at them unbelievingly and then Arjun came out of a room, clapping his hands and having one of his princely smirks on.

"Welcome to my home, Sikandar!" said Arjun and gave one of his killer smiles which meant you're-going-to-be-so-dead and stood in front of him like a rock.

Seeing him so shocked and baffled, Arjun said, "what? Surprised?" he teased. "Don't be! Let me tell you how you, the one who was always two steps ahead, kept going forward and the game behind him, changed! Or to say, turned upside down!" Said Arjun and looked at him with disgust.

(Just imagine Arjun telling this to Sik as he does, by circling around him. Arjun's POV)

It was a shock for me to discover that you are going to my hometown, Solapur. And you know how? (He teased) I heard the plane landing in our conversation we had at the beach. Such an intelligent criminal and such foolish mistake?! Must hurt! (Arjun said as he showed fake pity.)

When we figured out that there was a private flight going towards my hometown, I was so scared. But then I remembered something Riya said to me. (Arjun thinks) "When a person believes himself to be the almighty, you must forgive him, but when he believes he is the Satan, you must kill him and put an end to him. Coz even if they are not, people turn out to be what they believe they are. " and that gave me strength.

Wonder why your private jet was suddenly inspected and there was a major problem with the engine of the plane? Ahh poor guy! You don't!? It was my plan!

FLASHBACK (1)

(Arjun calling the airport, and getting in there. this is not in Arjun's POV)

Arjun heard his hometown's name and knew Sik would be going towards it. He quickly dialed a number.

"Hello, Mumbai airport!" asked Arjun as he really wished Sik would not have boarded the flight.

"Yes sir, may I help you?" said the receiver.

"I am ACP Arjun Rawte. I have a real sensitive news for you, connect me to the officer in charge." Arjun said urgently.

"Yes sir!" the person said and connected the line to the senior officer's cabin.

"Hello?" said the officer.

"Hello this is ACP Arjun Rawte speaking. There is a flight going to take off for Solapur in few minutes. The person, who would board it, is a criminal. I want you to delay the flight till we reach there. And mind you! This ought to be a secret! Don't even let anybody know or else it will cost you your job!" the prince threatened.

"But sir, the flight you are taking about is scheduled to take off in 20 minutes and the people who will go in it might have been in it already! How am I supposed to stop it!?" the officer got nervous.

"Am sure you are in this post so you can think of a reason!" Arjun said and Rathore took a sharp turn.

"Sir!" said the officer and hung up.

---

ETF reached there through back gates and were dressed in the disguise of airport workers in white uniforms and cleaning staffs etc.

As they entered, Arjun saw Sikandar too disguised as an old man in long beard and mustache. He had seen his face every night in his nightmares, he could even identify his skull without skin!

The officer came and saluted them, he saluted Arjun too who was dressed as a sweeper, "do not salute!" said Arjun gritting his teeth and indicating him through eyes that they are disguised and looked out if anyone noticed but no one did.

He then asked about the details, the officer narrated, "sir, the passenger boarded the plane and we stopped him from taking off telling him that we suspect an engine failure in this plane and we need to double check it. And the old passenger (indicating towards Sik) created a fuss telling us to be responsible and that we would have checked it before and bla bla.. But we handled. Then we told him that the engine is being checked he needs to wait for 2 hours." He said in one go, "I am sorry sir, we can only make him wait for 2 hours."

"2 hours is too much. Thank you officer!" said Arjun and shook hands with him. Just then he got an idea as he saw a pilot pass by.

Arjun ran to him and looked at his dress carefully. The pilot got embarrassed as Arjun was looking at him as if checking him out.

Arjun then took him to the washroom and said, "Take off your cloths!" and took off his shirt.

The pilot looked at him wide eyed and as if he is nuts, "wh-why"

"I said take them off!" Arjun said and unbuckled his pants.

Seeing this the pilot got nervous, "lo-look, I ' I am not that type- I ' am 'sorry!" he said and tried to run away from the washroom.

Arjun saw him running and held him from the back and pinned him on the door, "I don't understand what you are blabbering about! I don't have time! Take them off!" said Arjun and left his hand that he was holding at his back.

"I don't want to!" screamed the pilot at him.

"I AM A POLICE OFFICER!" told Arjun oblivious to what he was thinking.

"I don't care. I am not interested in you!" said the pilot.

"Interested?" Arjun thought for a second and realized what was going on. "JEEZ! I am not that type either! I just need your cloths to disguise myself! Hurry."

"Oh." Understood the pilot and they exchanged cloths.

---

Arjun put the pilot's cap on his head and came out dressed as a pilot. And for safety put some makeup and fake teeth on his face. So that Sik wont guess it was Arjun even if he sees him..

Arjun went to the airport authority and told them that he was going to fly the plane. The authority gave him permission.

FLASHBACK (1) END

(Arjun's POV start again.)

My father sent me to fly-planes-and-be-a-pilot types of classes when I was young, You see knowledge and skills never go wasted. And then, I used my flying skills! (Arjun said proudly.) Guess who was the pilot of your infamous private jet! ME!!! Thanks Shree! (Arjun thanked Shree as he too assisted him in flying the plane as he was trained in it too.)

(Sik looked at him open mouthed.)

You were so oblivious to your surroundings that you dint even notice the cab driver, with whom you went to your hotel from airport, and booked a room, 2222, was none other than Rathore. (Told Arjun and Rathore winked at Sik.)

We were trying to follow you since years and you were always out of our reach but now we decided to play along and be with you, rather than being behind you.

And you know, being a prince helps a lot. I informed my local people and they were my eyes on you. Your every move since yesterday is not going missed by me. (Sik and ETF came to Solapur yesterday. Sik came to Arjun's palace a day after he reached Solapur coz he was busy planning how to execute his plans further.)

So tell me, the world famous Sikandar! Tell me you knew we heard the plane in our conversation, tell me you knew that we made your flight delay, tell me you knew I was the pilot of your plane and Rathore was the cab driver. And not only that Sikandar, tell me you knew I followed your secret message to your beloved brother! And hence, I know where Riya is. Tell me you knew all of that! (Said Arjun as he intimidated Sik by standing in front of him and looking at his eyes directly staring at him and Sik was outrageous to know that he knew about his brother. Sik was about to hit Arjun but suddenly was caught by Chotu and Shree from the back and they held him tightly.)

FLASHBACK (2)

(Sik trying to communicate with his brother.)

Sik was in his room 2222, which was already being hijacked by cameras. (Arjun was famous in putting cameras everywhere!)

Sik only knew Arjun so Shree was again disguised as a room service man to keep an eye near his room. Chotu was disguised at the reception to take his calls if he needed something.

Arjun and Rathore were viewing his activities from the control room of the hotel in which Sik's each and every move was watched.

Soon he dialed the reception's number.

"Hello sir, may I help you." Said Chotu gritting his teeth, at calling him as 'sir'.

"Yes I need a mushroom pizza delivered to my room." Said Sik.

"Okay sir!" said Chotu and signaled the hotel staff. The whole hotel was under their supervision.

Shree was called to take the pizza to his room. He so badly wanted to mix poison in it but that way they would never know where Riya is. So he resisted the urge inside and took it to his room. Sik was still dressed as the old man and Shree smiled fakely at him and Sik took the food trolley inside not letting Shree in.

Shree looked at his back as he took it in and went away.

"This man calls himself a high profile criminal!? He thinks that an old man will order a mushroom pizza and no one in this world would suspect him!? A**hole!" Shree said on his hidden microphone and Chotu smirked.

After few minutes Sik again called the reception.

"Connect me to this number!" he said and gave a number to Chotu.

He dialed and pressed the phone tap button to record it. The phone was connected and received by a male voice.

"Hello, sky." Said Sik.

"Sky speaking." Said the other one who was his brother.

"You have to take the bird to the other nest. Eagle will reach there soon. The next nest will be eagle's home. Take care, baby." saying so, he disconnected.

Arjun heard it and patted his hand on the table in happiness. He kneeled down in the god's grace and thanked him.

FLASHBACK (2) end.

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(Arjun's POV starts)

Then Shree kept an eye on you for whole day, but you just sat there waiting for today. And today you are here and here we are! (Said Arjun telling him how they trapped him.)

Take him to my special training area. (Saying so some more royal guards came and handcuffed Sik and took him to where Arjun said. It was no training area. It was a secret cell underground the palace, from where no light or anything was visible so that the prisoner kept inside may not get any hint or clue to run off.) And mind you all! (He said to the royal guards) NO one, I repeat, NO ONE will touch him, he is my baby now. (He said and smirked at Sik.)

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(Arjun's POV ends, this is in the POV of a third person.)

Arjun was so happy that he couldn't believe. He then got freshen up and changed in new set of cloths. He then first time in his life was happy to interrogate the person he hated the most, Sikandar.

He went in the underground cell of his palace that was known as the training area. The place where he was kept was only known to the people living in this palace and now, to ETF.

Arjun puts on a jug full of ice-cold water on Sik's face, Sik, who was tied on the iron chair, somewhere in Arjun's palace.

"What did you think? That you will come to my house and I won't know!" said Arjun as he slapped him hard and made his lip to bleed.

"You still don't know where your Riya is!" said Sik and expected him to be angry.

Instead of being angry, Arjun smiled, "I know." Sik looked at him shocked and Arjun continued, "You have to take the bird to the other nest. Eagle will reach there soon. The next nest will be eagle's home. Take care, baby. So here's the meaning of the secret message. 'Bird' means Riya, 'other nest' means other location, 'eagle will reach there soon', 'eagle' would be me, and that I would reach there soon. 'Eagle's home', my palace. So the message was that your brother should change Riya's location before I find out and reach there and you asked him to bring Riya here, in my palace. Maybe you planned to overtake my home and keep Riya here, so that I would never guess that my wife is in my own home! But what I don't understand is who is this baby. Your brother is grown enough to not get called as baby and you aren't married so your baby is – not possible. So tell me Sikandar! Who is this baby and when is your brother coming here!?" said Arjun and Sik laughed.

Sik laughed but stopped as his lip hurt but laughed again. Arjun looked at him like he has gone mad but Sik continued to laugh.

Rathore who saw this couldn't wait any longer, he came forth and punched him on his face. "Tell me where my sister is or else I will kill you with my bare hands!" shouted Rathore.

As his voice pierced Sik's ears he said irritated, "gosh Rathore! You are too loud on ears! Calm down!" said Sik calmly.

"You are in no position to tell me this! I will kill you!" said Rathore as he held Sik's collar.

"Easy there, guy. Your behavior may harm Riya." Said Sik in his attitude.

Hearing this Arjun came forward and slapped him again, "you can't do anything, your brother himself is bringing her here as he still thinks you would have overtook this property!"

As Sik spitted out his blood in anger he told them, "no one is coming here! You got the whole thing wrong!" he said and Arjun looked at him, " yes, 'bird' is my brother himself! 'Nest' is the location but I was referring to change HIS location. And 'eagle!' " Sik smirked, "eagle is me! Not you! Look at you, fool! I was here to meet your dad and tell them about you loosing you wife, and then his highness would have handled you. So eagle was me. I told my brother that I would be back soon. And baby," Sik laughed evilly, "is Riya. It was 'take care OF THE baby'. Coz she is my baby now." said Sik imitating how Arjun said it for him.

"BAS*ARD!! I WILL KILL YOU!!" roared Arjun and charged towards him again. Rathore stopped but Arjun pushed him away and gave furious punches to him, one on his face and other, on his stomach. Soon Chotu and the royal guards came and held Arjun away. Rathore tried to reason with him.

"I will kill him, leave me! LEAVE!" Arjun said as he tried wriggling.

"You cant, Arjun! He is important to us!" said Rathore.

"Leave me! I order you!" he said to the guards and they were about to leave him but a voice was heard from the back.

"NO!! Arjun!!" it was his highness, Suryakant Rawte! "Guards take him away, he is not in his senses."

"Yes I am not in my senses! I am going to kill him!" said Arjun as he tried hard to struggle and get out.

"Stop it, Arjun!" said Mr. Rawte.

"Dad! Leave me!" shouted Arjun.

"Arjun, come in your senses!" he said to make him see that Sik was essential so that they can get Riya back.

"You never understood me dad! Not before and Not now!" said Arjun and Mr. Rawte was hurt. It was visible in his eyes.

"Guards." one word and Arjun was taken away. His voice calling out to leave him, fading away.

---

Arjun was then taken to Mr. Rawte's room, where he was held captive till he comes. The doors were closed and the guards surrounded the room from both inside and outside so that Arjun doesn't run away, as he was so famous in doing so.

"You can't keep me here against my will!" said Arjun furiously, "I am the prince!"

"And we have orders from the king." Reasoned the oldest guard as he came in.

Arjun identified him. He was the oldest guard to whom he called asKaka when young, "Kaka."

"Yes, Arjun." He called him by his name as Arjun took birth and had grown up in front of his eyes. And being the oldest in the palace after the king, he was like an uncle to him. The old man's eyes moistened to see him like this but he had to do it for his own good.

"Kaka, I need to get out of here. That man has my Riya with him! I need to interrogate him to know where he has kept her." asked Arjun as if begging him.

"Arjun, I understand. You can interrogate him as long as you want, you are here coz you wanted to kill him! And you WERE about to kill him in anger." Said kaka.

"But!" Arjun had nothing to say. He was right. He would have killed him if the guards have not stopped him.

"I am with you! Don't worry, we will find her." said kaka and Arjun hugged him.

---

"What the hell do you want!?" asked the king from a prisoner.

Sik smiled, "is this a way to treat the royal guest?" he said indicating his state.

"Be thankful you are still alive! Or else you cannot even guess how we TREAT the guests like you!" said the king.

"Don't forget I have your daughter in law!" said Sik trying to put some sense.

"Don't forget I have my son!" said the king indicating Arjun is well capable of finding his wife.

"Having a son like him doesn't do any good." He said and was rewarded with a tight slap from him.

"Do not utter a single word for my son or my daughter (riya)" said the king furiously, "speak up what do you want to tell me where my daughter is! Tell me the bloody thing you want!" king said nearing his face.

"I want your son's life in exchange of your daughter's." said Sik and smirked.

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HAHAHA!

PRECAP:

Sik's brother stood there holding her by her hairs.

"Riya!" said Arjun under his breath.

"If you want her, leave my brother!" shouted Sik's brother.

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NOTE

Hey all...

I was late coz I was planning to post this part in PMs as I mentioned before. I am not getting enough replies..only my regular readers are replying and the views in comparison to replies, are way too much. That means I have a hell lot of silent readers. But then I decided to give a chance to them. Next part is ariya Milan part. If you guys want to read it in this thread..give me more than 15 pages of replies from this page, or else I am going to post the major part of next chapter, in PMs to ONLY CHOSEN READERS! Who would be chosen by me keeping in mind, who replied to my parts regularly and some of my dear friends..

So silent readers, please comment!

If you wanna hit like, hit it but it makes no difference till you do not comment. And a comment means "A COMMENT more than at least 5 sentences, not just a word or one sentence!"

And if I post next part in PMs, I am sorry it will be gone for those who dint get it the first time, coz I am not updating it in my blog till this ff gets over and I will not entertain the PMs asking me for it too. So comment or be ready to read the part on my blog AFTER I finish this story, which is not going to happen soon.

(NO OFFENCE) but I hope you consider this as a warning!

MUSKAAN.

Edited by MastiMuskaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yipppe me first to comment may be😃
okay first of all again hats off...
then it was all so amzing...really yara the way he was angry at tht sikander..
Aww still he dnt knw where riii is so sad...
but i hope next part will be a blast..plzz pm me..for ur next part i will be eagerly waiting
diya😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Muskan Aapi...u 'Dhamki Queen'! Achcha chodo, agar koi kissiko itna achcha ff gift de sakti hai to aisi dhamkiya bhi qubool hai! Aaahhh! Finally...that sick SIK is in Arjun's hand. That code word was really dificult 2 understand. But Arjun's plan was minnnd blowin aapi. And wo pailot ke sath washroom wala scene...mai to itna haas rahi thi ke meri ammi aake mujhe daant diya- 'Babu, pagal ki tarha akeli akeli haans kyun rahi hai?' aab tum hi bolo Aapi, mai Ammi ko bolu to kya bolu??!! Over all that was fab! Meri exms chal rahi hai aapi...pray 4 me.
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