Tales of the Heart #2 | VirMan | CH 42, PG 112

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: RICOPUNK101
Hayyee!! Zahara- I loved this very family-bonding chapter. Finally everything is allright between Dadaji-Virat- Vanshika. :) + the family photo at the end, Viren's whining and Virat wondering if he is in love with Maanvi. This is my favourite phase of the story so far.

Thanks for the PM and I'm really excited on how the story progresses. :)

-Disha

I thought it was actually cheesy but needed something to bring the family together 😆

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arhifandebi

@arhifandebi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Hey Zahara, Really Really sorry dear...... I read it yesterday but couldn't get the time to comment because of my exams...The update was short but Lovely...⭐️...Beautiful as well...👏..and everything ...loved the way the family bonded and that too after years when all accepted their faults and again the family became one...the photo session was really sweet..😳...Virat's mind is filled with the same question whether he loves Manvi...I hope he gets his answer soon...Please do continue soon like you are doing... Thank you so very much for the pm...😊

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@krystel21

Alumni

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Updated my comment on the previous page

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: -ritchelle-
Reserved! Will comment when I get back to my room!

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Zahara, I am like so amazed at the way you write. I am seriously floored. Like seriously. I can literally visualise your characters in my head, and I don't see them as Virat-Maanvi from EHMMBH. I see them as a completely different entity, and I think that's the best part.

Virat is completely confused about his feelings, and like Viren said, he's addicted to Maanvi. But when will he realise that it is love? When will he realise that she's his own personal brand of heroine? All said and done, I am waiting for the honeymoon, cause I know a lot more is going to happen! As of now, I am just smiling and blushing at Virat and his possessiveness and protectiveness towards Maanvi!

Hope all's well with you!

Cheers,

Rit

Aw, I was waiting for your reply! Now...to read it! 😎

"and I don't see them as Virat-Maanvi from EHMMBH. I see them as a completely different entity, and I think that's the best part."

^^ I think that's the best thing ANYONE has ever said. I guess at the start I didn't want to get carried away with making it too much like the show hence why I've changed the setting e.g Chandrilasia/Rishania/ just to make it seem much more original to some extent.

"Virat is completely confused about his feelings, and like Viren said, he's addicted to Maanvi. But when will he realise that it is love? When will he realise that she's his ownpersonal brand of heroine?"

Exactly! It might seem weird but he is addicted to her like he's addicted to drugs, only difference is, being addicted to Maanvi is a good thing. 😳😉

Thank you so much for the comment, really enjoyed reading it! I always have this urge to write more but have to restrict myself, after all...I have an exam in two days. 😭

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

superb update

thanks for pm me

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Disha

@.albatross.

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: ZAHARA.

I thought it was actually cheesy but needed something to bring the family together 😆

😃 I'm quite cheesy myself- but you know that's just how I am. I like typical things.

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preetipc

@preetipc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Loved the update.So all is well in the family and now Virat will feel better with his family members .A postive development for him.Waiting for their honeymoon.Hope all goes there well too and no sudden twists happen 😆.I want their honeymoon to go good which I will be dreaming. Loved the closeness between Virman during the family pic and the moments followed .Loved the update and waiting for the next update.Thanks for the pm😊

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cukky

@cukky

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

sorry for commenting late

was busy with my modals

it was amazing

loved it

cont soon

thanks 4 the pm😊

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Kirti

@kirti.taarey

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

MANVI HAVE BECOME YOUR DRUG...YOU LOVE HER...
zahara how your mind work to get these kinds of AWSOME line...
the last three part wr jus FEB...
i mean i jus cant get my mind off frm their proximity ...
hmmm i love u yr for the last part...
eagerly waitng 4 d HONEYMOON sequence ...
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