Tales of the Heart #2 | VirMan | CH 42, PG 112

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Sofia

@SweetAngels96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Omg just read all parts! Very interesting story!! Plz continue soon n pm me

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Zahara ! : )
the last two updates were awesome and esp. Chap. 30 ! :D
at start, it started with a pretty emotional sequence.. making me emotional and Loved the 2nd half.. the grandpa-ma-virat's renioun .. and then a bit of humour with capturing the perfect moment .. It deff. made me grin , haha.

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Such a faab update that was, sweet and emotional. Love how you can incorporate such emotions with the characters so effortlessly .. it's amazing !
You are doing an absolutely wonderful job at this and keep updating .. I can't seem to get enough anyways. ha.
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can't wait for their trip to London ! So exciiited ! though I can quite figure that It would be quite an emotional one with him triggering past memories, but since maanvi's there.. she will build a new beginning for virat, for them and it'll change the perspective and feel to a whole different level.

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Disha

@.albatross.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Hayyee!! Zahara- I loved this very family-bonding chapter. Finally everything is allright between Dadaji-Virat- Vanshika. :) + the family photo at the end, Viren's whining and Virat wondering if he is in love with Maanvi. This is my favourite phase of the story so far.

Thanks for the PM and I'm really excited on how the story progresses. :)

-Disha

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keerthana

@keerthu27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

wow i was just admiring your writing it was fabulous pls write the next part soon.my fav is virman photo.😳continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Hey Zahara
This start with a question and in the end question is still same
Except that he feel different 4 her and she too
Love the whole
Waiting 4 ur next update... Update Soon
Thanx 4 d pm Zahara

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Preethi

@preethis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

woww amazing part yaar... awesome...

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@krystel21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Reserved! Will comment when I get back to my room!

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Zahara, I am like so amazed at the way you write. I am seriously floored. Like seriously. I can literally visualise your characters in my head, and I don't see them as Virat-Maanvi from EHMMBH. I see them as a completely different entity, and I think that's the best part.

Virat is completely confused about his feelings, and like Viren said, he's addicted to Maanvi. But when will he realise that it is love? When will he realise that she's his own personal brand of heroine? All said and done, I am waiting for the honeymoon, cause I know a lot more is going to happen! As of now, I am just smiling and blushing at Virat and his possessiveness and protectiveness towards Maanvi!

Hope all's well with you!

Cheers,

Rit

Edited by -ritchelle- - 12 years ago

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IPKKND_Pyaar

@IPKKND_Pyaar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Wow this update was emotional.. Grandpa- grandson and mom-son reunion of sorts.. Loved it..My heart goes out to the young Virat who had to go through so much..

Virman chemistry is awesome.. Viren is very naughty..I love it..

Beautiful update..

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sarmaanvi

@sarmaanvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

hey! i love your ff! awesome one.. must say

update the nxt part soon! pls pm me! plsss

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: hilly
Zahara ! : )
the last two updates were awesome and esp. Chap. 30 ! :D
at start, it started with a pretty emotional sequence.. making me emotional and Loved the 2nd half.. the grandpa-ma-virat's renioun .. and then a bit of humour with capturing the perfect moment .. It deff. made me grin , haha.
...
Such a faab update that was, sweet and emotional. Love how you can incorporate such emotions with the characters so effortlessly .. it's amazing !
You are doing an absolutely wonderful job at this and keep updating .. I can't seem to get enough anyways. ha.
...
can't wait for their trip to London ! So exciiited ! though I can quite figure that It would be quite an emotional one with him triggering past memories, but since maanvi's there.. she will build a new beginning for virat, for them and it'll change the perspective and feel to a whole different level.

Thank you! I still find the whole emotions and characters thing difficult but I guess it will only get worse from here, depends how you look at it. Unfortunately, if my planning goes to plan (LOL) then perhaps the London trip will be cut short for a "reason" but...

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