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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

PART 3

He takes a cigarette between his lips

She squeaks

G-Phirs se!

She pulls it away and throws it

M-How dare you throw it away!

G-How dare you still smoke?

M-I hadn't smoked in front of you, I can walk, madam curie!

G-You can't walk out without apologizing

M-What????????????????? Apologies for what?????

G-For..for...irritating me

M-You irritate me more...apart from that I don't think I did anything wrong, I only apologies when I make mistake

G-I think you made mistake

M-I don't...its not a mistake as high that demands apologizing

G-Really? Then what do you think requires your high apologies [she says in a taunt tone]

M-Don't use that tone

G-eh???? Say naa what requires your high apologies...huh? Don't wanna show? Scared of police?

He is pissed off

He pushes her a bit

M-Sorry! Happy?

Geet is shocked at his behavior

She loses a bit balance

G-ehhh

He takes out his cigarette packet and empties it on her head

M-Sooorryyy

Geet is so zapped and damn furious

She pushes him with all her might, and kicks on his knee and he loses balance landing on his back

Maan is too startled to react anything

She sits on him and starts pulling his hair with all her might

She is not leaving

He throws some mud on her

Some drops splash on her face

Geet ne to saari to mitti dhul kichad jitna tha Maan ke sar ke face pe shirt pe har jagah madh dia

Baithi hui hai Maan ke upar aur maare jaa rahi hai

Crowd is gathered

Geet comes into herself seeing the crowd aur jaldi se escapes taking an auto

Ab Maan apne office pohonchta hai mitti se sanna hua, baal khade hue, shirt bahar, lutti pitti halat

All eyes in his office are stuck on him

Maan ki izzat ki to band hi baj gai

Uske upar ek ladki se pitt gaye puri janta ke beech

Geet comes home and narrates the story to mom

Mom is worried says ki

G mom-This world is big bad place for my doll. Geet you are very naive and innocent. You don't know about this world,: specially this new world where people can see and specially you don't know men. They can harm you. That boy could have harmed you. Don't pick up fights like this. I know you are very naive and meek. You can't handle this world

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Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
superb writing
liked a lot dear
continue soon
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Part 3 is here!!!!
Maan and Geet fighting like little kids...ok, maybe worse.
Maan shoves Geet and empties cig pack on her.
Geet pushes him, kicks him, pulls his hair.(ouch)
Geet's mom worried.
Although my Hindi is not good...I tried reading the sentences on the last part. (Will go get my translator).
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
M so happy dat u strtd anothr ff on maaneet.
I lov ur writngs yar.
Conti soon n plz pm me of updates.
Nplz plz conti JP in maaneet version.i cant read sum othr couple bt dat story is such i cant leave it too.evry single day i check updates n miss it like anything
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
add me to ur pm list
pm me when u update dear
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Ladki se pit gaya 🤣 loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
waiting for next part
please update soon
pm me too when u update

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

PART 4

G mom-This world is big bad place for my doll. Geet you are very naive and innocent. You don't know about this world,: specially this new world where people can see and specially you don't know men. They can harm you. That boy could have harmed you. Don't pick up fights like this. I know you are very naive and meek. You can't handle this world

Aise roz dekhte dekhte kai din guzar jaate hain

Geet thinks ki kyun jhagda rakhna...ye wo..

Roz sochke jaati hai...aaj sulaah kar legi

Par Maan ka khadus sa chehra dekh ke mann badal jaata hai

Ab baarish hui hoti hai to Geet thoda side hoke khaadi hoti hai

She snaps

G-Smoking nahiii

Maan looks at her with his full tunnel vision

M-You are the one who isn't standing at the right place

G-Don't argue with me

M-Why? Do you own this place? Tumhara naam likha hai yahan?

G-Naam to tumhara bhi nahi likha

Phir ladna chaalu

Aas paas ke log mazze le rahe hai ki lo ho gaye chalu phir

'Oye hoye uss din kaise hero ko girake uss par baith gai thi..kabhi humare saath bhi aisa kar liya karo' some mawaali comment...

Bike pe baithke Geet ke side se guzarte hain

Geet ko waist se thode lift karke...guzar jaate hain

Geet is stunned

Maan jaisa bhi hai..he doesn't like eve teasing

Maan uss bande ke baal achche se apne haath mein clasp kar leta hai and pulls him off the bike

M-Kya hai bey? Huh? Khush nahi hai tu apni zindagi se? Khushi bardasht nahi ho rahi tujhe jo...iss khisiyaani billi ke peeche pada hai

Geet's jaw is dropped hearing Maan

G-Tum meri team mein ho yaa uski team mein ho?

M-Tum jis bhi team mein ho, uss team mein to main bilkul bhi nahi hoon

She clasps her fists with anger

G-AAArrrg!!!

M-Bass aa gai!

G-Kya?

G-Bus aa gai hai!

She glances at the bus and climbs it and goes

Now Maan looks at the guy

M-Pyaar chahie tha naa tujhe. aaja main tujhe pyaar karta hoon

Aaj ke baad aisa hua ki 30 din tak uss bande ko kaale chashmein pehnne pad gaye

Rose day tha to Geet ko ek rose mila tha kahin se violin school mein

She was waiting at the stop with rose

Maan as usual apna routine

Geet sochti hai maamla suljha lete hain atleast he helped her to an extent so she should say thanks

Ek bacchche ko ishaare se bulati hai chai wale ke wahan se

The bachcha runs to Maan with a rose

Boy-Saab. ye aapke liye dia hai aur saab thanks kaha hai

Maan frowns

M-Kisne dia?

Boy-Uss didi ne

Bachcha comes to Geet

Boy-Didi

She looks at him

The bachchaa has a bunch of roses

Boy-Ye aapke lie, kaha hai ki kisi aur ka gift kisi aur ko nahi dete

The also has the earlier rose

G-Jisne dia hai unse keh do...cheezon ke naye purane hone se yaa kimti yaa zyada tadaat mein hone se kuch nahi hota ...feeling is important

Bachchaa again comes to Geet.

Boy- Saab ne kaha hai, ki ...ki ye ladkiyon wala tauhfa nahi rakh sakte..par feeling samajh gaye hain

G-Unse kehdo ki ki ab zyada jhagda naa kare...dost banna chahe to bann sakte hain

Bachcha againn comes back to Geet

Boy-Saab keh rahe hain ki... thik h...aap movie chalna chahein unke saath to chal skati ho...yaa akeli bhi jaa sakti ho

Maan udhar samajh nahi paa raha is she a wild cat or a sweet blind gal...it's intriguing him

He wants to know ki hai kya cheez ye ladki

At least she isn't all over him and he kind of liked the way she jumped at him...rugby style...guts hai

He admired her when it once rained and she was feeling the rain with her eyes closed...the rain drops falling on her face...listening to the rain drops...she feeling the rain on her skin...he likes how she admires the small things that people ignore even if she had or has such physical challenge

He feels...some problem are just man made or circumstantial or in our head like his and some are born with challenges yet she accepts it so gracefully

He was so involved in admiring her while she admired the rain...his heart felt like joining in her undisturbed joy that he forgot to take shelter in shade and his burning cigarette got soaked

Coming back to the present he realizes that the boy had come back to him with Geet's message

Geet had said movie nahi jaa sakti, mom won't allow...uske upar I have to visit my eye specialist Dr Batra today with mom

Ye kehke Geet nikal jaati hai

Nobody ever ..never ever rejected him

Ek to usne pehli baar ..khud se ladki se pucha

But she was so nervous...she hadn't been with any man...never dated any man

She was also actually seeing a man recently

But Maan on other hand is more intrigued than angry

Ab Geet jaati hai maa ke saath clinic

Her phone rings

Geet wonders usse kaun phone karega usse maa ke siva koi phone nahi karta


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rejected maan tho yaar... Is that cal maan'S... It would be nice to c them friendly but nicer to c them fighting...

nice update

ek aur baat mujhe pm bejo na yaar...
Edited by arthir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
arre ... Badi mushkil se dosti hui ... And now this ??
Ab kya hoga ?? Lol

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