Blind Dating (MG version) (Part30) (Pg50) - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
nice update!
but unfortunately me no read hindi :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
nice update...
are yaar koi maan ko smjaye she now just started seeing world...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Update kab de rahe ho yaar... Pm AAP kare ya na kare par hum update defo padenge... Par padenge jab tab AAP update doge...

So if u dont want to hear sorry read more stuff like this kindly UPDATE QUICKLY
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

OMG
.THIS AWESOME...I FOUND RRALLY FUNNY..AND AMAZING... THE FIGHT WAS HAHAHA SO SO AWESOME... LOVED IT...ALOT..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
add me to ur pm list dear
pm me too when u update
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

PART 5

She picks up the phone

G-Hello

'Look at your right...near the black car'

It's a male voice

She immediately recognizes who it belongs to

Geet bhauchakki si ho gai hai

Looks at her right and locates Maan standing there

G-Why are you here?

M-You are free now...we can go for a movie

G-Nahi nahi...maa hai. I have to go. Jao yahan se. Maa dekh legi

She is afraid of her mom. Geet ko bachpann se yehi sunne ko mila hai ki world outside is very dangerous, people who can see have a very different world. Most of them are cunning and malicious people and she is simple; She shouldn't interact with them much as she isn't cunning or street smart enough

Mom stressed on men specially as mom knew Geet was good looking

Geet ki maa ke saath saath uski choti behen dono milke Geet ko dabate rehte the

She seldom had any say in anything because end of the day...she was their liability

They love her too much and are protective ye ma ka point of view tha

Behen ka thoda alag hai

The sister has her own insecurities

Geet was always the far more prettier one even if she couldn't see herself

Maan witnesses maa aur Geet auto mein chad gaye

Maan call kiye ja raha hai

Geet ko sunn nahi raha

Maan ne ek to jugaad lagake Geet ka number nikalwaya ab wo phone nahi utha rahi

Geeth ne phone nahi uthaya to, Maan ne sms kiya

Par irony of the situation is Geet can't read...she only knows brail... aur Gee catn't even ask someone to read for her... ghar mein maa aur behen hain...dono hi uspe par chadh jayengi

Maan ne movie hall ka address sms kia tha

He was expecting ki wo ayegi

To ab Geet pohonchti hai wapas ghar Doctor ke wahan se wondering ye ladka peecha karte karte Dr ke paas tak pohonch gaya kaisa ajeeb hai

Geet ko to pata nahi jaana-vaana bhi hai, wo to ghar pe aaram se thi, mom ke saath describing her how the new world looks

As Maan messaged her naa ki iss jagah milna for movie to Maan to uss jagah wait kar raha hai

He is waiting ki Geet ayegi ayegi

Par Geet nahi aa rahi hai, usse to pata hi nahi

Maanl ko pasand nhi hai wait karna

Wahan Geet wo to aram se maa se gappe lada rahi hai

Maan ko bilkul pasand nahi hai wait karna, uski shaan ke khilaaf

He had thousands girls who would roll over and die for him...wo Geet ke liye wait kyun kare

Par wo kar raha hai

Coz usse lagta hai ki Geet aisi nahi hai jo jhoot types bole and...and ...agar Maan ne kaha hai to Geet ko aana chahiye; bas end of matter...uski baat to pathar ki lakeer

Movie ka show start ho gaya...intehaan ho gai intezaar ki aai naa kuch khabar mere yaar ki...ye Maan ko bhi tha yakeen Geet bewafa type ki nahi hai

Phir wajah kya hogi usko ko intezaar karane ki

To isse khayal mein dooba dheere dheere simmer ho raha tha

His anger and frustration coming on to a lovely slow boil

Show khatam ho gaya

Log nikal gaye movie se

He left after waiting for 2 hours as his dignity came his way

Aakhir Geet ne haan bhi to nahi ki thi ...order to sirf Maan ne diya

Geet ne to koi reply bhi nai kiya

Ab next day, Geet utri bus se apne time pe with her usual ' it's a beautiful day wala' expression leke

Maan wahan thunder cloud sa khada hai ciggrett phookta hua

G-Hi [She smile sin a friendly manner]. Phir ciggrett? Baad mein pii lena

Maan takes the ciggrett away but it's clear by the pile that he had smoked at least 2-3 already

M- Where were you last night? Why didn't you come?

He says holding her elbow

G-Last night????? Come where? I was with mom, who else?

M-I called you for movie, I messaged you too

G-Message????

M-Nahi aana tha to mana to kar sakti thi or you wanted to know and test me huh?

G-Which message?

Maan narrows his eyes at that question

G-What message? What are you talking about?

M- I sent you an sms telling you to come and meet me for the movie. Are you telling me that you never received it?

G-Sms???? Phone???

He pulls her elbow closer daring her to lie

G- Yeah..I heard a beep

Maan is waiting for further explanation

G-And it vibrated also

M-And you decided to ignore it? Not read it? What type of game are you trying to play?

G-Read? I can't read

She says innocently

M-Wha- you can't...? How ridiculous is that? Of course you can. Don't you have a better excuse?

G-Well...blinds can't read by seeing. I can read brail

M-oh..

He lets go of her elbow...ye to socha hi nai tha, then he looks annoyed

M- Why didn't you tell me that earlier? I would have sent you voice message then

G-You never asked. It's obvious...isn't it?

M-No it's not obvious. You need to tell that even without asking. You don't go sleep with someone and then tell them by the way I am HIV positive

G-Huh?

M-What huh? Meet me today here at 8. I don't want any more excuses

G-Huh? Why? Something important?

M- For movie, what else? You want to meet for something else?

G-Hmm..I'll ask mumma if she will give permission


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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
nice update...😊
geet being mama's girl 😆 and maan ko tho movie pe jana hai uske satha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

hehehehehe...
amazing..one...poor...maan..had to wait and wait...abh geet ki bhi galti nahi hai...love maaneet..and this update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Late hu... Mamma se permission... ESA na ho mamma ko sath me ke aye... Maan to poppat bangaya...

Nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Oh so first date coming up!
thanks for the update

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