Blind Dating (MG version) (Part30) (Pg50) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its really interesting..nice start...
loved the update..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2

M-Itne din se mujhe follow kar rahi ho

G-Kya? Main aapko follow kyun karun? Main to aapko jaanti bhi nahi. Maine aapko kabhi pehle dekha bhi nahi. Kaun hain aap?

M-Kaun hoon main????????????????????????? Main kaun hoon???????? Main kaun hooon???? Haan?

G-Haaannn. Mujhe lagta hai aap pagal hain. Khair main kisi aur se puch lungi bus ka number

M-Puch rahi hai..main kaun hoon. Huh

She ignores him

He lights another cigarette

She moves away to a distance

But he is a chimney...ek ke baad ek

G-Please do'nt smoke. It disturbs me

He raises an eyebrow in utter annoyance

M-Why? Is it your property?

G-No, it's not even yours. I request don't smoke, I have a problem

M-If you have a problem then you go somewhere else

G-I can't... because I am waiting for a bus

He comes in front of her and starts smoking

G-**cough...cough**...stop it..

Her eyes are burning...please stop..I have a medical problem

But the smoke has entered her eyes...she is feeling dizzy...her eyes are burning...she can't see anything...it's all hazy

She sits on the bus stop

He is looking at her...samajh nahi aa raha hua kya aisa...whyy is she reacting like this...smoke hi to tha...kya acting kar rahi hai to get his sympathy?

She somehow takes out her phone from her purse and calls her mom

Maa comes and escorts her

Par tab tak Maan has gone back to his office

He is back to office working, its late evening

Police enters

Police-Aapke Khilaaf Miss Geet ka complaint hai ki aapne unhe jaan bujhke harass kia when she had medical problem and also a complaint for public smoking. She said that you are responsible for her health deterioration and that would have been fatal

His jaw clenches with rising anger

But for the time being he acts skeptically and uses his contacts to lead the police to leave him

Agle din to Maan uss ladki ko mazza chakhane ke iraade se khade hai

She comes there

He locates her

M-AYE !

G-Kya aye ? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho, tumhe to jail ho jaani chahie thi

M-Naa jail to mujhe ab hogi tuhe maarne ke jurm mein chudial

G-Rakshas kahin ka...tum mein to humanity bhi nahi hai

M-Haan haan badi aayi mother Teresa! Jhuthi makkaar 420!

G-Main????? Jhuthi makkar?????? Mujhe eye problem hai

M-Kaisi problem? Sahi to dikhta hai

G-I was blind

M-Achcha aur chamatkar se ankhen aa gai

G-There is something called surgery, Einstein!

Dono chup...silent

Geet bus dekhne lag jaati hai, Maan dusri side

Both are ignoring each other's presence...both r la la la

He takes a cigarette between his lips

She squeaks

G-Phirs se!

She pulls it away and throws it


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey people...thanks for liking the part...please people do comment and refer the fic to your friends...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nitya

Diff and interesting start , waiting plz cont


Thanks a lot for liking the start dear...gear up for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu

interesting and different
Do continue


Plz continue jaded prince
Waiting for its next update


Thanks for liking the story dear...

As for Jaded Prince..I did finish the sk version of fic...u can check it out there...to be honest, I wanted to continue the MG one...but as you would have noticed that the threda is created by some other member...so even IF i update JP I cannot modify the address bar...thats such a hindrance...thats why...I hope you understand...but you can surely check out the SK version
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu

vaise u should have posted this ff on Geet forum


Point taken...posted there😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Posted next part...hope your wait was fruitful
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

koun hai aap



wowww
maan likeee


meee
chalo chadooo

hih hi hiii

really gud dear


Well...what a unique comment...total dil se...liked ur still...hope u liked my fic too...hope to see ur comment on every part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Temporary99

Wow...Jaded prince ke baad another dhamaka ff...waiting for your next bombastic updates...!!!!

Btw...i read jaded prince in sk version...did u do it in mg version too...??

Continue soon babes.

Ps:do send me 'love thy neighbour's link please...!i lost it.


Thanks a zillion for liking and appreciating both my fics...yes for JP i did have MG version...but its the same and also MG version is incomplete...thanks for such a sweet comment...hope u like the fic...

ur link for Love Thy Neighbor-

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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: keerthi90

Different from the stories i have read till now...Waiting for the next part...

Update soon dear...


Thanks for finding it different..I assure...it would be a great read for u...stay with it

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