Blind Dating (MG version) (Part30) (Pg50) - Page 6

PART 6

M- For movie, what else? You want to meet for something else?

G-Hmm..I'll ask mumma if she will give permission

M- I don't want that excuse. Tumhari mummy permission de ya na de, I don't care. You are coming. Warna msin tumhare ghar aajaunga

G-Tumhara dimaag kharab hai. Ilaaj karao

M-Yeah yeah

Maan just shrugs

M-I waited 2 hours yesterday. You have to compensate for that so you have to come no matter what

G-Maine kaha tha wait karne ko? Did I?

He bends close to her

M-Tumne mana bhi nahi kiya.. kiya tha?

G-Maine kaha tha doctor ke paas jana hai. Khair meri bus aa rahi hai

M-Aur maine uske bad tumhe messasge kiya

Maan holds her elbow before she leaves

M- I'll wait there

And then let's go of her

G-I can't be sure, depends on mom and control your smoking...bye

Chad jaati hai bus mein

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Shaam ko Maan to 1 poora pack phook deta hai waiting for Geet that day lekin part time he is angry part time he is worried ki kuch ho to nahi gaya raste mein; why didn't she come but mostly he is angry

Geet ko maa se permission mili nahi aur maa ne bitha liya Geet ko film dekhne

Geet wahin so gai

Geet ka cell tha uske room mien takiye ke neeche islie suna bhi nahi

Geet phone uthaye naa and Maan ne aaj 3 ghante to kya 5 ghante wait kiy

Par Geet nahi aayi

He is incensed

Maan ne kuch nhai khaya na usse khana hai

Geet aaram se soke uthi...maa ne kaha khana khale

Geet ne aaram se hassi mazzaa karte hue khana khaya

Phir sab karke Maa ko good night bolke sone gai to yaad aaya...Maaannn

G-Off course he wouldn't have waited, I said pakka nahi hai jane ka

Phir bhi she thinks ek baar phone karke sorry keh deti hoon

Geet ne kiya call

He does pick up the call after few rings as his numb mind registered the ring

M-Whoizt?

G-Maan

M-Thtz me

G- Its Geet...I am sorry

She knows daant padegi

M-$!#%%##

Geet is shocked

G-Maan !!!!!!!! Don't use these words or I won't speak to you

M-f***off

Maan phone kaat deta hai

Geet calls again

Maan nahi utha raha

Geet ko bass sorry kehna tha and she wanted to explain aur Maan ko bhi sunana tha ki he dare not use such words again

Maan ne ringtone hi silent kar di

For Maan there can't be good enough excuse for what she did

She calls a few times

As he doesn't pick up, she thinks bhaad mein jaaye...maa was right about these people

Maan kaafi pii chukka hai and Geet ki saari calls bhi enjoy kar chuka hai

He feels like a jerk again ki usse koi resist nahi kar sakta and that he is all that

To socha ki abhi mil lete hain; chalo Geet ko maaf kiya

Geet let gai thi chadar odhke...adhi neend mein thi

G-Hello

M- heellloo

G-Tum?

M- unhmm main hahhaa

G-Kya? Hello?

M-Are you sorry for making me wait?

G-Yes I am

M-Good. You need to make amends therefore, yes?

G-Amends? Means?

M-Come meet me now

G-What??????

M-Come here now. Make it up to me

G-See the time

M-Come now. I don't care, come

G-Maan so jao

M-Cooommmeee

G-Good night

M-Nooowww!!!!!!!!!!!

G-Stop shouting

M-zen come

He says quietly

G-Maan ye kya bachpana hai? So jao

G- blah blah blah...yada yada come

G-Are you drunk? Did you drink?

M- Nooo

G-Where are you?

He tells her the address

G- Go home

M- Noo! You come or ...or

G-Its late, your family must be worried

M-or...u come rizt now or

G-Or what?

M-or..ahaa or I will come! Haha...zat right...I am coming over

G-Maan,you ...

He shuffles into his car

G-You shouldn't' have drunk so much. I am sorry I couldn't come, really sorry

Ge can ethear shuffling car beeping horn, door opening

G-Maaannn where are you? You are not driving!

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M-or..ahaa or I will come! Haha...zat right...I am coming over

G-Maan,you ...

He shuffles into his car

G-You shouldn't' have drunk so much. I am sorry I couldn't come, really sorry

Geet can hear shuffling car beeping horn, door opening

G-Maaan where are you? You are not driving!

M- Me come to you

G-You are not driving! Listen to me

M- of corz I am

G-Have you gone mad !!!!!!!! Maan no

M-nopty no

Maan shuts the door tries to get the seat belt par lag nahi rahi so he leaves it seatbelt ko 1- gali di

Geet to tension ke maare kya kare

G-Maaan

M- hmm? zont shout Geez. I can hear ya zust finnnee

G-Please dont drive...its not right to drink and drive. Take a cab, go home. We will meet tomorrow

M- No we meet now! I'll come and we'll meet

G-Maan, try and understand and stop the car, please

He starts the engine

G-Nooo pleaseee kuch ho jayega. You are worrying me

M-Now I need to put down phone. No talking and driving, ok? Come down and I'll come there

Geet to darr se tension se adh mari ho gai hai

She thinks Maan ka accident ho gaya to, she wont be able to forgive herself

Maan changes gears, ek baar to back

M - ooppsss. Zong direzion

Then starts laughing

Geet phone pe Maan Maaan chilla rahi hai

G-Please nooo Maan

M- What ? Shh Geet you are distracting me

G-Stop the car. Dont drive We will meet tomorrow, pakka

M-No. I drive we meet today. You lie... u make false promiz... we meet now

G-You could have driven if you weren't drunk but don't drive drunk.

M- I am absolutely-hic- not

G-Listen take a cab and go home

M-No

Maan starts counting gear

M-1 up 2 down 3 up 4 down 5 up rev down. 1 for start 2 for bump 3 for traffic 4 for highway]5 for Geet

G-Nahiii o nooo don't drive...plz slow

M- no no we meet quick

G-Nahi please...I don't want any accidents please

Maan 5^th gear par karke start kare to start hoe na gadi

grrr grrr bhat...gadi band

M-Geez car dont start at 5

G-Good. Take a cab go to your home

M-I dont wanna come all the way in 1st gear

Geet giggle ki isko yaad nhi ki gear can change

G-Fine, then you go to your home in a cab. We can meet tomorrow, pakka

M-No no I'll come in 1st gear...

G-Nooo arre

M-Mechanic can take car of rips later

He starts is baar 1 par lakar

G- Ahaa!!!

He is successful

M- Geezz its dark...I cant see

G-Head light

M-How to turn them on? Nah I don't need them. Geezz you come down ok

G-Maan please dont drive...you are are really drunk...Maaan...no, its risky...don't drive

M-But I wanna zee u now! is dark but I havta drive!!

G-Maan, when you go to sleep and then wake up in the morning...then I will be there for you; in front of you. You can see me then and there's nothing special in me to see

M- You lie

G-I don't lie...I promise

Maan starts driving 1 haath se grunting noises comes as he pushed forth on 1 gear

M- Yo brek promizez...thts lying and cheating and making me wait

G-I am sorry...I didn't mean to but mom didn't permit

M-And you don't pick phone' and you are cruel

Geet ko samajh nahi aaraha, ksise samjhaye kya kare

M-I am comin now'

G-Why are you so stubborn? Please listen to me

M-Ooopss!! [screeching noise]

G-Kya hua?????? Maan???????

M-Scratch...just a scratch

G-Are you ok???????

M- umhmmm I am finnneee

G-How did you get the scratch on your car?

Maan ulta ghumke khidke se muh bahar nikal kar

M-Kazz itzz too dark I don't know

G-Maan... pleaseee I beg you; stop the car take a cab. Please no driving

M-Why?

G-Take a cab plzzz plzzz plz listen to me plzzz

M-u diztract now I have scratch

G-Scratch where? on car? Plz I am worried for u..plz don't drive...plzzz

Maan zor se ek gaali chilata hai nd there is sound of horn blaring

G-Maan??????????????? What happened? Whats wrong??????????

Geet ki har awaaz ke saath dhadkan tez ho rahi hai

M- !$!$#!%!driving in ong direzion idiot

Doosre car wale ke liye keh raha hai

Geet knows its most probably Maan driving on wrong side of the road

G-Maan plz stop the car. Take a cab please

M-Nooo. Bunch of@$@$@$

1 -2 or car pass hoti hai

G-Maan, listen to me, take a cab stop the car now or I wont speak to you ever

M- No I wanna zee u now

G-I wont even meet you

M- I'll come up then I guess no other way

G-I wont speak to you then; never ever. Please, don't drive, pleaseee Maan please

M-zen coem and meet me

G-Don't come warna aage se pehchaanne se bhi inkaar kar dungi

He cuts the phone

Maan finally reaches her place

Par uski gaadi khatara ho chuki hai par

Geet ne socha aise hi peeke badbada raha hai

She didn't know the real Maan Singh Khurana and his conviction

Geet bhi so gai

Maan is there in front of Geet's building and he calls her again

Geet phone uthati hai

G-Hmm bolo

M- Geezz neeche aao

G-Kya????????? Neeche?????

M-hahahaa... yup neechhe...hahaa

He is laughing for some good damn reason...maybe he is happy he made it all the way there

Geet bhaagke khidki ke paas jatai hai

She is shocked

G- Tum????????? Yahan??????? Yahan kya kar rahe ho tum? Go home

M-I am here...live in flesh and blood...come down sweet

G-Why are you here? Go home right now. Yahan kar rahe ho tum? Ye mera ghar hai tumhara nahi. Tumhe apne ghar jaana hai

M- ive come zo meet u as i promizzed...now u come down or..

G-Maan ye kya zidd hai. I cant come down. Maa ghar pe hai. Mumma so rahi hai. Main aise akeli itni raat ko kaise...? Mahualle ke log kya kahenge...tum jao yahan se...kisi ne dekh liya to

Maan blows his horn

M- Even my car is calling you to come down

G-Shhh...shor mat machao...mumma jaag jayengi

M- Whyyy????? Tooo??????

G-Shhh tum samajhte kyun nahi ho? Mumma ko pata chalega to danategi...tumse kabhi milne nahi degi.. kisi mauhalle wale ne dekh liya to baatein banengi

M-Tum bhi to nai zamasti tht I need u here...with me rite now

G-Why do you need me?

M-hahaha i don know

G-Nanhe munne bachche ho? Maa ki zarurat hai?

M-na na not as mother of courz not...come down Geezzy

He tots horn again
Beep beep beep

She takes a deep breath

G-ok I will come but then you will go naa. I'll just come for 5 minutes...then you have to go, ok?

M-yezz yez i will

G-ok I am coming

Geet sneaks to see maa so rahi hai...dabbe paun chup chap climbs down the stairs of the apartment and comes down

Maan is waiting for her arms open

Geet walks to him

M- You came!!

G-Shhh

He takes her hand and turns her in circles extremely happy

She pulls him to a side

G-Guard hai! Why did you come? Why did you drink so much? Why Maan?

M-Coz I wanted to see you coz...i mizzed u

He says softly touching her cheek

M-Why didn't you meet me?

G-I said naa mom didn't give permission. It's a small thing..you shouldn't have drunk like this. Kuch ho jata to?

M-So? She said no.. you say no? You say no to her and yes to me, simple

G-How can I argue with her...she knows the best

M- No I do

He says tucking her hair behind her ear

She looks at him slightly drowning in his suckers

G-You do what

M- I don't know whatever you want me to

G-I don't want you to get drunk like this. You shouldn't get drunk, not because of me

M-Then u shunt make me wait...I smoked too

He says quite smugly

G-You are telling me as if it's an achievement

M- I'll not smoke if you come...smoke ever promiz

She just sighs

G- Go home now, your family must be waiting. Keep the car here, take a cab

M-no onz waititng no one waitz...car wont start anyway

G-hmm, tell your mechanic to repair it tomorrow. You take a cab and do call me when you reach

M-Kal milo mujhse is time no excuses

G-Kal to milenge hi naa, roz to milte hain tumhare lunch time mein

She was holding his arm to steady him

M-No kal you come...we see movie...no waiting..or i'll...i'll...i'll

G-I guess you love watching movies

He nods

M-Yes...wiz u i wnna watch..its fun ; u'll zee

G-With me? Why? Why me specially? Khair jao naa aab yahin sone ka iraada hai kya

Maan says bye bye

G-Aage jaake taxi stand hai aur suno pohonchke phone karna

He catches a cab gives her a last whirl around holding her hands aur phir khushi khushi chala jat ahai

Geet is left standing to herself

G-Pagal !

She is smiling

Bhaagke jaati hai ghar pe waiting for his call ki pohoncha ki nahi

Idhar udhar check bhi karti hai ki kisi ne dekha to nahi

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Part 8

Geet is left standing to herself

G-Pagal !

She is smiling

Bhaagke jaati hai ghar pe waiting for his call ki pohoncha ki nahi

Idhar udhar check bhi karti hai ki kisi ne dekha to nahi

Maan ka taxi wala pohoncha jagah pe

Taxi wala-Saab pohonch gaye. Saab ! Utro !

Maan utha hai and somehow he manage to get out

Salutes the driver

Taxi wala-Saab, paisa

Maan is like haan haan hold on

Right hand se reaches the left back pocket and takes out a wad of money and just gives it away without counting

laughing gaily he goes away

Taxi wala-Saab ! Sambhalke jaana

Maan kuch step chala hi hoga ki raat ke dhai baje awaaz aai

'Hey bhaiii'

His aaiyaash..colleg going bro...who was equally drunk and super brat was also coming back from his party

'Heyyy bhaiii'

He staggers to his bro...giving competition to Maan on drunkenness..with bottle in hand

Bro-Hey vrooo u zrunk????????

M-noo ofcorz not

Bro-ohhh..i zot so

He holds his big bro's shoulder

Bro- zooo late u are...wanna take a swiggg

Maan nods

M-ofcorzzz

Maan to super happy happy mode mein hai

He takes the bottle and takes not one but 3-4 laarge swigs some drops trickling form side of his mouth

Bro Maan ko pakadke chalne lagta hai main gate ki taraf

Bro-hic-

Bro bhi happily smiles as his bhai didn't look so happy ever

M-why r u zoo late? itz ur sleep time already

Bro-parrtyyy-hic- u?????

Maa balcony se dono bhaiyon ke kaarnaamein and their struggle to reach the main gate observe kar rahi hai

Maan just gives dreamy smile

M- shhh itz a sectret

Bro-shhh...wht secrer? hic

M-she came... and she was sorry!! Hahahaa...

Bro sways a little on his feet

Maan steadies him swaying himself

Bro- sheee????? who zzz

M-sheee!!! herr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bro-huh?

M-You zont know?!

Bro-nopeee

M-everyone knowzz

Bro-whoz zzz?

M-all the people zee us everyday!!!!1

Bro-ohhh ur new...gal frnd..?

Maan looks confused... ki gf ke saath to.. he has been on dates and expensive gifts given and some level of intimacy... Geet ke saath to kuch nahi tha

He shakes his head no frowning ki bhai ab tak Geet gf bani kyun nahi

Bro-no???? then????? love?????

He nudges Maan

s-Huh? no!!! zee wont be my girlfrnd... bu she'll get zere!! hahaa zee was sorry and she came to zee me

Bro-neva mind...ltz zelevrate and hv a zrinkkk!!!!!!!! cheers!!!!

s-cheerrsss!!!!!!!!!!

He says loudly chugging down more bear

'Maan !!!!!!!!!!! Rishi !!!!!!!!!!!!!'

Maa ki awaaz

Dono ko realize hi naa hua ghar ke andar pohonch gaye

s- u hoh...shhh

Bro tries to stand straight

Maan says to Rishi

s- I'll zandle her..u go

Bro-shhh..stand straight-hic-

Ma-Look at you people..just look at yourself. Maan you too...I didn't expect this from you

Maan tries to look serious and chastened but smile muhh se utar nahi rahi

Ma-Ye koi time hai ghar aane ka? That too this drunk. You should scold your brother but yooouuu. Instead of scolding him..you are doing the same

s- awww mom...-we are not zrunk juzt..celebrating...try it onze in a while u like it

Bro whispers in his ear...

Bro-Bro shhh lez go to my room-hic-..v will zelebrate...come..hold me-hic-...I'll hold u

Maan nods ki haan haan acha idea hai

s-gnite maww!!

Mom is furious with anger

Ma-Maan! Where were you entire night?

Maan Rishi ko pakad kar chal diya struggling to climb the stairs holding the railing

M- maawww G'nite!

He says frowning

Even though he may be drunk he still doesn't like being interrogated like that by his mum...

Raaste mein dad bhi bura wala frown karte hue mil jaate hain

Maan to seeti bajata hua bhai ke saath gaata hua chala jaata hai dad ko bhi g'nite aur salute karke

Bhai jaake padta hai bed pe opening a new bottle..

Bro-Cheers to ur galll-hic-

Maa udhar dad ko dekhke gives a look...ki inka kya karu main...pata lagana padega kya masla hai

Maan bhi cheers jakar flops downs next to him

Ab idhar Geet was expecting Maan phone kare phone kare...chinta ho rahi hai kya hua phone kyun nahi kiya..pohoncha ki nahi

To khud hi phone kar leti hai

Maan to bhool gaya phone ke baare mein

Maan ka poneh baja to wo bhi aadhi neendon mein tha

Jaise taise pick kiya... jab bhai ne shh shhh kiya

M- 'ellooo?

G-Maan pohonch gaye? Kahan ho?

Geet ke sawalon ki barsaat

M-Geezy meet my bro!!!!!!

De phone chipka diya bhai ke kaan par

Bro-huh???? bhai-hic zeersss

Maan chugs some beer on his bhai's mouth

G-Maaan hellooo Maaan

bro-hiii...uuu..gal...maz..my bhaii..happy..-hic..he is..happyyy...ve..happyyy...but..u..r..noz hiz..gf...no...-hic...not gooz...u..be..his gf...make..him..happe...forever...hic

G -What? Dekho Maan ko phone do, please

Bhai says ki 'mere bhai ki gf ban jao. You keep him haappy' in drunken gibberish jo unfortunately Geet ko shayad samjh naa aaye

Bhai keh kaha ke phone Maan ko wapas kar deta hai

M-zear zht!! he likz u too noww u zand me...foreva

G-Maan, have you reached home?

M-hmm home?nah.. i zesed my broz room

G-ok..That's home right. Hmm..phone nahi kiya naa tumne mujhe. See you also broke your promise. Not done

He frowns..

M-waz promiz? i not lie!!

G-Promise that you will call me I was worried, worried for you

M -zu were?!!

G-Off course I was. Is that even a question? Khair...take care of yourself

He nods

M-Good night

G-zee u 2mmorooowww

M-Yeah. Same time same place. Bye

Maan to soo gaya...snoooreee

G-Take care. Sweet dreams

Bolke muskurate hue phone rakh deti hai

Then sochti hai Maan ko jaldi utha degi coz uski car wahin padi thi, mauhaulle wale halla naa kar de

Car to start hogi nahi ab mechnic hi kuch kar sakta hai uska

Maan ne saare gear ghis diye aur jagah jagah se dent

Ab Geet sab se pehle uth ajati hai 6 baje hi

Uthte hi calls Maan

Wo to bhayankar hangover mein hai

Phone kahin se uthaya and kaan ke paas rakha

G-Maan

M-'ello?

Dheere se neendon mein. His voice heavy and with sleep

G-Maan uth jao. Maan uthooo

M- Hmm?

G-Main bol rahi hoon, Geet

Maan smiles but doesn't say anything

So gaya phir se

G-Maaan Maan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Phone thodi durrr karta hai since wo disturb a kar raha tha

G-Maan Maan Maan Maan Maan Maanll pleaseee wake uppp

Maan ko to kuch sunai nahi de raha

Par Geet ke ghar wale sun lenge wo aese hi chilati rahi to

Geet ki to halat kharab ho rahi hai ki kisi ne car dekh li, police ka jhamela ho gaya to kya kahegi wo

She again calls him ki kabhi to uthega warna wo bura wala phass jayegi

Maan grumble karta hua fir uthata hai hai

M- Whozit?

G-Geet ! Maan get up. Wake up nowww

M-Whddya want?

G-WAKE UP

M- Shhh fine.. fine

G-Please wake up naa please please please

M- hm ok. Bye

G- Nooo listen to me. Mujhse baat karo

Maan kaat deta hai phone is baar phone takiye ke neeche ki awaaz hi na aaye wapas

She calls again

She is going mad. Soch rahi hai maa hi sahi thi...these non blind people specially men arghhh

Maan ko to ab ghanti bhi nahi sunai de rhai hi is in blisss lala land

Geet call kare jaa rahi hai

Jab tak maa naa uthe yaa koi halla naa machaye tab tak time hai uske paas

Maan soye jaa raha hai until Ram Singh aa kar usse uthata hai

Maan bhaga deta hai usse bhi lekin Ram Singh is persistent like Geet

Pehle chup chap chai rakhi phir jhat se parde khole ligh kholi aur or bhag gaya

Maan ki daahaad poore ghar mei gunjti hai phir

M-RAMSINGH!!!!! u bloody#@!$R!!!!!!

Par uska phone bhi

TRINGGG

M-AAARRRGHHH!!!!

TRIIINGGG

Maan bhi ki kya hai kaun hai

Phone uthata hai snaps 'hello!'

Ek hath se pani liya pain killer muh mein daali

G-Maan

Geet to tension ke maare in verge of tears si ho gai hai

She squeaks..pareshaan bachchi

M- What? What do you want? Cant a man have decent night of sleep? What is it? What happened? Fire earthquake flood?

G-Thik se baat karo mujhse. Chillao mat. Kab se phone kar rahi hoon main

He takes a deep breathhh and gulps the whole glass of water

M-Sorry. You were saying?

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