Blind Dating (MG version) (Part30) (Pg50)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is my second MG fic after Jaded Prince...since Jaded prince got so much love from u...hence i started this fic on MG...hope to gets lots of love from u...enjoy the fic


Characters:

Geet: She is a middle class girl. She was blind from birth but has been operated recently. So she is all new to this sight world. Her family consists of her mom and her younger sis. Her younger sis is an air hostess while Geet is a violinist

Maan: He is rich hot headed arrogant entrepreneur handling the family business. He is the eldest son of his famy; which consists of his mom, dad and younger brother

Part1

Geet's family throws a party Geet ka operation successful hone ki khushi mein

There she gets to meet lot of people

But it's difficult for her to remember so many faces, just by looking

Her brain is just learning to recognize sight

Usko to saare chehre ek jaise lagte hain

She tries her best to map people through her sight but her mind would need a lot of practice

++++++++++++++++++++++++

It was a bright afternoon

Maan was in a restaurant, in a meeting

Maan, the man famous for his arrogance; jiske peeche saari ladkiyaan hain

He sees a gal abruptly come over to him {Geet}

G-Hiii. Arre Pradeep tum yahan?. Tumhara kaam kaisa chal raha hai? Nayi airlines join kar li kya?

Maan frowns hard he is like W*F

M-I don't know you

Geet realizes she has again mistaken somebody else with someone

She says sorry and goes

Maan is like, gals device so many plans to chase me

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Ab kuch aur din baad raaste pe chalte chalte

Geet suddenly comes in front of Maan

G-Arre Abhinav, tum? Tum to Japan jaane wale the naa. Laut bhi aaye?

Maan recognizes her but this time he is hell irritated by her antiques

He just ignores her and walks away

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A week goes by

Maan ko bas ek lunch time milta hai to spend with his love..cigarette

Warna to during office hrs he is very busy

He gets to smoke only during the lunch time, office se bahar aake

He is peacefully smoking near the bus top jahan chotti moti shops hain

Geet is standing there, waiting for her bus

As she was blind she couldn't read

She walks over to him

G-Excuse me, mujhe yahan jaana hai

Shows him a written chit

G-Kya ye bus wahan jayegi?

Maan narrows his eyes...this was the limit of chasing him

M-Yooouuu

Geet blinks her eyes in a confused manner

G-Huh?

M-Another plan to get close to me huh?

G-Huh?

M-Itne din se mujhe follow kar rahi ho

G-Kya? Main aapko follow kyun karun? Main to aapko jaanti bhi nahi. Maine aapko kabhi pehle dekha bhi nahi. Kaun hain aap?


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nitya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Diff and interesting start , waiting plz cont
Craziest_MG thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting and different
Do continue


Plz continue jaded prince
Waiting for its next update
Craziest_MG thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
vaise u should have posted this ff on Geet forum
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Posted: 12 years ago
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koun hai aap


wowww
maan likeee


meee
chalo chadooo

hih hi hiii

really gud dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...Jaded prince ke baad another dhamaka ff...waiting for your next bombastic updates...!!!!

Btw...i read jaded prince in sk version...did u do it in mg version too...??

Continue soon babes.

Ps:do send me 'love thy neighbour's link please...!i lost it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it ! continue soon !

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Different from the stories i have read till now...Waiting for the next part...

Update soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its very nice concept...and truly very different..
pls continye soon...
waiting for further update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yay! Another maaneet ff by you!
I'm excited!!!!!
Wow...I love this intro.
Never imagined how a person who gets sight has problems afterwards!
Waiting eagerly for more!

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