FAN FIC - Page 4

Too good as usual......
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both the parts r really very very nice. 👏

Originally posted by: tunna

wow... veyr good job sia 👏
ur writing is very veyr good.. realistic kind.. n also fimy kind 😉 seriously aisa lagta hai ki koi film chal rahi hai... 😉

thanks a lot for ur this and all other chweet responses.........

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Thanks..........thaanks.........thankxxxx a lot all of u all mehak,tunna,parvatisrikant,sadbuttrue1,sweet_mita,alvina,sid ra....and all others(sorry if forgot anyone's name!)
thanxxxxxxxxxx for reading my fan fic and regularly posting so wonderful comments.........that really encourages and helps me.......... 😃 😃

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Hey Sia....waiting for the next part and by the way what is the name of this fan faction as you have named the other fiction that you are writing as "THODA PYAAR THODI MASTI"....so was just wondering the name of this fiction..... 😃

After freshening up bhoomi arrives down….

She sees arjun is now dressed up in very simple attire….black pants and blue denim shirt………and an apron….

Arjun was placing the coffee and breakfast on the table……….Noticing bhumi….. 😃

A: (happily) array bhumi …..aao baitho….. 😃

Removing his apron and tossing it aside….he draws the chair for bhumi….she sits down…

But as she sits down she feels a slight pain in her head

B: Ouch!!

A: (concerned) bhumi…kya huwa?????

B: who kuch nahi…zara sa dard hua ….jyaada kuch nahi….

Arjun already had his hands on her forehead analyzing what would have caused the pain

Bhumi realizes that arjun was standing so near to her….she again blushed and smiled which arjun didn't notice

A: dhyaan rakho bhumi…. ye lo ab nashta karo

She saw that he had prepared some omlette and coffee for her….she was lookin at the nashta he had served

A: ahem!! Who mujhe itna hi banana aata hai….

B: (innocently) to kya aap roz yahi khate hain………subah
shaam sirf Omlette……..

A: (looks at her innocent question) ah!! Nahin nahin…..mera cook mere liye khana banata hai……..lekin who ab tak aaya nahin hai ……aaj use apne bhai ki shaadi main jana tha

B: to jab cook nahin hotaa to aap kaise manage karte hain……….

A: ahh……………well pata nahin……..aaj tak to usne chhutti nahin li…par aaj li hai sochta hoon ki office jakar kuch kha loonga……….

B: achcha..

A: waaise tum yahan akele rehti ho………..

B: nahin…main yahan apne bhaiyya ke saath rehti hoon….baba gaon main rehte hain……

A: to aapke bhaiyya kahan hai

B: who actually business ke silsilay main bahar gaye hain…..

A: Oh……….to kya business karte hain who???????????
(To make her feel at ease and comfortable he starts talking about her brother's business)

They keep chattering and in that most of the talking is done by bhumi and he keeps looking at her……..after sometime bhumi says

B: aise kya dekh rahe hain

A: waise tumhara naam bhumi nahi bhavri hona chahiye
tha

B: (surprised) Bhavri……yeh kya naam hai bhala

A: kyun achcha nahi hai

B: nahin who baat nahi hai….par………

A: to phir theek hai aaj se main tumhe bhavri hi kahoonga…and

(brings forward his hands to shake hands)

A: Friends!!

B: (looks at him and then at his hands and): theek hai (smiles and shakes hand)

B: par bhavri hi kyun….yeh naam

A: array baba tumhe dekhkar mujhe laga ki tumhaara
naam bhavri hi hona chahiye……tum itni baatein jo karti ho……

B: (narrowing her eyes) achcha main bahut baatein karti hoon aur tum….

His phone rings….he goes to pick it up……after a few moments….his cell, which he had kept in the
breakfast table, starts ringing, bhumi looks here
and there for a moment and then picks up the phone….thinking that this might be some important call……….

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Too good and I think I am the first person to respond!!!!! 😃 .....but compared to your previous parts its a bit short....... 😆

well it's short but sweet 😊 👏 👏 .carry on

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 sia its gr88888888888888888

His phone rings….he goes to pick it up……after a few moments….his cell, which he had kept in the breakfast table, starts ringing, bhumi looks here and there for a moment and then picks up the phone….thinking that this might be some important call……….

B: hello


On the other side it was mansvi……….suprised to hear a girl's voice


Mv: Hello…aap


B: main………(suddenly realizes that it is arjun's phone) aapko arjunji se koi kaam tha....

Mv: arjunji (surprised)

Thinks to herself: ye koun ladki hain jo arjun ko arjunji kehkar bulati hain……… 😕


Mv: hmm!! Main mansvi bol rahi hoon…..aur aap……..arjunji ki secretory


B: nahi nahi main unki secretory nahi hoon…

Mv: to phir….

Arjun appears and bhumi says


A: who aapka phone hai


A: (coming towards bhumi taking a apple in his hands) mera phone koun hai bhavri


Mansvi hears the name and thinks: hmm bhavri ….to yeh hai uska naam


B: koi mansvi hai


Arjun as soon as hears the name…he is stunned and drops apple suddenly from his hands and

A: mansvi bhabhi…..

Quickly takes the phone from her hand and keeps a hand on the phone so that mansvi couldn't hear their conversation…

A: tumne inse baat to nahi ki naa

B: nahi

A: ooh(relieved)

B: haan lekin inhone itna poocha tha ki main koun hoon par iske pehle ki main kuch kehti aap aagaye…………..

Arjun's expression changes from relieved to bit worried………takes the phone to ear…

A: haan bhabhi kahiye…

Mv: who tumne kal raat ko phone nahi kiya…..isiliye

A: haan bhabhi main kal raat ko thoda busy tha isiliye………..

Mv: busy….in bhavriji se koi kaam tha

A: (shocked) huh……….nahi…..woh………..bhabhi….main…..woh

Bhoomi looks at him….arjun notices this and turns away from her

Mv: nahin nahin kya….koun hai yeh ladki aur humare ghar mein kya kar rahi hai(her voice and looks are stern)

A: bhabhi aap jaise samaj rahi hai vaise kuch nahi hai…..ise chot lagi thi isiliye main ise…..(narrates the whole story)…

Mv: oh!! Ab kaisi hai……….

A: ab bilkul theek hai(looking at bhumi)

Mv: achcha arjun mama aur papa tumse baat karna chahte hain isiliye….

A: bhabhi main unse baad main baat karloonga….

Mv: pakka….bhoologe to nahi

A: nahi bhabhi 😊

Mv: theek hai…..aur us ladki ka dhyaan rakho aur use uske ghar pahuncha dena……..

A: thekk hai…………….bye bhabhi

Looking at bhumi….

B: ye tumhari…oh mera matlab aapki bhabhi hai

A: bhavri tum mujhe aap kyun kehti ho………………hum dost hai na to "tum" kaho…….. (patting her cheek) samjhi 😃

B: achcha 😊

A: haan………….ye meri bhabhi hain……….bahut achchi hai…..bilkul meri badi behen jaise……….

Bhumi smiles………..then suddenly arjun remembers

A: arre bhavri………mujhe ek important meeting par jaana hai………..main tumhe ghar chodkar ……directly chala jaonga

B: tumhe takleef karne ki koi zarrorat nahi……paas main to ghar hai mera main khud hi chali jaongi……tum office jao……..

A: nahi bhavri…..tumhe chot lagi hai………….jab tak tumhe
ghar nahi pahuncha deta mujhe chain nahi padega…………….waise bhi agar yeh important meeting na
hota to main poora din tumhare saath hi rehta........ 😳


Bhumi looks the concern in his eyes and smiles 😳

A: hmmm…kya hua tum hans kyun rahi ho………

B: nahi.kuch nahi….ab chalen tumhe der ho rahi hai na………..

A: chalo

Arjun drops bhumi home

B: arjun tum ab jao….mmain andar chali jaongi

A: nahi…main tumhe andar tak chodoonga

They are walking towards the door

B: par iski kya zaroorat hai….

Arjun keeps finger on bhumi's lips and says slowly:

A: zarroorat hai……..

Arjun puts the key in to hole and opens the door……………

They enter in her home………

A: ab tum sirf aaram karo…..smajhi koi kaam nahi……….

B: nodding her head: hmm…

A: (looks lovely at her and then kisses on her forehead ): Bye

And leaves for office…………….

Bhumi keeps staring at him………..till he disappears and slowly smiles and then the smiles transforms to blush… 😳.......then she goes inside…