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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
well very sweet ff sia.gr8 job 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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After some hours………….

Yaar yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe!! Us ladki us nakchhadi ke bare main, main itna kyun itna soch raha hoon…… 😡

STOP!!!!! arjun stop this concentrate on your work………
But he is unsuccessful in doing so

Meanwhile, bhumi cries 😭 😭 while going to her house….But once she reaches her house she thinks to herself:

Main kyun ro rahi hoon….woh bhi us idiot ke liye…nahi bhumi…kabhi nahi…lekin use to ek sabak sikhana hi hoga…………………

Then after sometime priya (bhumi's friend who lives nearby arrives to bhumi's house)

She sees bhumi tensed………

Priya: array bhumi kya hua …itni pareshan kyun lag rahi ho……….

B: (looks at her friend) who us Bandar ki wajah se….woh idiot apne aap ko samajta kya hai…..woh stupid usne mujhe………mere doggies ko,…. Uski himmat kaisi hui………..main use choddongi nahin……….i wont spare him………(saying she gets up) dekhna priya I wont spare him 😡

Priya interrupts:

B:Oho bhumi…par baat kya hai……..woh to batao………..mujhe tumhaari baton se kuch samaj nahi aa raha……..

Bhumi narrates the whole incident to priya……….and then says again: main use ek sabak sikhana chahti hoon………. 😡

Priya: oh to yeh baat hai…..par tumhara ye naya padosi hai kaun??

B: bhagwan jane……..muje use koi matlab nahi…main sirf use sabak sikhana chahti hoon

Priya: cool down bhumi………..aur kuch sochte hain

There arjun is not able to work properly because bhumi's expressions....her blushing...... and her thoughts keeps coming to him and he is irritated by it………..

Then suddenly………..arjun is startled……he sees that his window's glass pane has been broken………..

he goes up to see what has happened ………………just then he sees that someone has thrown a ball and his window panes has broken off………

he gets angry and looks up to who has done it ………although he doesn't see priya………but unfortunately he sees a glimpse of bhumi…………. and then……arjun gets down from his room to go to bhumi's house……………

Meanwhile in bhumi's house…………
B: aab us aakdoo to akal aayegi………….ki bhumika se panga lene ka matlab kya hota hai….

P: hmmm!!bechara.humne uske dono khidki ke kaanch tod diye naa…..

B: BECHARA!! 😡 koi bechara vechara nahi hai who….woh isike layak tha ….

Just then they hear the door bell ………..

Bhumi opens the door only to find arjun………..she looks at his face which is red with anger and then her gaze drops to the ball he was holding……..she suddenly thinks:

"kya isne mujhe dekh liya hoga………….to kya hua dekh liya to… main nahi darti is Bandar se………."


Priya suddenly recognizes him(arjun)……she had been to Mumbai a few days back at her sister's place in Mumbai…when she had heard about him………….her brother in law had told her about the GOENKA industries with which he(brother in law) was about sign a contract…

she suddenly recognized that the man standing before them was none other than ARJUN GOENKA!!!!!!!!! She was stunned and couldn't speak anything……..

But arjun hardly notices priya…..

B: (in a very formal tone) ji kahiye kya madat karoon main aapki………..

A: (gets even more angry and his voice is curt and cold) mera jo kaanch aapne toda hai use lagwa dijiye….. 😡

B: maine aapke kaanch ko toda(surprisingly) aap ka dimag to theek hai naa…………….main bhala aapka kanch kyun todne lagi……………

A: who to aap hi jaane………lekin aap mujhe pareshan karna chhod kyun nahi deti……….pehle to subah ko who kutta chod diya ………….aur phir mujhe kab se kaam nahi karne de rahi ho…

(he unknowingly also removes his frustration..for her thoughts that keep coming to him after that morning's incident)………………

aur ab yeh ball aur mera kaanch tod diya…..akhir tumme chahiye kya………. Mujhe akela kyun nahin chhod deti………..

She suddenly again feels as if she has heard this voice before……….but then she looks up at him

B: Oh hello Mr.. aapke paas kya sabut hai ki maine aapka kaanch toda hai……….aur aap (keeping her hands on her hips) hote kaun hai jo mujhe mere hi ghar main ye sab suna rahe hain…..

aapko tameez nahi hai ki ek ladki se baat kaisi karni chahiye……


Arjun is not able to say anything but then:

A: Maine aapko wahan se jaate huye dekha tha

B: to kya hua…. Isme meri kya galti ki mera ghar aapke adjacent main hai………..haan meri ye badnassebi(unfortunate) zaroor hai ki aap mere padosi hoon……….par kya ab main kahin aa-jaa bhi nahi sakti………….iske liye bhi aapki permission leni hogi kya??

Hmm………..aur aapne mujhe aapke ghar ke aas-paas dekha tha to iska matlab ye thodi na hai ki maine aapke ghar ke kaanch tode hain ……………is tarah kisi pe bhi ilzaam laga denge ….aap ko yeh haq kisne diya…kal ko agar priya aapke ghar ke paas je jaati hai …..aur usi waqt aapke ghar chori ho gayi to kya aap ilzaam priya pe lagayanege Huh kahiye……ajeeb zabardasti hai…………aur (rolling her eyes) batameezi bhi…..
Bhumi continues………..

All the while priya continues to stop her……….arjun's is not able to take this radio(bhumi) anymore….so he interrupts……….

A: STOP!!!!!!!!!!!STOP!!!!!!!!!!! NOT A SINGLE WORD MORE…………… 😡 😡

His voice echoes like anything and bhumi stops speaking………..then finally priya manages to take bhumi aside

B: priya kya huwa tumhe…kyun rokh rahi ho mujhe????????(irritatedly)

P: array buddhu…idiot tu jaanti bhi hai yeh kaun hai………..

B: (loudly) haan ek awwara batameez ladka………..

A: (frustrated) : achcha to tum kya ho………

Bhumi tries to go towards him to say but priya comes in between and says….

P: Who kuch nahin Mr Goenka …….wo meri friend thodi pagli hai….gusse main hai

B: (stunned) priya tum is Bandar ke liye mujhe pagli keh rahi ho……… yehi hai tumhaari dosti…..

P: placing her hand on bhumi's mouth…. Bhumi jaise tum samaj rahi ho waisa nahi hai ………..tum shayad janti nahin ke ye kaun hai………..

B: ji ……..Mr GOENKA(loudly)

Priya (confused): tum jaanti ho???????????

B: haan tune aabhi to kaha…..ye koi mr goenka hain…..

P: array yeh who Goenka industries wale Arjun goenka hain………..woh billionaire……..who………

Arjun feels a bit relieved

B: agar yeh billiaonaire hain to isme main kya karoon……….yeh honge billionaire apne ghar main……….aur aise aamir baap ke bigde huye beton ko main achchi tarah se jaanti hoon…aur agar itne hi amir hain to kaanch lagwa le aapna………yahan kyun aaye hain………apne paise ka ghamand dikhane!!!!!!!!!!OH Mr aap paise walen honge apne ghar main par yahan nahi…samjhe……….

Arjun feels a bit stunned and realizes that no girl has ever talked to him like this………..

Girls usually talk very sweetly to him obviously because of his money and his looks , girls crave for his attention …for his one look…… but this girl doesn't give least importance to his money and his looks ……he keeps staring at her

B: ab kya huwa bhut(statue) banke kyun khade ho….

A: nahi ….kuch nahi…shayad meri hi galti thi………mujhe aap par yun shak nahi karna chahiye tha………you are rite I have no proof against you so……I am sorry…………..

B: theek hai……….theek hai……..par not to repeat this mistake……samjhe……….(stands with her back facing him…… and smiling)

P: puts her hand on her forehead….

Arjun leaves from there….bhumi has a smile of victory on her face……She feels happy and closes the door… feels relieved as she had taken her revenge………

P: bhumika ye tune kya kiya….tujhe aisa nahin………….

B: chup maine jo kiya sahi kiya……..inn amir baap ke bachchon ko to aise hi sabak sikhana chahiye…samjhi and leaves from there

Priya thinks with her head nodding: isse koi nahin sudhar sakta…….

In night….. Arjun is not able to sleep he is still thinking about bhumi….her words…..the way she said it all……..no girl has talked to him like that as yet……….but she

A: she is so different…..kitni alag hai sabse……..haan thodi nakchadi hain……thodi pagli bhi hai…bahut baatein bhi karti hai……….

par phir bhi….achchi hai….suddenly he starts thinking abt how beautiful she is….thinking abt that morning's incident….how she blushed looking at him…how she was in his arms….he smiled to himself……..

Then he starts thinking abt how beautiful her hairs were…..how beautiful and innocent her eyes were….how sweet her smile was……….how….

He thinks: ❤️
Chehre per banawat ka gussa
Aankhon say chalakta pyaar bhi hai 😳
Is shauq-e-ada ko kya kahiye
Inkaar bhi hai…ikraar bhi hai… 😳 😳


Suddenly.....
A:Ye main kya sochne laga hoon us ladki ke bare main….us ladki ne meri itni insult ki phir bhi main uske bare main ye sab kyun soch raha hoon…. 😲

OMG!!! what's happening to me….. who ladki mere dimaag se nikalti kyun nahin hai…. 😲

Then his thoughts wander off and he suddenly remembers that he has heard her voice before …where….where ……………..

A: where have I heard her before…… ❓ ❓

A: YES !!!woh raat jab main nainital aaya tha tab jo mujhe mili thi ye kahi wohi to nahin….(smiles)….hmm shayad ye wohi thi……….wohi gussa…wohi akkad…

Again thinking he falls asleep………..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
gr88888888888888888! wonderfull! lovely!!!!!!
really i have no words 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24


well do you think its a bit boring....plz comment........ 😊
thanks 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#25


Oh and yes i forgot to thank for this sweet response 😊

thanks 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
it's good and very different
plz continue
can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
thanks for ur responses..........and plz if it gets too lenghty plzzz....tell....
😃 😃

Two days pass,

In this two days arjun is not able to get his mind off her….he keeps thinking abt her always and it feels as if he sees her everywhere he goes….he is quite frustrated at himself….

He is not able to understand that how can a girl affect him so much…its never happened to him before….

he has interacted with so much girls…..more beautiful than her….but still her beauty seems to be the most for arjun….he thinks……….

he has flirted wid so many girls but still never felt like this ………..as if not seeing her two days will kill him….

A: hey bhagwan ye kya ho gaya hai mujhe!!!!!!!!!
(waking up) ab to sapne main bhi peecha nahi chodti hai ye…..jahan jaata hun uska khayal aata hain……..uspar se dhyaan jaata hi nahin …. 😡 😡

It's the third day after the incident arjun is sitting in his nainital office……………..doing his work ……..then his phone rings….he picks the phone

A: Hello………….arrey bhabhi(smiles) aap 😊

Mv: ji haan main….aapko to itni bhi fursat nahi ki ghar par phone kar bata de ki aap wahan theek se pahunch gaye….

A: aisi koi baat nahi….woh main

Mv: ya phir koi mil gayi hai ki ab humari bhi yaad nahi a rahi hai

A: (a bit shocked and surprised as to how bhabhi came to know abt bhumi) 😲 nahin…nahin bhabhi…aisi koi baat nahi hai…aap galat samaj..yahaan aisa koi nahi…

Mv: array main to mazak kar rahi thi…..lekin tum aise kyun nervous ho rahe ho jaise koi chori pakdi gayi ho…..hmm kuch to baat hai varna mera devar to aisa to na tha…

A: (partially blushing) 😳 aap jaise samaj rahi aaise kuch nahi hai….koi ladki nahi hai ……….(he stops)

Mv: (surprised) lekin maine kab kaha ki koi ladki hain….(naughtily)

A: who bhabhi….who …apne hi to…..

Mv: maine maine kya arjun ….bolo maine kya……… 😃

A: (arjun hitting his hand on his head and now fully blushing) koi baat nahi bhabhi…kuch nahi….who mujhe bahut zaroori meeting ke liye jaana hai main aapse raat main baat karoonga….achcha chalo bye……….(keeps the phone)

Mv: array suno to devarji….

Koi to baat zaroor hai……varna arjun is tarah…

Shakunatala enters: Arrey mansvi tumhari arjun se baat hui

Mv: ji haan mama….lekin janab bahut busy hai(smiling) unhe toh mujhse baat karne ki bhi fursat nahi hai….

S: ye mera beta bhi naa….ek phone karne ki frusat nahi….apni maa se baat karne ki frusat nahi hai use

Mv: Oh mama…usne kaha hai ki filhal who busy hai par raat ko phone karega….tab jee bhar ke baat kar lena aap theek hai……(smiling)

S: theek hai….


Now on the same night bhumi is returning to her home……

She had taken keshav's car along with her……It was dark
and there was not a single soul to be seen on the road ….because it was night… late night and bhumi was still
in her way to reach home…. She was a bit worried...because she has never been so late for her home…..but she still drove on………..


B: hey bhagwan…..itni raat ho gayi aur main ab tak raste main hi hoon

She speeds up her car……

Meanwhile Arjun is also returning from his office…..he is damn tired after a days workand is just hoping to
catch up some sleep…..he doesn't even feel like driving…but he had no option………..

Thus then he sees a car…..he hardly recognizes bhumi or the car since he was in no mood….but suddenly he hears a sound………

THUD!!!!!!!!!!!

Bhumi on her way lost the balance in her hurry and in her thoughts………..and she hit the car on a tree……….

Arjun stopped his car immediately and got down to see what happened …He saw a car which has been hit on the tree….He immediately went and opened the door of the car ….
He saw a girl…he couldn't see her face because her face was hidden with her hair…

Arjun saw here and there and saw no one…and decided to help her himself……

Her head was hit against the steering wheel….he slowly picked up her face and was shocked to find that it was bhumii!

He was shocked looking at her and her forehead was
bleeding profusely….(since she was hit by steering wheel) …and was unconscious 😲 😲

A: Bhumi!!! 😲 😲

(patting her face…….sincerely hoping that she would
answer him and and get up ……but no she didn't answer him……)

He took her out picked her in his arms and rushed to
his car……… and then came back to her car….he saw the car was fully damaged …so he took her car keys and purse….and locked the car and then rushed to his own
car near bhumi………

He went in and quickly kept a piece of handkerchief on
her forehead and with a worried expression drove to his home………..

After reaching his home….he quickly took her out and
took her to his room and laid her on the bed and called
the Doctor………

Till the doctor reached ….arjun could not bear to see
bhumi like this………he was really worried or rather afraid that something might happen to bhumi…he thought that he didn't want to lose bhumi……….

A: nahin… bhumi ko kuch nahi ho sakta main usko kuch nahi hone doonga….. 😭

Then the doorbell rang and the doctor came and checked bhumi……..

A: Doctor what happened?? Is everything alright ….meri bhumi theek to ho jayegi naa

Suddenly he realized that he said 😳 "Meri Bhumi"
😳 then his attention shifted to what doctor was saying

D: jyaada gehri chot nahi hai…fikar karne ki zarroorat nahi hai…..

A: to doctor inhe ab tak hosh kyun nahi aaya…??

D: dariye mat…inhe subah tak hosh aa jayega….sar par
chot lagne ki wajah se ye behosh ho gayi hai………. Maine filhal bandage laga diya hai…filhaal inhe sirf aaram karne ki zarroorat hai…………..

A: thank you ..Doctor!!

Arjun leaves the doctor till the door..and rushes to be with bhumi again…Then he thinks :

A: maine "meri bhumi" kyun kaha?????

He keeps thinking for a while then looks at bhumi……..he feels like watching her continuously………he thinks…

A: kitni pyaari lagti hai……… 😳

Saying he roams his hand over her forehead and then falls asleep………. 😳

Next morning….

Bhumi wakes up………yawning…feeling a slight pain in her head…

B: Aahh!! (placing her hand on her forehead)and then getting up …..sitting she looks around to notice that ….this is not her room 😲

B: yeh to mera bed nahin hai…..mere room main to aise
koi vases nahin hai(rubbing her hand over her eyes) array yeh khidki yahan kaise yeh to……..arrey yeh to mera kamra hi nahi hai……….ye main kaha aa gayi hoon………

Just then arjun comes out of the bathroom….he just has a light green towel on himself…….he sees bhumi and happily asks 😃

A: array uth gayi tum……….

B: (looks at him) aap…….. yahaan

Then looks down to see that he is just clad in a towel……… her gaze again lifts to his face

B: is tarah …. Aap yahan(confused)..main ye………

A: (comes near) tum mere ghar mein ho…tumhe kal raat chhot lagi thi…isiliye main tumhe yahan laaya hoon………aur

B: par tum…..mera matlab aap yahan kya kar rahen hain 😕

A: (surprised) main yahan kya kar raha hoo?????? Yeh mera ghar hai……….mera kamra hai….yahan nahi rahoonga to kaha rahoonga……….

B: to kya hum kal ek hi kamre main the….saari raat…..

A: (with an "obviously" expression) haan….

B: aur main yaha ……aap bhi ………who…….. to kya hum dono ke beech kuch hua ………..(has a feared expression on her face)

Arjun gets naughty as usual and thinks of a plan…….. gets a twitched smile on his face….which bhoomi doesn't notice…

Arjun with an expression of sorry…..

A: haan bhumika……….woh kal raat ko hum dono ke (sitting
down on the bed near to her…..)beech who hua jo nahi hona chahiye tha….. 😆 😆

B: (bhoomi was on the verge of crying) aapka matlab ki
humare beech 😭

A: tum sahi soch rahi ho bhumika………(controlling his laughter) 😆

B: nahin aisa nahin ho sakta………..aisa kabhi bhi nahi ho sakta………. Aap jhooth bol rahein hai…. 😭

A: bhumika mera farz tha tumhe batana…………yakeen karna na karna tumahari marzi….lekin jo ho chukka so ho chukka…. 😆

(standing up ……….his back towards bhumi and laughing out silently) 😆 😆

A: ab hum kuch nahi kar sakte…..jo bhi hona …………..i mean nahin hona chahiye tha who to ho chukka hai…….. 😆

B: (crying) she keeps mum and doesn't say anything……
arjun turns to look back at her…and sees her
crying…..suddenly something irritates him…he is not
able to see bhumi crying….her face so low………. He comes
close.........

Suddenly bhumi runs towards the windows and starts crying loudly……

B: nahin….. hey bhagwan ab kya karoon….main kya karoon…mujhse ye kaisi galti ho gyi….ye maine kya kar diya ………..

Arjun quickly approaches her and holds her arms tightly


B: (without looking at him) chhodo mujhe….haath mat lagaoo mujhe……I SAID LEAVE ME!!!!!!!!1

A: bhumi…..bhumi(tries to turn her face towards him to face him)

But she doesn't do so…..

A: bhumi ……I SAID LOOK AT ME!!!!!!!!!1(he raised his voice)

Bhumis slowly turned to face him……….

A: (concerned) ab meri baat suno….hum dono ke beech kal kuch bhi nahi huwa……main to mazak kar raha hoon…

B: (still crying) nahin aap…jhooth …bol………… 😭
rahein….hai….muje tassalli(assurance) dene ke liye…..(still crying heavily……tears rolling down her cheeks
and she was finding it difficult to talk)

Holding her face in his hands to make her look him


A: nahin bhumi……..sach…. hum dono ke beech kuch nahi
huwa….main sach mein mazak kar raha tha………aur bhumi main tumhare saath aisa kabhi kuch nahi karoonga jis se
tumhe dukh hoga….believe me bhumi……..kal hum dono main kuch nahi huwa…..

Tumhe chot aayi thi isiliye tum poori raat behosh thi aur abhi neend khuli hai tumhaari……

(looking lovely in her eyes)

Main tumhare saath tha zarroor …….par sirf isiliye taki
agar tumhe raat main agar hosh aaye to main wahan
rahoon…..mera aur koi intention nahi tha bhumi……..

Bhumi constantly looked at him and listened all that he
had to say…..then when he stopped saying she was crying slightly…. 😭

Tears were flowing from her eyes…..Arjun stroked her
cheeks with his thumb to wipe off the tears rolling down….. 😳

A: bhumi….dont cry………..believe me……..main tumhe rote
huye nahin dekh sakta……

Bhumi sees the concern in his eyes and feels as if she is some other world……

Bhumi suddenly hugs him……….her head and hands on his
chest and starts crying again……Arjun brings his arms
around her and holds her tightly 😳

B: mere saath aisa mazak kabhi mat karna doobara……….plz……thodi der ke liye to meri jaan hi chali gayi thi………….agar aisa kuch ho gaya hota arjun to main jee nahi pati…..main to mar hi jaati…..

Hearing this arjun brings her face up to see her

A: Aee!!! Aise kabhi mat kehna…main tumhe kuch nahi
hone doonga…….(after a few seconds) waise bhi daraiya maine nahin tumne mujhe hai……… janti ho kal tumhe behosh dekh kar to meri jaan hi chali gayi thi………jaanti ho kitna darr gaya tha main………


Bhumi felt the grip of his hands tightening around her as he narrated previous night's story…….felt as if he didn't want to loose her……….felt as if he was being
possessive abt her….. bhumi suddenly feels a sense of
secureness within his arms and for that moment she thought that she never wanted to leave his arms 😳


B: yeh pal yahin rukh jaaye toh………..(to herself) 😳

Bhumi hardly listened to what he said …she only looked in his eyes and felt as if she had been lost in his eyes………

Arjun is still narrating what happened the previous
night……….when he notices bhumi looking at him and he
stops narrating and his eyes gets locked on hers………


They both forget everything and get lost in each others
eyes………….

After some moments arjun suddenly breaks off their eye contact….forcing bhumi to do so………bhumi looks down
shyly and arjun again notices her blushing……….

But bhumi is constantly blushing this time……..

A: waise (still holding her in arms) aap hanste huye bahut aachchi….nahin khoobsurat lagti hai………

Hearing this bhumi blushes even more looking at him…..and he smiles with his eyes full of love 😳 …………..she is not able to look at him anymore ….so her gaze drops down 😳 ………she realizes that he is standing so near to her
that she can even smell the soap with which he had just bathed 😳 ……….then she realizes that he was bare – chested………… 😳 ..she feels even more shy……….. but still doesn't want to get out of his arms…..

Arjun puts a finger of his below her chin to make her 😳 look up………

She looks up………and

A: tum sharmate huye aur bhi achchi lagti ho…………….

Bhumi laughs and she slowly places her head on his chest and closes her eyes and feels a sense of securness….. Arjun too closes his eyes and smiles……………

Then after few minutes they hear some screeching sound outside which wakes them both and they both look a bit
embarrassed especially bhumi…..arjun releases his arm……she doesn't like that…although she doesn't say anything…..

To lighten up the air…arjun says

Bhoomi….I think tumhe fresh ho jaana chahiye……….main tab tak tumhare liye coffee bana kar lata hoon ……….theek hai….ye washroom hai(pointing towards the washroom) …

Bhoomi nods her head lightly and arjun leaves from the room


thanks 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
Ur doing a wonderful jon 👏 👍🏼
Keep up the excellent work!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
wow... veyr good job sia 👏
ur writing is very veyr good.. realistic kind.. n also fimy kind 😉 seriously aisa lagta hai ki koi film chal rahi hai... 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
wow!!!!!!!! 👏 sia
its very nice

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