MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 57

1.Wht u like about this ff'

i like ur concept di its really awesome and superb

2. 2. Wht u donot like

i don't like her for suffering in pain which give her uncle in child jis umar me bacche khelte hai and aur isi age main use kitana dard mila hai pls di abhi toh use muskan de to pls

3. 3.Wht u want to see'

happy moment between mayur and shadi bachhe and many more

4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story' and my wirting style these days'

ur a superb writer i don't dough it,

i love ur mind because they telling u a new thing in ur ff like CSI

and u force to other feel her pain just like me

u make me cry di

My pc got crashed and the new system has just arrived ,.,..thts why there is slight delay in updates of bth ffs...
i need to install officce and all now so need a bit time ...hope so with in two days i will update

sorry for the wait

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

My pc got crashed and the new system has just arrived ,.,..thts why there is slight delay in updates of bth ffs...
i need to install officce and all now so need a bit time ...hope so with in two days i will update

sorry for the wait

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

1.Wht u like about this ff' i like d story mainly .its superb .n i like dat inspite of being a fairytale u keep it very close to reality


thanks alot..tht is wht i want the readers like the main story and imso glad tht u liked it... aww thanks alot ...close to reality is always a very big compliment 😃... .

2. 2. Wht u donot like...i like everything as u know i love such deep story ..

😊.

3. 3.Wht u want to see'sweet romance ofcourse as its a mayur story .i want mayank's family to understand d pain of nupur .if dey can accept mayank's father who willingly keep sleeping wid oder girls den y not nupur who z just a victim .

hmm... oky u will have loads of romace.. cuming up..but ya my kind of.. n i know u too like tht way not the hard way...

apni galti kisi ko nazar nhi ati dosro mein galtiya niklna is very easy.. i cant promise this now now... but

4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story' and my wirting style these days'did u change ur writing style? have not noticd .

😆 yeah tu sab se acha tha... i never picked such conpt it is written more in novel style than an ff style... less dilogues... with llanguage tht i donot use

few days ago in our city a girl was raped by her step father . your story reminded me of that :(

sss... its just...i donot even have words to say.. the moment i ws watching this girl saying this to the anchor though her face was not visible but her pain and her all dried tears were so visible... reality is real cruel n stranger than fictions

Originally posted by: Maria.

Fiza update was very emotional and it hards to write what you have written.

thanks alot MAria.. its was even harder to wirte how to write n wht to write..thnks for feeling the emotions in it

1. 1.Wht u like about this ff'its quite emotional and basis on what is going in society.

i think u will agree the best thing for a writer is if her readers feel its from the surrounding..thnks alot

2. 2. Wht u donot like

personaly i don't like to read these type of stories as i can't bear it..its hard to feel what other must have gone through in his/or her life.But you have narrated it well so i'm reading it:)

thnks for reading it... i didnt even thought ever tht i will write sumthing like tht

3. 3.Wht u want to see'

actually in this type of story i can't demand Romance
why u cant😆... initially there was romance.. n u will get whn there story will actually start

4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story' and my wirting style these days'

it's Nice:) but there is a request Fiza if you don't mind please Re-check the update before posting as there are some Spelling mistakes. you are a good writer..keep it up:)

thnks

Originally posted by: yaadien.kiran

nice update

actually i love ur writing skills

but some what i dont like these types of stories

i never and cant bear mayank and nupur like this

sorry to be frank with you dear

thanx for the pm

cont soon

thnks alot dear
thnks for liking my writings
its oky dear
i never force people to read evryone has its on limitations and thoughts abt things and it upto them wht they want to read or not... its a readers right to choice wht to read.,,.
u donot need to b sorry

when will u update fiza? pc got repaired?

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

Awesome part...

You just made cry...

Reading the brutual past of Nupur...

You are right..no one of us..could even imagine..the pain she has gone through...

This part...shook me to the core...

Finally...she got her Prince...

I wish he could be there to save her..before...

I am really looking forward...

im really sorry dear... i hate making anyone cry and thts why i sumhow delayed this part till when i can have potive side to it... like mayank being there
im glad u felt the emotions tht i have written
yes she is about to get her prince

1. 1.Wht u like about this ff'

Everything...The start...Heart-broken Mayank..when a w***e..came..and shines his life..but actually..in true senses..he shines her life...

thnks dear ...

2. 2. Wht u donot like

Mayank..being escapist..initially...rest I loved it..and also..now he is changing...

mayank is escapist ... and i made him tht so im glad u hate him being tht

cause tht is wht nupur has worked on to make him face things tht are real and more ugly than wht he has faced

3. 3.Wht u want to see'

Well...I just want see..Nupur's every dream to be fulfilled..and Mayank's family to accept her

u will se tht ..but maynks family i cant promise tht

4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story' and my wirting style these days'

Awesome..

You are making me..cry...

Goosebumps.left..in my body...

Loved it

aww thanks alot dear
im really glad tht ur enjoying this

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

when will u update fiza? pc got repaired?

yes pc got repaired ..but i havent yet got MS office... but this ff i wil try to update today but it will be abit late in night...

sorry for the wait