MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 56

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Posted: 12 years ago
1.Wht u like about this ff… i like d story mainly .its superb .n i like dat inspite of being a fairytale u keep it very close to reality .

2. 2. Wht u donot like...i like everything as u know i love such deep story .

3. 3.Wht u want to see…sweet romance ofcourse as its a mayur story .i want mayank's family to understand d pain of nupur .if dey can accept mayank's father who willingly keep sleeping wid oder girls den y not nupur who z just a victim .

4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story… and my wirting style these days…did u change ur writing style? have not noticd .


few days ago in our city a girl was raped by her step father . your story reminded me of that :(

Edited by kheya-mayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fiza update was very emotional and it hards to write what you have written.

1. 1.Wht u like about this ff…its quite emotional and basis on what is going in society.

2. 2. Wht u donot like
personaly i don't like to read these type of stories as i can't bear it..its hard to feel what other must have gone through in his/or her life.But you have narrated it well so i'm reading it:)

3. 3.Wht u want to see…

actually in this type of story i can't demand Romance

4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story… and my wirting style these days…

it's Nice:) but there is a request Fiza if you don't mind please Re-check the update before posting as there are some Spelling mistakes. you are a good writer..keep it up:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
actually i love ur writing skills
but some what i dont like these types of stories
i never and cant bear mayank and nupur like this
sorry to be frank with you dear
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part...
You just made cry...
Reading the brutual past of Nupur...

You are right..no one of us..could even imagine..the pain she has gone through...

This part...shook me to the core...

Finally...she got her Prince...
I wish he could be there to save her..before...
I am really looking forward...


1. 1.Wht u like about this ff'


Everything...The start...Heart-broken Mayank..when a w***e..came..and shines his life..but actually..in true senses..he shines her life...

2. 2. Wht u donot like


Mayank..being escapist..initially...rest I loved it..and also..now he is changing...

3. 3.Wht u want to see'


Well...I just want see..Nupur's every dream to be fulfilled..and Mayank's family to accept her

4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story' and my wirting style these days'

Awesome..

You are making me..cry...

Goosebumps.left..in my body...

Loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

1. 1.Wht u like about this ff' i think this FF is fabulous...well a lot of girls have actually undergone such a misery in thier lives and it is beyond our imagination even of the lives they lead...i feel so blessed *touchwood* at the fact that i am leading such an wonderful life...so the best part about ur FF is u addressing the problem...brave attempt fiza :)

3. 3.Wht u want to see' i am totally numb...so no preferences...

4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story' and my wirting style these days' lovely!


fabulous update Partner :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

1. 1.Wht u like about this ff…the pure relationship of the leads.

2. 2. Wht u donot like
i don't like nupur being in pain, or any girl to face such type of situation.

3. 3.Wht u want to see…

I want to see nupur happy and finding her real self and real love and want that she should never feel herself guilty as she has done nothing wrong.Society has done wrong to her.

4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story… and my writing style these days…

I love your story telling style.One more thing there are some spelling mistakes i know it is because of fast speed typing, but you can still improve.

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Posted: 12 years ago
nupur has suffered a lot. beyond of words
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
Wht u like about this ff'
it has totally a different concept

2. 2. Wht u donot like

i didnt like nupur in pain

3. 3.Wht u want to see'

mend what has been broken in nupur life

4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story' and my wirting style these days'

its kind a nice
Edited by clustersofstar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional updt fiza
feeling bad for nupur..how much she gone through in a small age
this is a realistic story ...already i told you this is first time reading a story like this..so it is hard to see nupur being in pain..i wish mayank fulfill every dream of nupur & emotional bonding between mayur...you are an amazing writer fiza...
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
past chali gayi haye achaa hua.. 😔
ab mayank ko hi meri nupur ko sambalna hoga
she suffered a lot at such a tender age 😭

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