MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: -Anila-
Awesome update API
loved it lods
Beautifully written
Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Finally the past is revealed now
God!!! i feel like killing that kamina hw cd he i mean i cud ppl caan stoop so low..disgustinggg
bt m glad that now Mayank knew everything n they had nothing unknown
n m sure now nothing really can come between then n hope for the best
loved it lods
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

i m hating ur short comments nah agar tum abhi ghar per hoti tu klitna long ata ...sigh
thnks dear.../
hana past has gonne and evry thing tht is unknow u rightly said... its now tme to write a new story with ther own hands... and hopefull they can over cum any hurdles tht iwll cum they will cum for sure..

now ur answer...i like the characteristics of this ff
i don't like all the evils in this ff
i love ur writing so no matter whc style u follow..
n i want to see Mayank's family whole heartedly accepting Nupur with her past 😊

mayank family now now it cant happen...
lol... eveil se hi tu story hai bachy.. warna good k pata kasay chalay ga...
thnks aload jani
love you aloads.. n really miss u so much

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: deepa5
1.Wht u like about this ff'
i like ur concept di its really awesome and superb
thnku so much dear im really glad u liked such concept
2. 2. Wht u donot like
i don't like her for suffering in pain which give her uncle in child jis umar me bacche khelte hai and aur isi age main use kitana dard mila hai pls di abhi toh use muskan de to pls

ab se muskaan hi muskan hai aur jo thora bht dard hai bhi woh yeah dono kam kerna aur bhola day na ek dosray k jantay hain ab
3. 3.Wht u want to see'
happy moment between mayur and shadi bachhe and many more

😆 tumhary tu daily soap ki taiyari hai
4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story' and my wirting style these days'
ur a superb writer i don't dough it,
i love ur mind because they telling u a new thing in ur ff like CSI
and u force to other feel her pain just like me
u make me cry di

as usually ur awesome

love u di

deepa

aww thnku so mcuh dear.. im really glad u liked diffrent concpts of mine thanks alot...
i hate to make u all cry but kya kero yaha i cant help it..

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

im really very sorry for the delay..CSI i will update maybe next week as after tht i want to be super quick at CSI...

have rplyed to u all
thanks for the feedback and answering my questions... thanks alot for appreciating it

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

"Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage."
? Lao Tzu

Chapter: 21

He kept her close to him as much as he can, he can only do this to make her at peace.. he isn't even sure tht she will be feeling peaceful, or does it sumwhere decreased her pain or not… he looked down to see her, she was just hugging him n was appearing fine… and tht was sumwhere not making him feel good… she did poured it out but still he didn't ….

Mayank: are u oky

Nupur: hmm….

Mayank: sure..

Nupur: she look up to him n softly pecked him… yes I am.. n than hugged him back…she took a deep breath and made herself more comfortable in his arms... they were such a peaceful place... i place where she wants to spend hr rest of life

Nupur: . I have cried too much tht moment that I donot feel like crying anymore.. its been part of me.. n I m okay with it…I have learn to live it.. its no use to be crying on it nothing changes it.. so I m fine.. but yes today I m feeling like I had let go a big burden off me… I feel light…

He moved his fingers in her hairs n smiled a bit…

Mayank: good….

she chukled at him... he is feeling it so much tht he still has lines of panic on his face... this has always made her feel he is unreal.. how can he feel her pain to such extend but than he loves her... and that is wht make her believe he does

Nupur: mr sharma u can smile more…. Im perfectly fine…

He looked at her he cant smile he just cant… he was just observing her … she was at peace…. it was like they have made her gone… it doesn't effect her anymore… he diped his head and kissed her… he want to remove everything from her mind her soul.. just wished he can…. His kiss was so soft and soothing tht she really felt as if she was just getting drown … his love was all tht she was feeling.. this was such an alien seduction of just closing ur eyes and letting him make her feel wht he does .

Mayank: kissing her forehead… so go and make sum dinner for me..

Nupur: huh… u have actually started to talk like a husband…

Mayank: pre wedding rehearsal u see… I m starving so be quick… n I will go freshen up as I have to go sumwhere after tht….

Nupur: ya u should ur stinking…

Mayank: hoo … how mean .. n tht is not the case..

She chukled…

Nupur: oki … where u have to go…

Mayank: I need to meet mom, she is already feeling like… from two three days I m missing…

Nupur; thn u must go n have dinner with her… she feel better.. she needs u mayank she is worried for u…

Mayank: I know… but u need me to n plus...sigh... I need u too…more than tht i want u

Nupur: tu I m here nah….

Mayank: acha donot argue nah… I will handle it… right now im dam hungry so u better b quick….

Nupur: oki… let me go first..

Mayank: do I have …

Nupur: no u donot have to…. But if u want to have food than u have to…

Mayank: sigh oky…. He said dramatically n both of the giggled…

…………..

He was worried about his mom reaction, he isn't sure about the fact that how she is gonna react to all this… after the fact is he is marrying a ….he didn't completed the sentence .he hates sumone calling her that yet today he knew he will have to listen this many a times.. but nothing will change anything n he is prepared for all the worse things… he is prepared to guard her even from himself

But yes he wish tht his mother atleast be with him, he really wish to have her blessings…

He knocked her room's door, n sneak in he knew his father in not here, he must be busy sumwhere..err

NM: come in… mayankk… where were u … its has been third time mayank u were not here on dinner.. its so unlike u ..

Mayank: mom I was with nupur….

NM: nupur?... donot tell me tht por***

Mayank: mom.. please…. Stop calling her tht

NM: tht will not change anything

Sigh he sat there near his mom… on floor n took her hand in his…

Mayank: I know ur worried, I know this sumthing u never thought tht I will land in, I know this is thing tht u never want me to do…. But I really love her mom, n she is not , nothing like any of those… she didn't chose this mom… wht u will call Esha, swear on me if Esha would have said tht she is guilty n want forgiveness… haven't u all given her tht…. Tell me mom..

NM: its different matter

Mayank: whts different… just because she belongs to so called respectable people n she hasn't taken it as profeesionally …. She is worse thn that.. she used me, before me sumone else… now Rahul…. She is sleeping around so many people just for her desire n wishes… just for money…. So whts the difference… tell me.. n yes there is the difference … Esha chosed it for herself.. for her conmvince to have wht she want…. She didn't .. Esha is did all the sayiing its alrigt..Nupur has never

if I would have brought a model or sumone like tht haven't u agreed…beucse in ur society she is respectable… they all are worse thn nupur .. they have chose it n they are so proudly doing it…. n wht will u call dad….

NM: mayankkk

Mayank: no mom just tell me…. Wht ur gonna call him… u just cant ignore all like tht…

NM: mayank ur so determine n u have made ur mind than wht u want from me…..

Mayank: sigh… mom I want .. really want u to meet her… I want to marry her….

NM: wht…. Are u nuts.. do u know wht will all say

Mayank: to hell with anyone… the person with whom u all were so happy to have in my life, was the worse thing happen to me… but she might be the worse person for all of u.. but she is the best thing evr happened to me….. just meet her u will get to know this…. She has nothing like pro*** in her… just meet her.. I want ur blessing at my wedding

Mayank's father: wao so the head of Sharma's is bring the slu** home as wife… I knew ur sleep..

Mayank: mind ur tongue dad… mind it… if ur sumone so cheap like tht u donot get to call everyone tht… oky

MF: ur not allowed to bring a sl** as Sharma…

Mayank: im not even asking ur permission for tht…

MF: she will be the mother of Sharma's next generation … I donot mind u to have many slu** around u.. but the share holder n member of sharma's cant be her…

Samrat who was listening to all the shouts came to the spot … not getting anything he was just looking at mayank who has always being ignorant to his dad n his words… was now in full blaze… n he was scared cause he knew pretty well tht mayank hates his father to core…

Mayank: Mr. Sharma I m not seeking ur permission…. Not at all.. I m here to take permission of my mom… I have no relationship of such with u ttht u have any rights to say anything to me…. Or to decide wht my future generations will be mothered by… N u donot get to define her as ur more lower n cheaper than her.. when we can have a father like u.. whts big deal thn…

NM: mayank

Mayank: no u cant just stop me always… he is tht… u people live in delusions..

MF: oh so ur getting tht mad…. okay if u want to marry her… than u have no connection with Shamra's

Samrat was shocked n looked at maaynk… is he nuts .. he is gonna marry her… wht the hell she is… he needs to see her… she is big gold digger.. she has done … his brother is not at all understanding anything… he is again been trapped and more n more he is getting into it…

Mayank: oh really… fine… than 2morow my lawyer will talk to u.. n he will let me have my share… I donot give a dam to u

His father knew it pretty well, if this news cums out the share market, the business all will bear the consequence of it… he cant do this… plus if mayank took his share this will be major loss of them…. As if on work criteria it happens… than mayank will get the major part.. as he has done most of the work… not samrat…

Mayank: he smirked at his father knowing excatly wht he can do ..I have inform u all .. that I m marrying nupur…. And it will be announced…. So if without making any chaos ur cuming ur welcum…. He turned to his mom… but I really wished u could understand this… I really wish..but now I wish grandma would have been here atleast she would have been happy… she would have given me a chance…

He said it really getting disappointed with this… she even didn't tried to hear him n just once meet her…. He was so looking forwards for her to meet Nupur…. She has all tht in her wht his mother n nani has always wished to see… but sigh… he need to learn this road ..they have just eachother.. but than isn't this all tht they want…

Saying so he left to his room… n samrat was in deep thought about all this… whtever mayank said to his father is big think… plus he even didn't care if his mother was agreeing on it or not… he has to meet this girl.. n try his hand to stop this disaster.. cuming up….

Mayank called gunjan and asked her to meet nupur… n start preparing for wedding, he received a big shout on the call

Gunjan: hi bro… everything is oky nah..

Mayank: ya kinda.. wht do u think will happen when I will say at home im marrying nupur

Gunjan: WHAT…. REALLY…. Are u….

Mayank: down .. down kid… ur making me deaf…

Gunja: omg omg …. I just get believe it…. Btw just d\two days before u were fighting n hating her

Mayank: I wanst hating her… I was just hating myself… n plus… do u want me to go back to tht

Gunjan: no no … nt tht angry young man look of urs not at all…but wht abt the family u talked with them..wht did they said

mayank: gunjan i really donot care wht they think abt this n all... its time now .. on nupur side it has been enough ... im tired of my family's Hippocracy on things... wht people think abt all thsi doesn't matter at all... wht we feel about all this does...

Gunjan: but I m so happy about this.. I didn't thought u will go like this so quick..haaan.. despo…

Mayank: kidooo…. the way we are going I don't want to delay all this…. So I want u to meet her n prepare for wedding…

Gunjan: im sure gonna do this 2morow for sure…. Gosh I just cant wait to be the bridesmaid… it will be perfect wedding

Mayank: bridesmaid? U… ur my side or her

Gunjan: u have loads of people to be ur side she doesn't so …. Im on her… n plus the bridesmaid get to wear the second most beautiful dress… and so in the lifetime.. I will compromise looking best just for u…

Mayank: aha… im so thankful to u for such favour… though u cant give her a tough call…

Gunjan: oh… really… just text me her address im gona meet her 2morow first thing in morning

Mayank: sure…

He lied down on his bed and thought.. he wanted to give her a family… atleast a mother… but alas he has failed at frst step…this is the beganing of the journey.. and this wht he will guard her from evry step now on... maybe it has to be this way… they will make there own family there own world, their own happiness.. away from all this right or wrong.. away from all this..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#585

lovely update yar

Edited by kheya-mayur - 12 years ago

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Humayra

@Humayra

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#586

Lovely update..
Why the hell Mrs. Sharma can't accept Nupur.. Just because of her profession ?? Did she forget that these girls are the ones who satisfy men like Mr. Sharma.. At least she should try to understand Mayank.. He is her son.. Whatever Mayank told about those high profile girls were true.. Can't she understand or she doesn't want to understand..
Wow!! What a great father is Mr. Sharma.. If he is sleeping around that's not a problem cause he is not gonna bring them home as his wife.. Doesn't he have a little bit of respect for the women.. He came to this world with the help of a woman, he has created his next generation with the help of a woman and still he thinks that woman is a thing who has been created just to satisfy his lu**!! what an irony !! And even in this situation he is only thinking about his money, business and so-called reputation.. Is he a father, actually is he a human being ??
Samrat knows his brother.. Then how can he think of ruining his marriage!!
Loved the conversation between Mayank and Gunjan and the bond they share..
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*,muuuah !!