MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 58

Originally posted by: Ria..

Lovely update
awesome

thnkus so much

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

Great !!!!!!!

thnks alot

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

fabulous update Partner :)

thnaks alot Partner...
thnks for ur lovely words
and feeling the emotions of this story thnkuuu

Originally posted by: Lenco

Lovely update

thnks

Originally posted by: Pia-

beautiful update

thnku

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

yes pc got repaired ..but i havent yet got MS office... but this ff i wil try to update today but it will be abit late in night...

sorry for the wait

soory bolke formality mat kar. . may be aj par nehi paungi. going to bed now. kal parungi. pk?

Originally posted by: ratibob007

1. 1.Wht u like about this ff'the pure relationship of the leads.

2. 2. Wht u donot like

i don't like nupur being in pain, or any girl to face such type of situation.
i m sorry for making u feel bad but than there are many things tht are around us and we just cant shut are eyes on tht...

3. 3.Wht u want to see'

I want to see nupur happy and finding her real self and real love and want that she should never feel herself guilty as she has done nothing wrong.Society has done wrong to her.

she is haoppy donot u think having mayank is all she wants ... she will have tht in her life for sure

4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story' and my writing style these days'

I love your story telling style.One more thing there are some spelling mistakes i know it is because of fast speed typing, but you can still improve.

thanks for liking it

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

soory bolke formality mat kar. . may be aj par nehi paungi. going to bed now. kal parungi. pk?

oky phir thik hai mjhy laga tu wait ker rahi hogi aur abhi bhi keray gi.,,.. but raat ko kerdo gi tu kaal aram se read kerna

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

nice update

Wht u like about this ff'

it has totally a different concept
😊 thanku...

2. 2. Wht u donot like

i didnt like nupur in pain

3. 3.Wht u want to see'

mend what has been broken in nupur life

4. 4.How to u find the new way of telling story' and my wirting style these days'

its kind a nice

abt nuprs life now its towards a more better future n stable happier mayb not extravagance yet there small little world with all the happiness

thnks for liking it😊😳

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

nupur has suffered a lot. beyond of words

yup she has but now its over ... to a larger extend

Originally posted by: gopi06

emotional updt fiza
feeling bad for nupur..how much she gone through in a small age
this is a realistic story ...already i told you this is first time reading a story like this..so it is hard to see nupur being in pain..i wish mayank fulfill every dream of nupur & emotional bonding between mayur...you are an amazing writer fiza...
thanks for the pm

sigh see thts i wht i was not to much into writing this past .. but than it was necessary too
i know... and leme be honest whn i start writng this ff..i put it on hold for almost 2 months .. i write the plot with parichey than after few months i showed the frst chapter to faria she said its perfect go for it... but even than i took almost 3 months to start it actually as i wasnt even oky wth kinda subject yet we cant close our eyes on these things... maybe sum day we can do sumthing for them ..


ur wish is my command i will deifntelly show this all from now on.,. it will be alovestory..
thnksu so much Gopi for liking my writings 😳

Originally posted by: hasiniangel

past chali gayi haye achaa hua.. 😔
ab mayank ko hi meri nupur ko sambalna hoga
she suffered a lot at such a tender age 😭

haan past gaya... it has really passed away
yes she has..but donot worry m,ayank hai nah...