SwaRon OS: Love doesnt have any counts (note-PG14) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

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The name of your OS and the last chat we had suggested it to be heavy and i was pleasantly surprised with the light start and various names Rey attributed to Swayam was a fun read, loved the bond they share and you did ample justice to Reyam friendship, but as i read further i realized you were just preparing for a more deeper pain with those light moments up front. The dual side of Sharon shown perfecto and i have always admired how Swayam could break any barriers that hold Sharon away. Loosing your first love is something we have spoken about alot and i see you are leaning on to agree with me that life does give you a second change at everything and love is no different. Soulmates ke bhare mein i don't know much to comment but i can vouch on, that someone somewhere is made just for you and its just a matter of time you find your match - i know many would think i live in a fantasy world.. but thats what my opinion is :)

Loved this OS from you and i am glad you came up with this.

few things i missed out on, loved the Rey kriya and Swayam part a lot - effortlessly could see their friendship bond.

All the best for your exams and i am sure you are doing to do great.

Sudha

Originally posted by: meevee

It was a long and descriptive OS Maddy 😭 ...I liked the concept very much...luv shuld always get a second chance and that there is sumeone surely destined for u sumwhere...that is what a soulmate is- u can find sumeone who luvs u for ur luv, ur fame or any other reason...but to find sumone who luvs u unconditionally and without expecting anything in return...selflessly...is a rarity and aaj ke zamaane mein Swayam jaise log kahan milte hain

Yaar Maddy it is ok to b a little more romantic bcoz u write feelings very objectively I feel... I mean thoda aur expressive ho sakte ho ...u hav it in u to write so...otherwise it was a fine tribute

Har baar bolti hun but phir bhi once again gud luck for ur exams

Originally posted by: pratik54000

Hey sudha i am really happy that you liked it...you know i am able to emote friendship bond better than love because till today i have only understood this emotion only...and i am glad you liked...and about second chance and first love i think i have discussed this the most with you...and sudha i have never disagreed with your views on that...but as i told you and now i am sure i dont need second chance in love because friendship is better than love...ya i know you missed out on reading the emotions and expressions in describing love...i will try my best to come up with better description next time.. and i know sudha you believe in this thing that some body is meant for you somewhere and this is not your illusion because you are living with one of live examples of that quote so chill nobody will this you are in some imaginary world...thanx for wishing luck for exams...

Originally posted by: pratik54000

its ok i can understand that...exams are important...study well and all the best for exams...i am glad you read it and liked it...

Originally posted by: marauder

<font color="#003333">Interesting piece of work with lot of scope in this story to be continued. Some really well crafted dialogues and sequences. I thoroughly enoyed reading it. The theme or the plot line which you chose for your OS was really good andd I liked the way you approached it. A fine piece of work. BTW Rey and Kriya ko jab pata chalega ki dodno saath hain to they will die of heart attack😆.

P.S - Best of luck for exams
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Originally posted by: additive_monaya

awesome os

Originally posted by: bhanumathi

ya it was amazing os .i loved it. and u beautifully written da sharon's pov and her feelings .

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007

Superb os!!, a great way to bid Sneha bye!😊

Originally posted by: tashu20

amazing os...beautifully wrotten...loved it...!!!!

thanx...for the pm😊